This is my first time writing an article. The plot of the article may jump a lot, and the progress is very fast. Please give me your advice.
The first few chapters of this article are from the first-person perspective, but because I really can't deal with the first-person perspective and don't have that talent, the later chapters are switched to the third-person perspective. Lei, a novice at writing, the plot is cliché, the characters are broken, and it is unknown whether there is a Mary Sue or not. If you don't like it, please click the red cross on the upper right to leave, and you won't be sent away if you don't like it.
This article was actually written just to challenge myself to how much abuse I can do. Therefore, the purpose of this article is to abuse as much as I can. The most basic thing is to abuse the body. As for the abuse of the heart, I don't know if I can write it.
Accept advice but refuse criticism and strong accusations.
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In addition, since I have been reading sweet articles with a lot of sugar added recently, it will make Yue Yan's children's shoes happy for a while~╰(￣▽￣)╮