——I would like to dedicate this document to the person I love most
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(Where the other shore flowers bloom)
A sad love song floats...)
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Comment on "After Amnesia [Ye Kai x Fu Hongxue]"
Hello, this is Ah Qiang.
Sorry, it took so long to place the order due to personal reasons.
Let's start with the issue of typesetting.
I personally think the big layout is very good or the z branch is also very good.
I really like this type of layout. It feels very concise and looks more interesting.
Let's start with the copywriting.
The large-scale copywriting is warm, cheerful, and easy to understand at a glance. DaDa also set up a very good setting for this article.
Amnesia.
How to put it this way, amnesia is an extremely old and bloody meme that is often used in Korean dramas and some Mary Sue novels.
Moreover, if you write this kind of meme well, you will win the world (fog). If you write it poorly, you just overestimate your capabilities.
This kind of ancient and bloody joke will test your writing skills.
Let's talk about the article.
Because I have never come across _(:з∠)_, I went out of my way to read Wenwen's comments because I believe in Little Angel of the Big One. I learned that the first chapter of the Little Angel is the ending of "The Prodigal Son of the Border Town".
Among the fans I have come into contact with, most of them follow the original work. From this point of view, I have a very appreciative attitude toward DaDa.
And the characters will not be too broken.
After all, most fan works nowadays are quite serious because they have to arrange for the protagonist to fall in love or something OOC.
The big text will attract little angels.
The feeling when reading the article is not the feeling of "Oh, this article is so good, I want to follow it!", But the feeling of "Ah... My God! When did I read so many!".
Without knowing it, I read the article and felt very comfortable.
Continue with the article.
The plot is very well designed.
It is connected with the ending of the original work and is well connected with the amnesia plot.
Let's talk about old and bloody memes.
Amnesia.
I have to say that the big amnesia plot is very well arranged! It's not that after watching it, you'll feel that it's too broken and you won't be able to accept it.
As I said before, amnesia was arranged so that Ye Kai and Fu Hongxue could be happy~
Next we talk about writing style.
The writing style of Dada is very warm and plain, and it looks so sweet that it makes people feel less stiff. Compared with some current writings, those writings are too sweet and too stiff for me.
(From my point of view) Great writing makes people willing to eat dog food without making people say "Huh! I ate this dog food!" In a slightly arrogant tone (laughing), but makes people eat dog food without knowing it.
Therefore, I am looking forward to writing a novel that will make the little angels willingly eat the glass shards in the candy_(:з∠)_.
This whole article made me really happy to read it.
Although I have said the previous sentence many times.
But important things must be said three times! Serious face
Here are some big bugs pointed out:
The beginning of the second chapter says that Xiaoxue (hahaha, bad taste) is hungry and hasn't eaten for two days and two nights. So, if he loses his memory, will he still know how long he hasn't eaten?(:з∠)_. (Or maybe he forgot everything but didn't forget to eat.) A normal person should be like: Where is this? Ah, I'm so hungry... How long has it been since I've eaten?
Since I'm not a fan, I don't know what constitutes good fan data.
However, this writing style really suits my taste!
I wish you great blessing here to harvest many little angels and become gods as soon as possible!
Ah Qiang.
[Jiuge Changpingpu & Ah Qiang]
So far I like the queen better
These two people can go to hell. I feel like what else will this younger brother do?
"Wanwan, I don't want to hurt you." Cheng Nuo sighed slightly helplessly...
This should be Ji Rui, right? ? ?
Ji Rui actually hoped that Cheng Nuo wouldn't wake up. He wanted to take Fei Wan away, Gaga
I'm so curious about the past~~~~~Like it
Alas, I just finished watching the last episode of Where Are We Going, Dad? I was a little bit abused. I accidentally saw a fan novel. I wanted to read it to change my mood. But as soon as I opened it, it became even more abusive... My poor black rice. Alas, I didn't have a good impression of someone in the first place. After reading this article, I became even more disgusted.
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
This layout is much more comfortable to read.
The author is very humble.
PS: As for the online game, I can only view it as fantasy and it's easier to accept. If the author had marked "online games" on the content tag, even if the copywriting attracted me again, I would not click on the article. After all, no matter how beautiful the article is, it would be very depressing and affect my mood if I couldn't understand it.
The road is endless, but the thoughts are endless. Alas, it was really heart-wrenching to watch the two of them. Shao Feng must work hard to find out quickly! ! !
Not bad, dear, come on, support you! But it's time for CP to come out~~~
I went to review. I can't afford to be hurt during the exam...
Comment on "After Amnesia [Ye Kai x Fu Hongxue]" Hello, this is Ah Qiang. Sorry, it took so long to place the order due to personal reasons. Let's start with the issue of typesetting. I personally think the big layout is very good or the z branch is also very good. I really like this type of layout. It feels very concise and looks more interesting. Let's start with the copywriting. The large-scale copywriting is warm, cheerful, and easy to understand at a glance. DaDa also set up a very good setting for this article. Amnesia. How to put it this way, amnesia is an extremely old and bloody meme that is often used in Korean dramas and some Mary Sue novels. Moreover, if you write this kind of meme well, you will win the world (fog). If you write it poorly, you just overestimate your capabilities. This kind of ancient and bloody joke will test your writing skills. Let's talk about the article. Because I have never come across _(:з∠)_, I went out of my way to read Wenwen's comments because I believe in Little Angel of the Big One. I learned that the first chapter of the Little Angel is the ending of "The Prodigal Son of the Border Town". Among the fans I have come into contact with, most of them follow the original work. From this point of view, I have a very appreciative attitude toward DaDa. And the characters will not be too broken. After all, most fan works nowadays are quite serious because they have to arrange for the protagonist to fall in love or something OOC. The big text will attract little angels. The feeling when reading the article is not the feeling of "Oh, this article is so good, I want to follow it!", But the feeling of "Ah... My God! When did I read so many!". Without knowing it, I read the article and felt very comfortable. Continue with the article. The plot is very well designed. It is connected with the ending of the original work and is well connected with the amnesia plot. Let's talk about old and bloody memes. Amnesia. I have to say that the big amnesia plot is very well arranged! It's not that after watching it, you'll feel that it's too broken and you won't be able to accept it. As I said before, amnesia was arranged so that Ye Kai and Fu Hongxue could be happy~ Next we talk about writing style. The writing style of Dada is very warm and plain, and it looks so sweet that it makes people feel less stiff. Compared with some current writings, those writings are too sweet and too stiff for me. (From my point of view) Great writing makes people willing to eat dog food without making people say "Huh! I ate this dog food!" In a slightly arrogant tone (laughing), but makes people eat dog food without knowing it. Therefore, I am looking forward to writing a novel that will make the little angels willingly eat the glass shards in the candy_(:з∠)_. This whole article made me really happy to read it. Although I have said the previous sentence many times. But important things must be said three times! Serious face Here are some big bugs pointed out: The beginning of the second chapter says that Xiaoxue (hahaha, bad taste) is hungry and hasn't eaten for two days and two nights. So, if he loses his memory, will he still know how long he hasn't eaten?(:з∠)_. (Or maybe he forgot everything but didn't forget to eat.) A normal person should be like: Where is this? Ah, I'm so hungry... How long has it been since I've eaten? Since I'm not a fan, I don't know what constitutes good fan data. However, this writing style really suits my taste! I wish you great blessing here to harvest many little angels and become gods as soon as possible! Ah Qiang. [Jiuge Changpingpu & Ah Qiang]
So far I like the queen better
These two people can go to hell. I feel like what else will this younger brother do?
"Wanwan, I don't want to hurt you." Cheng Nuo sighed slightly helplessly... This should be Ji Rui, right? ? ? Ji Rui actually hoped that Cheng Nuo wouldn't wake up. He wanted to take Fei Wan away, Gaga
I'm so curious about the past~~~~~Like it
Alas, I just finished watching the last episode of Where Are We Going, Dad? I was a little bit abused. I accidentally saw a fan novel. I wanted to read it to change my mood. But as soon as I opened it, it became even more abusive... My poor black rice. Alas, I didn't have a good impression of someone in the first place. After reading this article, I became even more disgusted.
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
This layout is much more comfortable to read. The author is very humble. PS: As for the online game, I can only view it as fantasy and it's easier to accept. If the author had marked "online games" on the content tag, even if the copywriting attracted me again, I would not click on the article. After all, no matter how beautiful the article is, it would be very depressing and affect my mood if I couldn't understand it.
The road is endless, but the thoughts are endless. Alas, it was really heart-wrenching to watch the two of them. Shao Feng must work hard to find out quickly! ! !
Not bad, dear, come on, support you! But it's time for CP to come out~~~
I went to review. I can't afford to be hurt during the exam...