HP Hill Notes 1971

When I saw this, I found out that I have stopped updating for a year, which is very regrettable, especially in such a sore position. The author's writing skills, plot settings, and character creation are all quite up to par among the HP fandoms or derivative works I've seen, but I still have some shortcomings. This shortcoming mainly comes from the last few chapters. I have to admit that the looming relationship between them during the ambiguous period is very eye-catching, but the further back, the more I feel that the author deliberately designed a painful literature full of personal art, and even in chapters 70 and 80, there are faint signs of going beyond the character creation of the characters themselves. Especially when the update is discontinued in this place, it is difficult for me not to speculate. As a person who is creating stories and characters myself, it is difficult for me not to guess whether the author has changed his view on his CP after a period of time. Maybe even I doubt the possibility of their heir. I can only say that this change is not surprising. But I have always firmly believed that in the creative process, in order to maintain the integrity of the story and "tell the story well," the author must sacrifice something when giving it a soul. Otherwise, the work will easily become a tool for the author's own artistic creation. In this case, the color of the work itself will be eroded. But I still want to emphasize that the author of this article is very good. Whether it is an emotional drama or something else, the plot of the heroine and Hugh is full of tension. But up to now, I can only treat the story of the two protagonists as be, because it happened to be in this position. Although the above expresses my unceremonious criticism, it also serves as a warning to my own creation.

Is there no follow-up? It's so sad. It would be better if they were stuck together, but they are stuck here and there is no follow-up. Is there still a possibility for Sirius and Hill? If there is no follow-up, I think that they can only stop here in this life, stop at that seaside, and their relationship is just, "Next time you meet someone you like, if you are not ready, don't tell her." It's so sad. Yes, readers know that they will definitely be together in the end, but Hill doesn't know, and Sirius doesn't know either.

Will I be able to see the follow-up in my short life...

Tied in one go! Thanks to the author for writing this article. Campus love, which is very youthful and entangled until the fifth grade, is very delicious. We can watch our Rosie gradually open her heart and become sober in her relationship. There are not only emotional lines but also friendship lines with everyone in the same grade. The blurred line between best friends and then lovers is also very good. I am very much looking forward to what tricks (?) Sirius will pull next to win back our Rosie. It must be said that I was deeply convinced when I saw "You Can Never Expect Blake to Grow Up". I always feel that the original character was still an impulsive and arrogant child until he was offline, and once he got up, he didn't care about anything. I hope he and Rosie can have a mature and calm chat at the right time? In short, I beg the author to update it! Give the work ten thousand kisses [kiss]

I really hate it. Today I heard Swift's Last Summer again. This song is just like the two of them [crying] [crying] [crying] I will always be yours [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's been 26 years, and I still can't forget you, Primrose's tongue-twisting name, or the hot hearts of the two young people on that summer night [crying] [crying] [crying]

The characterization and plot are really newspaper-reading. The whole chapter is about elementary school students bickering and quarreling, which is painful to read. If you read the text and buy the book impulsively, I recommend you to buy it chapter by chapter.

Ah, it's tied in two days... It's the most appetizing book among HP fans I've seen so far... And it's so comfortable without making noises... Overall, it's a very fluent book... Madam, please come back soon, ah, I can't find any other delicious food, ah ah [crying]

I don't know if I'll be able to see updates in my lifetime. It's really well written [hug my thighs]

我们至今不知道玉米片的下文啊哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

Teacher, please update, your writing is very good🥹🥹🥹🥹

I wish you all the best in your new life [Rose] I hope you can continue to update it. The character portrayal and plot description of this fan are really good. It is a pity to end it here [biting handkerchief] I will keep waiting...

Very nice! ! ! The heroine Sirius, turning from a friend into an ambiguous relationship is really beautiful! ! ! Already tied, looking forward to the update! ! ! ! [Pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][rose][rose][rose][rose][rose][rose]

We can see our brave, kind and intelligent Susu again [kiss] [kiss] [kiss] (I am willing to marry a young master [covering my face and peeking] even if it is a concubine [crying]) Okay, I dare to secretly kiss your little ancestor. You are unfilial. [Hands together] I feel like the progress of the if line is super fast, and I'm super brave to buckle.

It's actually reached this plot! Help, I want to time travel to tomorrow woo woo woo

It's so beautiful, madam, I will keep waiting. I wish you all the best in your life! ! ! [Spread flowers][sprinkle flowers][sprinkle flowers]

Waiting ~ waiting forever ~

I'm here to do it again. I'll always wait for you to come back.

Teacher, I'm looking forward to your update! ! ! I haven't seen them actually together yet! !

Goddess, it's 2026... I've been waiting for you [crying] [crying]

The wife is so beautiful. The growth environment of Hill and Sirius destined them to be awkward children who cannot handle intimate relationships. The pull between the two people and the fear of screwing up the relationship. The pain in this era and the inability to help being close again and again are so overwhelming. I look forward to coming back~~~

Why are you so beautiful? When can you come back? I said I have been crying.

So warm, so normal, I like it

Damn, I actually waited for the update

Are you still updating? I've been waiting for 3 months.

Come back! ! ! [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

I haven't seen enough of the sweet daily life of the young couple, we will always wait for your wife [crying] [crying] [crying]

I will keep waiting! ! ! !

Come on, madam! There are still unsolved foreshadowings ahead. The automatic casting of magic wands can really affect the situation of the battle!

Ah, so is this the end... This is really, ugh