Because of the deterioration of the earth's environment, humans moved to Pangu. On this planet that seems to have no higher organisms, ruins of ancient civilizations have been discovered. How did the ancient civilization disappear, or is there a higher-level civilization controlling everything? While humans are exploring unknown civilizations, they are also seeking the power to change themselves. This power comes from reality and virtuality. The power of reality can control virtuality, but conversely, can the power of virtuality control reality?
Intention: the meaning of dominating oneself
Reader comments
Although I have written a lot, I don't feel that I have made much progress. I haven't read much, except for the one I finished before. The first chapter was weird when I read it, so I just wanted to read it after I finished it. Will the second book be the same? The results are really similar. There are a lot of dialogues, and many of them are: xx said. What's better than the previous one is that there are several paragraphs in which A says and B says, repeated several times, but this one at least has some loud adjectives and the like. But since this is a novel, not a play, is there too much dialogue? Is it appropriate to write the dialogue this way? The dialogue in the novel is written in such a way that it makes people feel very boring. If you want to improve, you'd better read more about what others have written.
Although I have written a lot, I don't feel that I have made much progress. I haven't read much, except for the one I finished before. The first chapter was weird when I read it, so I just wanted to read it after I finished it. Will the second book be the same? The results are really similar. There are a lot of dialogues, and many of them are: xx said. What's better than the previous one is that there are several paragraphs in which A says and B says, repeated several times, but this one at least has some loud adjectives and the like. But since this is a novel, not a play, is there too much dialogue? Is it appropriate to write the dialogue this way? The dialogue in the novel is written in such a way that it makes people feel very boring. If you want to improve, you'd better read more about what others have written.