From that day on, you have lived deeply in my heart
Intent: Written for the original girl
Reader comments
The author's writing is not bad, but it starts too quickly and the characters do not establish a deep image in the readers' minds at all. It is recommended that you focus on a step-by-step approach at the beginning, to explain the story content more perfectly, and then introduce the characters. (Note: I didn't mean to make fun of the author, I just made some suggestions to the author. I hope they will be adopted. Thank you ^ω^)
The author's writing is not bad, but it starts too quickly and the characters do not establish a deep image in the readers' minds at all. It is recommended that you focus on a step-by-step approach at the beginning, to explain the story content more perfectly, and then introduce the characters. (Note: I didn't mean to make fun of the author, I just made some suggestions to the author. I hope they will be adopted. Thank you ^ω^)