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The original title of this article is "The Evil Girl". The sea has jumped and the crematorium is burning! ! !
Crematorium (very intense in a physical sense), torture first and then attack, scum attack and early warning, then attack and receive early warning
[The next volume has "Silly Wife" in advance. The copy is below. If you like it, you can go to the column to collect it~]
[Recommend a gay friend's O-Gong-A-Shou literature "Nine Summers God's Punishment Song abo" by Lazy Ye + work ID2636231]
Copywriting of this article:
There is a joke circulating in the upper circles of Yanjing: Qiao Linxu is a tough guy, but a sexy actress.
Everyone knows that for Qi Ke, Qiao Linxu is a weakness, an exception, and the only unswerving choice; but only Qiao Linxu knows that she is just a toy that Qi Ke has used and is unwilling to change.
But despite this, Qiao Linxu still likes Qi Ke.
Just because eighteen years ago Qi Ke found her who was timid, inferior and sensitive in a dark corner of the garden, and held her hands tightly.
She said: "Don't be afraid, I will be your family from now on."
*
Eighteen years later, Qi Ke chose someone else to be her fiancée, and Qiao Linxu finally gave up and chose to leave.
Qi Ke just looked at her coldly, and then notified the housekeeper to get rid of everything about Qiao Linxu in the house.
The friend curiously asked what was going on. Qi Ke sat on the sofa with his fingertips hooked on the wine glass and slowly shook it, as if he was in control of everything but nonchalantly, "She was mine eighteen years ago, where can she go now?"
But later, Qi Ke panicked and hurriedly tied the person back to his side, but what he got was Qiao Linxu, who was getting thinner and wasting away his vitality.
Qi Ke was helpless.
*
On Yanyi Bay, the salty sea breeze blew through the hair on the side of Qiao Linxu's face, and her vision blurred for a moment.
Behind him was the endless ocean, and in front of him was Qi Ke, whose face was ashen and furious.
Qi Ke suppressed his anger and tried to control his voice to become calm: "Qiao Linxu, come here."
Qiao Linxu's pale face raised the corner of his mouth into a charming smile, and the next second he threw himself into the sea without hesitation.
But at the moment she fell, she saw that Miss Qi, who was so high above her, had finally lost her sense of proportion and rushed forward in a panic, regardless of her own safety.
The eyes were red and heartbreaking.
Qi Ke, do you actually shed tears for me?
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This article is also known as "I have special dog training skills", "How to become a dog training master", "You are a dog and I am a dog, who is the real dog"
Reading/Demining Guide:
1. Double C, they are unique to each other, because Qi Ke is short-sighted and has a mysophobia
2. Super - the bloody ancient crematorium, (may contain elements such as amnesia, jumping into the sea, death escape, etc., The author does not guarantee this) No change of attack, no change of attack, no change of attack!
3. Due to family reasons, Qi Ke is a truly evil woman with a bad personality and a dog's mouth cannot spit out ivory. Qiao Linxu also has some flaws in his character due to his family background. Neither of the two protagonists are good people or perfect characters in the simple sense.
4. Two people have different pots and lids. Only the other can accept the other's true face, which can be regarded as a double madness and mutual redemption in another sense.
5. No engagement, no fiancée either
6. To be added
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Copywriting of "Silly Wife"
[The protagonist has been decided, the copywriting may change]
[This article is also known as "Denial of Sincerity"]
Lu Zhili, graduated from a prestigious foreign school with a double master's degree in psychology and economics, is the sole heir to Shengtian Group, and is a top socialite in Yanjing.
With top beauty and top knowledge, such a person was born to stand in the clouds and watch all living beings, but these were her life before the age of 24.
At the age of 24, Lu Zhili returned to China for the first time after graduation and was sent to the ICU in a car accident. When she opened her eyes again, her mind returned to the age of 8.
From then on, Miss Lu, the top socialite in Yanjing, no longer existed, only Lu Zhili, the top fool in Yanjing, existed.
*
The fool Lu Zhili thought that Yu Yao liked him because he was sincerely dating him. But what she didn't know was that in Yu Yao's eyes, she was a stupid girlfriend who couldn't stand up to the public.
Yu Yao took a fancy to her face and her family background, but not to her as a person.
She denied her identity in a drinking party full of friends, "Lu Zhili? It's just for fun with a fool, who would take it seriously."
But that fool is serious.
*
Lu Zhili was forcibly taken abroad for treatment by her parents. The former top socialite Lu Zhili returned to people's sight, attracting everyone's attention, including Yu Yao who regretted missing her so much.
Seeing the face of his former lover reappearing in front of him, Lu Zhili just smiled politely without any disturbance.
She said, "As for our past, please keep it secret, Ms. Yu. I don't want this black material to affect the company's market value."
"Those are sweet memories to you, but to me they were the most miserable two years of my life. I don't want to see you again in the future, it will trouble me very much."
Only a fool would fall in love with someone like Yu Yao.
But she is no longer a fool.
Intention: Abandon your inferiority complex, move towards the sunshine, and become a better version of yourself
Reader comments
Is it important for Seventh Sister to ask Hush to go back? I don't think Seventh Sister will be the same as before.
It's quite good, but the treatment of the man Yu Jiashu in it is too good. It feels like there's a bit too much writing. The two female protagonists even paved the way for him. I just feel like this man has no right to do anything [dog head]
Ending Spreading Flowers, this is my first review of Green River. I have no intention of providing writing guidance or article criticism. I just want to talk about the little things I encountered during reading. It is a very subjective and emotional personal experience.
I personally like crematorium literature very much, and I also like clear structures. For example, in this article, the "sadism" section and the "sadism attack" section are separated by jumping into the sea. I think an important and exciting point of crematorium literature is to look at the repentance, atonement and transformation of the "chasing wife" from the "pursued" side. This also shows that love can be vividly experienced, proven, affirmed, and chosen without reservation. The plot of first suppression and then expansion is undoubtedly a good way to expand this experience. But in fact, when I read this story, I felt more sympathy for Xiao Qi than for Boo Boo in the "chasing wife" section, which gave me some emotional imbalance. So I started to look for the reason why I felt this way. I thought I would ask myself from two aspects.
First, I was wondering if Qi Ke really made such a serious mistake? In fact, in Chapter 102, in Xiuxi's confession to Ye Zi, we see that among the factors that caused Xiuxi to jump into the sea, the only one directly caused by Xiaoqi was "the humiliation of being used as a substitute", and the rest included indirectly caused by Xiaoqi's strength and possessiveness, Qi Shou's instigation, and most directly, Fang Xi's psychological suggestion. This was also my feeling in the first half of the reading. It's not that Xiaoqi doesn't love Xiuxi, it can even be said that she loves Xiuxi very much. It's not that I can't feel Xiao Qi's love, just because the article shows Hush's suicide. Even if we can't say that the factor of love is unimportant, we can at least say that love doesn't make Hush so desperate. The frame-up by negative people and the misunderstanding of the unsolicited invitation have never been completely eliminated by the two. On this basis, Xiao Qi became the one who took the main responsibility and suffered the most harm from Hush after Hush jumped into the sea. This is not to say that the article is wrong, I just imagine that if Xiao Qi can really be the main person responsible for peeing in the sea as the article tries to emphasize, so that the perception of love hurt is not covered up by other misunderstandings and instigations, then the punishment and training of Xiao Qi may be more able to balance the emotions conveyed in the article.
Second, I felt that Hush was too ruthless in the crematorium, but I also don't think it's impossible to be ruthless. It's just that the emotional context of this story made me feel a little abrupt, because as mentioned in the previous point, before jumping into the sea, the relationship between the two was actually very strong. From the beginning, Xiao Qi impulsively hurt Hush, felt repentant, and learned to love again. I felt a gradually warming relationship between the two. Line, I even had this illusion. If there was no Fang Xi and no Qi Shou, and the two of them could clear up their misunderstandings, Xiaoqi would learn to love, and Xiu Xi would learn to be brave. Unfortunately, this story was not destined to be like this from the beginning. Although Xiu Xi regained his memory after jumping into the sea, the emotional connection between the two was suddenly severed. I think the author must have heard that the antonym of love is indifference, and hate is a synonym for love. But in my opinion, if Xiu Xi shows a little bit of hatred and care, maybe I can believe that she can still fall in love with Xiao Qi. In that case, maybe the disappearance and reconstruction of love will be more convincing and touching.
Of course, everything I said is based on my very emotional and subjective perspective as a reader. What I wrote is not harsh or dissatisfied. I really like the description of the fire and some interesting plot designs in the early stage. I also like the new family members and Qi Jinda. What I am talking about in the creation of Brother is just a little bit of imbalance in my personal feelings. If other readers have similar feelings when reading this, maybe this will give you a little resonance and comfort. If not, just think of it as the nonsense of a very slow and incapable of empathy.
Finally, I wish the author good luck! Looking forward to more exciting new works!
So what happened to the bite mark on Xiao Qi's shoulder at the beginning? I originally thought it was an unclean party, but after looking at the double C written in the copywriting, there seemed to be no explanation later.
I really want to cry to death. I thought that the big plot might be that the car accident was really kidnapped. The seventh sister was injured while trying to save Xiao Qiao, but I didn't expect it to be a fire. Will the seventh sister recover as before? She won't be disfigured.
I'm really going to drop my little pearl [ burst into tears ] I can't even eat, it's really painful!
Good, good, good, good
I want to see a jealous puppy who drinks wine as jealousy
Come on come on! I want to see life after marriage
Can there be more extras? ! !
Woohoo, I want to see more extras.
I stayed up late to finish reading it. Cool.
When will the new article be published?
Oh my God, when can we be together again?
Damn, stop it, it's too cruel
Happy fifth anniversary of Yueji [Xingxingyan] May you be happy forever
This tortured both of them, so miserable, but I loved watching it
True. Crematorium. It's so good-looking that I don't stock it anymore. I follow it every day.
When will it be updated today?
Today's update may be late, probably after nine o'clock
Which chapter is written with double c? I can't remember the specific chapter, can anyone tell me?
After reading the extra chapter many times, I decided to write something to thank the author (actually, the extra chapter is always on the computer page and I open it and read it every day). This article is well written and I like it. Qi Ke really liked Xiuxi very much, even before Xiuxi knew about it a long time ago. I feel that I can sympathize with Xiaoqi more. She was really bad to Xiuxi in the early stage. For a moment, I hoped that Xiuxi would get better later, but that is unfair to Xiaoqi who has not yet awakened to love. Xiaoqi's world can be huge and full of things that attract her, and she lacks nothing, but that's because she knows for sure that Boo Boo is there. Her sense of security disappeared when she felt that Xiuxi was about to leave. Xiaoqi's world could be so small that she only cared about Xiuxi. Thanks to the author for giving them a complete ending. Xixi has not given up on Xiaoqi, and will not give up on Xiaoqi. In fact, there will be some shock, which can't help but bring it into reality (I know I'm sorry for bringing it into my subjective consciousness... [Covering face and laughing and crying]). Will Xi Xi really forgive Xiao Qi? After thinking about it for a long time, I still feel like I can.
As someone who deeply loves sadistic stories and wife-chasing crematoriums, I feel so good about being tortured. Even though he is clear, I actually want to see if the author, the teacher, can be a little more sadistic. It feels so good to me even if you torture me. I'm beating like crazy on the bottom line. Love is both noble and despicable. Xiaoqi's love for Xiu Xiu started out as a feeling of control, and later turned into a compulsive love that worried about gains and losses for fear of you leaving, then into a love that I can do as long as I look after you, and finally into a mature and passionate love. I talked about a bunch of Qi Ke's advantages in a random way, maybe because I was preconceived and wanted to feel Qi Ke's emotions more, so I ignored Xiu Xi (bushi [shy]). In fact, I admire him so much and want to be someone like Xiu Xi who has the courage to weigh the pros and cons and express love. Adult love is mixed with too much weighing the pros and cons and calculations, so it's not pure. What kind of person can give love without hesitation? I think it should be someone like Xiuxi. This is a height that I can't reach in my life. Thanks to the author for the vivid characters in his writing. It feels very real. I will think about it in my mind when I read the article. It makes my brain come alive again every night when I am rushing to DDL! [Rose] [Rose] [Rose] To a certain extent, the combination of Hush and Xiao Qi is a sapiosexual combination. The article mentioned that "Hush only acts like a white rabbit in front of Xiao Qi." Who knew that when I saw this sentence, it was written into my heart!
The last thing is to express my love for the author and teacher. For a little old man (who doesn't play much on social networking sites), if someone asks me what Lily novels I recommend in the future, I will say "The Evil Girl Directly to the Crematorium" without hesitation! ! ! Teacher, can I still write a side story? Can I have a side one, a side two, a side three? It's so cool to see Xiao Qi being jealous and being coaxed. Our Xiao Qi is also a very cute baby. When Boo Boo was coaxing Xiao Qi, I took 1 of Boo Boo [laughing]
The above random thoughts only represent my own opinions. Everyone is welcome to discuss together and watch more of our "The Evil Girl Directly to the Crematorium"! ! ! Looking forward to the new work of the author and teacher [Compare Heart]
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Is it important for Seventh Sister to ask Hush to go back? I don't think Seventh Sister will be the same as before.
It's quite good, but the treatment of the man Yu Jiashu in it is too good. It feels like there's a bit too much writing. The two female protagonists even paved the way for him. I just feel like this man has no right to do anything [dog head]
Ending Spreading Flowers, this is my first review of Green River. I have no intention of providing writing guidance or article criticism. I just want to talk about the little things I encountered during reading. It is a very subjective and emotional personal experience. I personally like crematorium literature very much, and I also like clear structures. For example, in this article, the "sadism" section and the "sadism attack" section are separated by jumping into the sea. I think an important and exciting point of crematorium literature is to look at the repentance, atonement and transformation of the "chasing wife" from the "pursued" side. This also shows that love can be vividly experienced, proven, affirmed, and chosen without reservation. The plot of first suppression and then expansion is undoubtedly a good way to expand this experience. But in fact, when I read this story, I felt more sympathy for Xiao Qi than for Boo Boo in the "chasing wife" section, which gave me some emotional imbalance. So I started to look for the reason why I felt this way. I thought I would ask myself from two aspects. First, I was wondering if Qi Ke really made such a serious mistake? In fact, in Chapter 102, in Xiuxi's confession to Ye Zi, we see that among the factors that caused Xiuxi to jump into the sea, the only one directly caused by Xiaoqi was "the humiliation of being used as a substitute", and the rest included indirectly caused by Xiaoqi's strength and possessiveness, Qi Shou's instigation, and most directly, Fang Xi's psychological suggestion. This was also my feeling in the first half of the reading. It's not that Xiaoqi doesn't love Xiuxi, it can even be said that she loves Xiuxi very much. It's not that I can't feel Xiao Qi's love, just because the article shows Hush's suicide. Even if we can't say that the factor of love is unimportant, we can at least say that love doesn't make Hush so desperate. The frame-up by negative people and the misunderstanding of the unsolicited invitation have never been completely eliminated by the two. On this basis, Xiao Qi became the one who took the main responsibility and suffered the most harm from Hush after Hush jumped into the sea. This is not to say that the article is wrong, I just imagine that if Xiao Qi can really be the main person responsible for peeing in the sea as the article tries to emphasize, so that the perception of love hurt is not covered up by other misunderstandings and instigations, then the punishment and training of Xiao Qi may be more able to balance the emotions conveyed in the article. Second, I felt that Hush was too ruthless in the crematorium, but I also don't think it's impossible to be ruthless. It's just that the emotional context of this story made me feel a little abrupt, because as mentioned in the previous point, before jumping into the sea, the relationship between the two was actually very strong. From the beginning, Xiao Qi impulsively hurt Hush, felt repentant, and learned to love again. I felt a gradually warming relationship between the two. Line, I even had this illusion. If there was no Fang Xi and no Qi Shou, and the two of them could clear up their misunderstandings, Xiaoqi would learn to love, and Xiu Xi would learn to be brave. Unfortunately, this story was not destined to be like this from the beginning. Although Xiu Xi regained his memory after jumping into the sea, the emotional connection between the two was suddenly severed. I think the author must have heard that the antonym of love is indifference, and hate is a synonym for love. But in my opinion, if Xiu Xi shows a little bit of hatred and care, maybe I can believe that she can still fall in love with Xiao Qi. In that case, maybe the disappearance and reconstruction of love will be more convincing and touching. Of course, everything I said is based on my very emotional and subjective perspective as a reader. What I wrote is not harsh or dissatisfied. I really like the description of the fire and some interesting plot designs in the early stage. I also like the new family members and Qi Jinda. What I am talking about in the creation of Brother is just a little bit of imbalance in my personal feelings. If other readers have similar feelings when reading this, maybe this will give you a little resonance and comfort. If not, just think of it as the nonsense of a very slow and incapable of empathy. Finally, I wish the author good luck! Looking forward to more exciting new works!
So what happened to the bite mark on Xiao Qi's shoulder at the beginning? I originally thought it was an unclean party, but after looking at the double C written in the copywriting, there seemed to be no explanation later.
I really want to cry to death. I thought that the big plot might be that the car accident was really kidnapped. The seventh sister was injured while trying to save Xiao Qiao, but I didn't expect it to be a fire. Will the seventh sister recover as before? She won't be disfigured.
I'm really going to drop my little pearl [ burst into tears ] I can't even eat, it's really painful!
Good, good, good, good
I want to see a jealous puppy who drinks wine as jealousy
Come on come on! I want to see life after marriage
Can there be more extras? ! !
Woohoo, I want to see more extras.
I stayed up late to finish reading it. Cool.
When will the new article be published?
Oh my God, when can we be together again?
Damn, stop it, it's too cruel
Happy fifth anniversary of Yueji [Xingxingyan] May you be happy forever
This tortured both of them, so miserable, but I loved watching it
True. Crematorium. It's so good-looking that I don't stock it anymore. I follow it every day.
When will it be updated today?
Today's update may be late, probably after nine o'clock
Which chapter is written with double c? I can't remember the specific chapter, can anyone tell me?
After reading the extra chapter many times, I decided to write something to thank the author (actually, the extra chapter is always on the computer page and I open it and read it every day). This article is well written and I like it. Qi Ke really liked Xiuxi very much, even before Xiuxi knew about it a long time ago. I feel that I can sympathize with Xiaoqi more. She was really bad to Xiuxi in the early stage. For a moment, I hoped that Xiuxi would get better later, but that is unfair to Xiaoqi who has not yet awakened to love. Xiaoqi's world can be huge and full of things that attract her, and she lacks nothing, but that's because she knows for sure that Boo Boo is there. Her sense of security disappeared when she felt that Xiuxi was about to leave. Xiaoqi's world could be so small that she only cared about Xiuxi. Thanks to the author for giving them a complete ending. Xixi has not given up on Xiaoqi, and will not give up on Xiaoqi. In fact, there will be some shock, which can't help but bring it into reality (I know I'm sorry for bringing it into my subjective consciousness... [Covering face and laughing and crying]). Will Xi Xi really forgive Xiao Qi? After thinking about it for a long time, I still feel like I can. As someone who deeply loves sadistic stories and wife-chasing crematoriums, I feel so good about being tortured. Even though he is clear, I actually want to see if the author, the teacher, can be a little more sadistic. It feels so good to me even if you torture me. I'm beating like crazy on the bottom line. Love is both noble and despicable. Xiaoqi's love for Xiu Xiu started out as a feeling of control, and later turned into a compulsive love that worried about gains and losses for fear of you leaving, then into a love that I can do as long as I look after you, and finally into a mature and passionate love. I talked about a bunch of Qi Ke's advantages in a random way, maybe because I was preconceived and wanted to feel Qi Ke's emotions more, so I ignored Xiu Xi (bushi [shy]). In fact, I admire him so much and want to be someone like Xiu Xi who has the courage to weigh the pros and cons and express love. Adult love is mixed with too much weighing the pros and cons and calculations, so it's not pure. What kind of person can give love without hesitation? I think it should be someone like Xiuxi. This is a height that I can't reach in my life. Thanks to the author for the vivid characters in his writing. It feels very real. I will think about it in my mind when I read the article. It makes my brain come alive again every night when I am rushing to DDL! [Rose] [Rose] [Rose] To a certain extent, the combination of Hush and Xiao Qi is a sapiosexual combination. The article mentioned that "Hush only acts like a white rabbit in front of Xiao Qi." Who knew that when I saw this sentence, it was written into my heart! The last thing is to express my love for the author and teacher. For a little old man (who doesn't play much on social networking sites), if someone asks me what Lily novels I recommend in the future, I will say "The Evil Girl Directly to the Crematorium" without hesitation! ! ! Teacher, can I still write a side story? Can I have a side one, a side two, a side three? It's so cool to see Xiao Qi being jealous and being coaxed. Our Xiao Qi is also a very cute baby. When Boo Boo was coaxing Xiao Qi, I took 1 of Boo Boo [laughing] The above random thoughts only represent my own opinions. Everyone is welcome to discuss together and watch more of our "The Evil Girl Directly to the Crematorium"! ! ! Looking forward to the new work of the author and teacher [Compare Heart]