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Sirius Original Girl
Some sirius bg
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Our Aim Is Various Derivatives
The premise is that I have read the original work and personally feel that the article does not appear OOC.
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Delicious Cookie Derivative Version Bg
What I have been watching recently is so delicious that I have been dizzy by the sweetness orzhp, including Full Time, Curse Return, Volleyball, Qi Disaster, Ming Ke, Pirates, and Wen Ye
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Fanfic 2
Just look at the heroine. The Lord accepts. No CP. If you can, go to PS: Basically, it can be rated five stars, but due to rating restrictions, most can only be rated four stars.
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This ruthless god is Tang San! There are so many hardships set for the son-in-law. Oh my god, Tang San is the biggest villain in Peerless Tang Sect.
So happy to read this. I really like the writing. I remember that in the conversation the day after, the teacher said that my words were mediocre and mediocre. I was not good at refuting others. I could only say that the teacher's words would carry me forward smoothly, like the wind. Every stone and ashes in the wind would fall where they should, telling me that this world is real. This is probably how it feels. To make an analogy, there is the scene between Catherine and the gauze curtain in Wuthering Heights, but it is calm and real and happens across the glass, and everyone has body temperature. I read very few books. I just read a few novels back and forth. I don't know what the writing style of the teacher is, but the teacher's words must be good, because they make people feel real emotions and stand firm every time. Because I am not a complete native Chinese speaker, I always speak vaguely or with metaphors. I hope I have expressed the previous content, and I hope I am not too wordy to disturb people. In fact, when I read this, I was halfway through rewatching Order of the Phoenix, and I was really too afraid of death and separation, so I abandoned the original and ran around in a panic. Because I am a very timid person and good at escaping, I plan before watching, only watch the end, and then dive in until the end. It's really amazing. It's obviously still sad, but it allows timid people to borrow a little courage and be able to say this. Normally, I would deliberately avoid anything related to Sirius. In my understanding as a coward, Sirius has no love. He is a concept trapped in the glory of the past, repenting in the long process of self-atonement, trying to atone for the disasters that fate has brought to him by relying on sex and mental suffering. He can love the past and love Harry, but he cannot fall in love with anyone enough to get married, because he is a concept from a past era. When he grew up, he even felt that his story should probably end in that disaster, just like every road has an end, and the love in the past cannot always face the future and continue. There is a sentence about the road and the end in the middle of this book, which has such a profound impact on people that their brains are so full of emotions that they want to remember her. After reading he line, I also have a saying, sometimes we don't reach the end of the road, we just stop. Maybe in the past I shouldn't have judged the right to end a life just because of my personal pessimism and cowardice. Whether it is love, suffering or the fight against fate, it is too huge and terrifying for cowards, but no one knows whether the road has come to an end. The road is walked by pedestrians, and this road does not need to be recognized by anyone except the pedestrians themselves. I feel embarrassed to say it so bluntly, but I adore Eve. The kind of bravery and stubbornness that you choose to fight against fate because of love, there are many more, it is difficult for me to explain or finish them. In reality, she is a bit like Laura. It's very interesting to be immersed in it. I rarely had this feeling before. The other time was during Professor Flitwick's speech on a toast to the groom to the bride. While reading the original text Champagne, the Hamilton plot broke out inexplicably (? Now I have to muster up the courage to continue watching Order of the Phoenix. In fact, I wanted to re-watch Harry Potter every holiday before, but every time I went to Order of the Phoenix, I couldn't go on and would run away to watch Narnia or fanfiction. Although I'm still scared that I haven't read the other endings of this article, the ending and the courage gained from the extras will always stay with me for a while, and I will definitely come back later. So happy to come across this.
A very, very good HP fanfic. I read the four endings with tears in my eyes and smiled again at their wedding. Sirius's imprisonment was a wet rain and fog for Eve. Eve walked alone in the fog for more than ten years after he left, getting constantly wet but still moving forward. It was not until he was released from prison that he held up an umbrella again, and from then on, Eve could see the clear sky again. My favorite of the four endings is when two people send letters before they die. I have been thinking about what Eve would write and what Sirius would reply. When I saw Eve, it was a bit unexpected but I felt that this was her. But when I saw Sirius, tears flowed down uncontrollably. When Eve died calmly, Sirius completely understood and cherished her. When she saw the words "Sweet dreams, my love", did Eve also feel comforted and smile? Another shocking point was when Eve got her brother's magic wand, and just like when they were children, her brother responded to him again. Her brother, who was older than Eve and now much younger than her, is still protecting her, just like what HP's original work has always emphasized, "Love is the greatest power." The wedding if I saw after the four endings was as beautiful as a dream. Before I saw the end, I was worried about the ending saying that this was her dream. It was so good. It turned out to be a real parallel world (peace of mind). What I felt a little bit stabbed here was that Eve became a master of spells. When Regulus mentioned astronomy, she I wasn't interested at all, and I didn't feel anything when Professor Dumbledore mentioned it in the text. It wasn't until here that I slowly realized that Eve had firmly chosen Sirius so early. For him, she could walk on this road that she was not interested in for more than ten years, just to try to change his destiny... When Harry broke the crystal ball, I realized that if Eve had grown up smoothly, she would not be close to anyone and only reveal her true thoughts in front of Sirius. Just like at the wedding if, she would also have close friends and colleagues with whom she could chat. She would be more lively and less restrained. This was another moment when cruel fate showed itself... In short, it's great to read this article. Although the fate is cruel, "but don't cry at my grave", they have always been connected by the stars [red heart]
A very long-lasting author who is really happy to be able to see Inufu's life after finishing it for so long. Watching the latest episode makes my heart warm. There was no Voldemort, a wedding with all the family and friends around, waking up to see her parents instead of the hallucination before she died, Laura was a capable little fan girl as always, Sirius would give Eve an eye no matter what, her brother was quite reliable and charming. It turned out that Eve was like this in front of her brother. It was great. She has an older brother to rely on, and he always protects Eve whether he is present or not. In the main story, Sirius used his brother's wand, and in one of the endings, Eve used his brother's wand. There is still no hidden line where her brother found Eve's wand. It's funny to think that Sirius didn't know that Eve had an older brother and was jealous. And Regulus is especially funny. As expected of the Black family, no matter how human-like they are, they are also yin and yang.
Let's talk about Laura first. The friendship between the girls is the most touching. "Eve is Laura's heroism in her teenage years." Our Eve is so dazzling. When she was in school, she was the top student in Ravenclaw and the president of the student council. She expressed her pride in a very calm way. Laura is the person who has always looked up to and followed Laura. Who didn't have someone they wanted to be like when they were students? Eve is Laura's ideal look and may be a direction for her growth. Eve and Sirius are both extremely proud people who won't give up once they spot someone. Perhaps only people who shine like them will be noticed by others and make people want to pry. However, Laura has always been walking on her own path, and has never stopped changing. She has always done a good job as Eve's assistant. Maybe she couldn't be Eve, but she really did a good job as Laura. Everyone's evaluation of Eve, without exception, is that she is patient, polite, approachable, and willing to help and guide others. Only Sirius said how arrogant Eve was. Only people who are equally proud can understand this. Only someone as delicate as Ah Jing can write about a naturally compatible couple. Although Rael only appeared briefly, it was quite expressive. He quietly placed a bouquet of flowers at the graduation ceremony and left. And our Cedric, I really love being gentle, kind, sincere and brave. Many fans describe him as too flat, like Mr. Nice or Mr. Perfect produced by an assembly line, but how is that possible? Cedric doesn't appear much in The Mirror, but it just feels very real. I loved the part where he said thank you at Eve's wedding. James, Remus doesn't have much space, but whenever he appears, I want to laugh. The Marauders are like this. James is noisy like a little sun, Sirius is in high spirits, and Peter occasionally chimes in. Remus, as the only slightly normal person, takes on too much. Such a great wife, how did she manage to make every character OOC? Although Ah Jing said that he did not want to write about the war like most articles, as a reader, he still really felt the tense atmosphere during the war. And Harry, a sharply insecure Harry who is very observant and worried that Eve will not like him. In one of the endings, Sirius is gone. Harry hopes to live with Eve but is rejected, and sees Eve's charm again. You are just Sirius's godson, and if Sirius is gone then Harry will mean nothing to Eve. She also destroyed Xiaotian's portrait. She didn't want such a free person like Xiaotian to go against his own nature and be bound in the frame to endure a long period of silence just to occasionally accompany them to relieve their boredom. Of course Harry loved his godfather, but Eve was more rational and understood him better. Our young couple thinks about each other like this, and it makes people's hearts warm when they see it. I especially like how they met for the first time in sixth grade. How could someone with the same arrogance and coldness see someone else, even a very dazzling person in the same grade. Only when you see the other person by coincidence will you notice it. After a few more coincidences and contact, you will slowly understand and then fall in love with the other person after experiencing some things and choose the other person. I really like that when Xiao Tian knew that Eve would not join the Order of the Phoenix, he did not quarrel and break off temporarily like most of the novels, but supported understanding. In fact, it is not only in the presence of rational, tolerant and gentle people that we can complete our original selves. Two people who are equally arrogant can also understand each other's pride and understand each other better. But this is difficult. They need to meet at the right time. Fortunately, the time for them to meet is just right, and fortunately they are compatible enough. After reading the four extra chapters of Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter, I feel so blessed. It makes up for the regret that the main text doesn't have too many young lovers' daily routines. Especially the letters they wrote after Eve arrived in Greece were just like ordinary young lovers, chatting about their daily lives, occasionally complaining about others, and talking about their hopes for the future. Sirius wanted to put goblins at the wedding to make me laugh out loud, which was very naive. Also, when they went to the beach to play, they obviously didn't need sunscreen like Muggles, but they still applied it on Eve's behalf because they felt more like an ordinary couple. Even the few characters mentioned in the book are so vivid and real. I always felt that I was taken through the magical world from Inufu's perspective, and I pieced together their stories from different friends. Finally, I would like to thank Ah Jing again for creating a magical world. Everyone who reads it will be very happy. I no longer like HP and Sirius, but I still like this story. It will still get the most real touch and awaken the truest feelings deep in my heart. I will still recommend Scottish Romance to everyone who likes HP and Sirius, and tell everyone how happy this work is. In the end, the word count of 1,500 proved to me that there is no such thing as a word count. It just gave me an extra reason to express my thoughts. Thank you, Ah Jing. I won't remain silent when it comes to works I like, but that's all it seems. I think I might give more feedback to the works I like in the future.
This is really the best Sirius book I have ever read. I really like the two characters portrayed, and the branch ending is also very tearful. I never hesitate to admire the choices of fate. Send that Scottish girl with blue eyes to me.
Sometimes I struggle with whether beauty is an illusion, but on the other hand, illusions are so concrete. Of course, it can also be another world. Anyway, they will always fall in love and be happy.
After reading the entire book, go back and look at the scene at the beginning where Eve goes to Gryffindor to give guidance. There are several points in the text that point to this scene. At that time, Sirius was not only curious about the appearance and character of Eve, the prefect, but more importantly, he was probably moved by how she ignored all kinds of opinions and went straight to the goal without hesitation. After all, the two of them are actually very similar types. No matter how flamboyant Sirius is and how rational and restrained Eve is, their life backgrounds are the same silent and firm, like the rocks on the sea at the bottom of the cliff, unmoved by the outside world and only listening to their inner selves. Therefore, for more than ten years, Eve would believe that Sirius did not betray and work hard for it, and Sirius would also believe in Eve's sincerity and come quickly after running away. Even though sometimes I feel hesitant and confused, I can make decisions quickly and implement them quickly. I do what I want, which is really charming. What I also like about Sif very much is that the two of them will downplay important things, such as confirming their relationship and engagement, and swearing an unbreakable vow, which is very touching. In the turbulent and changing times, in the passing years, the two leaned on each other and moved forward side by side, even if the road ahead was bumpy and foggy. I am really happy to read this book. Thank you Teacher Jingjing for bringing such a good story [poor]
"On the impact that the lack of updates has on readers' hearts"
There will be encounters in Gryffindor. Unexpectedly, the Sorting Hat is actually a master of emotions.
Oh my god [crying] It's so cozy and warm, I cried watching it😭
After receiving the book, my passion resurfaced, so I picked one up! Touching story~
I haven't read HP for a long time. I saw this book a few days ago. The introduction of the article attracted me. My favorite character is not Sirius, but the teacher's description of Sirius was very consistent with my impression of him. So I clicked on the book and stayed up for a few nights to finally finish it. The content of the book attracted me. I am a person who is very picky about writing, but the teacher's writing is so beautiful that I took screenshots while reading. The content can be seen that the teacher is familiar with the original work. Later, I also learned that the teacher has read it many times and the logic is particularly rigorous. There are small foreshadowings in many details. I really like the teacher's portrayal of Eve's character. This character is the only one in the HP I have read. Forgive me for my poor writing skills. I cannot describe my love for this book. I hope the teacher will continue to create. I will always support you. By the way, I would like to ask where the book will be sold after it is printed.
This article really made me cry when I read it. It was so well written. Thank you teacher [Purple candy] kswl [orange candy] is here
Replaying it for the fourth time, recall it first before deciding whether to win it [crying]
I will still be able to watch Inufu's extras in my lifetime!
No need to discuss the future, happy summer
Happy summer! What a happy chapter!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
We are not just bringing up bad children, we are taking our nephews to get acquainted with the adult world.
I've been waiting for two years. Madam, can you please give me more updates?
Skip to the ending to see it, it's great ^ω^
! ! ! Extra! [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it
Happy belated birthday to our Xiaoyu [kiss] woo woo woo [kiss] [kiss] I will definitely not forget it next year [please please] I have been looking forward to meeting you [hug] [hug]
Why can't I load a new chapter? I keep crying. Why is my Jinjiang stuck again?
Surprise drop, happy new year
It's not enough to watch [Come on] [Come on] Please make a sequel [Come on] [Come on]
Chase all the way down! ! !