This Person Can Be in the [Entertainment Industry]

I'm very anxious at this time.

Hello, author, I am A Liang. - Bubu, who took the order before, had something to do, so he forwarded the order to Ah Liang, and the author had to revise the article, so this review has been delayed for a long time. I would like to bow to the author and apologize for keeping you waiting. I am really sorry for keeping you waiting. Without further ado, let's get straight to the point. - Let's start with the copywriting. The copywriting is fresh, concise, and concise. After looking at it, Ah Liang felt a sadistic aura coming towards his face. Perhaps this is the emotional tone of the entire text. Generally speaking, the copywriting is good, but it is recommended to write down the main pairing of the article, because in the process of reading the article, the main CP is not very obvious = = A Liang got the wrong CP many times ← We will talk about this later. - Speaking of article content. The author's writing style gives Ah Liang the feeling of being very quiet and literary. He uses long and short sentences very skillfully, and the writing is as smooth as water. The plot is not very prominent, but with the help of writing, it becomes more twists and turns. The content of the plot made Ah Liang a little confused. Mo Chuzhen didn't feel anything at all when he was favored by Pei Jin? The change of plot and scene is too hasty, and the pursuit of literature and art can sometimes make people unable to understand the article. The stupid A Liang is a bit difficult to read (= =) In Jinjiang, the writing style is not the focus of a reader's reading of the article, but the plot. The author's articles are full of flow, but every word is true. It can be seen that he has a certain literary background and is worthy of careful appreciation. However, the author's current writing power is not yet able to control the text arbitrarily, so he must work hard on the plot and learn to use a series of suspense and cute points to cleverly "please" the readers. To put it more bluntly, Jinjiang is popular for its humorous writing style, which is full of literary and artistic style and full of drama. Jinjiang does not have a large readership, and it is thankless. However, it is difficult for an author's writing style to be completely changed at once. I hope that the author can hone his writing skills, enhance his literary heritage, and make his writing concise and incisive but lively and less boring to read. - Let's talk about the characters. The author's way of portraying the characters is very delicate, and there are no problems common to newcomers. However, there are so many characters appearing at the beginning of the article, making it difficult for readers to read. Moreover, Ah Liang didn't notice the column of protagonists and supporting characters before reading the article, so that when he read the article, he was always in a tangled state of "ah, it turns out that the main CP is the two of them", "oh, it's not right... It should be these two if they are so entangled", "it doesn't seem right...". At the beginning, I thought Shan Lan and Mo Chuzhen were a couple. After Pei Jin appeared, I first thought that Pei Jin and Mo Chuzhen were the main characters. Later, I felt that there was something interesting between Shan Lan and Pei Jin. However, the author made a sharp change and said that the person Pei Jin cared about was actually Xiao Yingyu... Shan Lan also liked his master... This made Ah Liang a little confused. What surprised Ah Liang the most was that Shan Lan, who had such a heavy role in the opening scene, was actually a supporting character QAQ, but he was more likable than Pei Jin. Such a preconceived notion was a bit bad. - In the process of reading the article, Ah Liang discovered that the author had a relatively common problem. It's just that some of the words in the article don't make sense, the language is awkward, and some sentences require long sentences to be explained clearly, but the author wrote them in simple words. Although the words fit the context very well, I don't recognize some of the words because they are too uncommon. I suggest that you don't have to worry too much about the words, but rather let the readers understand them. - Also, the chapter A Liang read should be the author's revised article. Typos still appear in the article, and there are also some wrong idioms. Although it is not a big problem, you still need to pay attention to it to let readers know the author's serious attitude. [When Xiao Yingyu was taken out, Mo Chuzhen stood on the stairs and watched. He saw him struggling all the way, and also saw Pei Jinchou in the room, looking more ugly than he had ever imagined. Storage←Stay? [Pei Jin gently caressed Concubine Pin's round body and sighed: "Listen to me, this is what a husband should do for his beloved wife."] [Alone] ← Belly? [The medicine was so bitter that even Pei Jin himself couldn't bear it, and his stern face showed a rare uncomfortable expression. Jun←Jun? [When it comes to Shan Lan, Mo Chuzhen is almost arrogant. ArroganceDescribes a person's arrogance in Baidu Encyclopedia. [Yin Hong's blood flowed from the corner of his mouth. Pei Jin finally let go of his lips and stared at the red stain——] [Yin Hong] ← Yin Hong? Ah Liang read the article more carefully. I hope the author will not think that Ah Liang is deliberately looking for trouble. Virgo + obsessive-compulsive disorder can't afford to be hurt! - Since I have only read the first dozen chapters of the article and do not know how the article will develop in the future, it is difficult to evaluate the subplot of A Liang laid by the author. However, A Liang has already seen a future full of cruelty. It is destined to be a deeply entangled entanglement between several people, which must be solved with their blood and tears. I noticed that the author mostly wanted to start the article from the results (?). During this period, there must be many friends who read the article who cannot understand the purpose of some of the actions of the characters in the article. I hope the author can persevere, strengthen the belief in his heart, and unfold the main line. I believe that after the completion of this article, the author's writing power and popularity will be greatly improved. Readers and data won't be a problem! - Generally speaking, the author's writing is quite good, his writing style is mature and sophisticated, his writing style has its own unique flavor, and he has a certain literary background. I believe that given time, I will write amazing articles. - The above are all A Liang's personal opinions. I hope the author's suggestions can help you gain something... If not, you can also squeeze my opinions to your heart's content~ We can communicate together! - By Shicheng Studio / A Liang →Warm reminder: Please go to the main store to get the review (>^ω^<)