It was past the fourth watch, and the night rain was still falling outside the window. The four sets of heavy curtains in the hall were drooped, styrax incense was burning in the Boshan stove, and light smoke curled up. The entire side hall was filled with such a vague fragrance.
Murong Jue walked over in her flat gold embroidered soft satin shoes and landed on the thick brocade. She was silent. She picked up the incense box on the small table and added incense pills to the stove. Then she stretched out her hand to test the temperature of the gray surface. She only heard the emperor's gentle voice coming from the depths of the heavy curtains: "Yiyi, don't be busy with that. It's cold at night, be careful of catching a cold again."
Murong Jue then put down her things, turned around, and smiled at the emperor: "I thought you all liked the idea of 'red sleeves add fragrance'." As soon as her voice fell, the emperor had already walked out of the Nuan Pavilion with a slight smile: "You? Which one of you?" Murong Jue knew that he had said the wrong thing, and smiled shyly. He saw that her eyes were black and white, and her eyes were watery, which seemed to be intoxicating.
But the emperor didn't move at all this time. He just looked back at her calmly. Finally, he slowly stretched out his hand and covered her hand. His voice seemed very, very far away: "Why do you deceive yourself like this?"
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Dear friends, I would like to ask how to change my pen name :(
I really don't like this pen name~~~
Reader comments
Zhao Yunsheng will be tortured by Chu Qiu to the point where he doubts his life, hahaha
Hello teacher, first let me talk about my overall feeling about the article ~ The teacher writes fluently, especially the first-person narrative perspective is very novel, and he has a good grasp of the underlying character of the character "I". By witnessing many grievances and hatreds from the perspective of "I", at the end, there is quite a sense of sadness and indifference hidden in the world. The ability to tell a rich story in a short number of words is evident in his writing skills.
Next, let's talk about writing. The teacher's description of the appearance and personality of each important character can be carved out in a few short sentences. For example, Xiao Cui "wears black, has a slim face, as bright as white jade, and is filled with moisture on her body, giving her a youthful and heroic spirit." There is also the "I" that takes the form of a human and looks like a "peasant." The somewhat rustic and funny image is all lifelike.
The teacher's choice of imagery for the protagonist "fish" and Xiaocui's "flying bird" is also very subtle. The article says: "Looking at her from a distance, my thoughts are swirling, and I think of many years ago, when the reed flowers were like snow, she flew in, her wings cut through the center of the lake, and I have the desire to fly from then on." They are obviously fish swimming in the water, but because of the figure of the flying bird, I have a desire for the sky. But because of the helplessness of the world, there are too many things that cannot be predicted and accomplished. The fate of "me" and Xiaocui is like a drop of ink, integrated into this cold and damp world. Coupled with the entanglement between the two and Ye Yin, when "I" saw the two of them approaching the end of their lifespan, I thought, "She is always alive, but she never loves me. I hope she dies. God is kind to me, she is finally dying, and I am finally free." It is inevitable that people will feel sour after watching this [Star Eyes] [Star Eyes]
Zhao Yunsheng will be tortured by Chu Qiu to the point where he doubts his life, hahaha
Hello teacher, first let me talk about my overall feeling about the article ~ The teacher writes fluently, especially the first-person narrative perspective is very novel, and he has a good grasp of the underlying character of the character "I". By witnessing many grievances and hatreds from the perspective of "I", at the end, there is quite a sense of sadness and indifference hidden in the world. The ability to tell a rich story in a short number of words is evident in his writing skills. Next, let's talk about writing. The teacher's description of the appearance and personality of each important character can be carved out in a few short sentences. For example, Xiao Cui "wears black, has a slim face, as bright as white jade, and is filled with moisture on her body, giving her a youthful and heroic spirit." There is also the "I" that takes the form of a human and looks like a "peasant." The somewhat rustic and funny image is all lifelike. The teacher's choice of imagery for the protagonist "fish" and Xiaocui's "flying bird" is also very subtle. The article says: "Looking at her from a distance, my thoughts are swirling, and I think of many years ago, when the reed flowers were like snow, she flew in, her wings cut through the center of the lake, and I have the desire to fly from then on." They are obviously fish swimming in the water, but because of the figure of the flying bird, I have a desire for the sky. But because of the helplessness of the world, there are too many things that cannot be predicted and accomplished. The fate of "me" and Xiaocui is like a drop of ink, integrated into this cold and damp world. Coupled with the entanglement between the two and Ye Yin, when "I" saw the two of them approaching the end of their lifespan, I thought, "She is always alive, but she never loves me. I hope she dies. God is kind to me, she is finally dying, and I am finally free." It is inevitable that people will feel sour after watching this [Star Eyes] [Star Eyes]