Substitute and Bai Yueguang Divorce Variety Show

6. Mr. Jiang is now a greasy boss, but Song is still able to run away. I'm convinced. Then this incident was obviously a bit stupid

To be honest, it's a bit frustrating to watch.

In fact, I think it's okay that the character design collapsed. The main reason is that it's ridiculous that some people who should be offline always don't go offline. The protagonist's aura cannot be so big that he can be resurrected in place.

I have a question, can I ask this? Isn't this the kind of story where the female protagonist is 99% abusive and gets proud in the next few chapters? ? ? This question is very important to me. I'm just asking. It's not a writing guide or a scolding. It's just a question.

How should I put it, it can be seen that the storm made the heroine start to like the heroine, but I think the writing is still a bit weak. There is psychological profiling, but not much. The reason for the change in the character of the male protagonist is still to persuade me not to call him. I can't take the male protagonist seriously now. The impression given to me is that the male protagonist has inexplicably changed into a domineering style. Although he was forced to flirt with Song La before, it still felt a bit procrastinating. Now the disturbance against the female protagonist is a bit vigorous. Then the heroine's motivations still felt abrupt to me. The heroine thought it was a contract marriage at first, but she got divorced and went on a variety show. During this period, she was moved by the hero's behavior, and she fell in love with her. The plot was very smooth. However, in fact, the change in the heroine's feelings for the hero is not obvious enough and does not last long enough. Under normal circumstances (I think), after you change your mind about the male protagonist, there should be a period of time to get to know him again and then reach the level of love. Then the heroine is now, directly from changing to falling in love, the development is a bit rapid. Also, isn't the heroine's character a bit broken? When dealing with Song Dynasty, it was called Sa. I don't think the heroine's reaction when faced with the mistress incident will be just a weak retort with a few words that have no effect. In my opinion, even though the situation is sudden, the heroine can still find contradictions in the other party's words, or come up with something better than saying a few innocuous words. (Not a writing guide, just a sensible way of writing down how this book makes me feel so far.)

Hmm... Mr. Jiang's character became a bit sudden, and then Song received the lunch box. I just want to say: the heroine is great!

Is the heroine stupid? Emotional intelligence is so low. It was discovered before that this man hired someone to slander her as a mistress in public. After meeting each other, he still smiled and exchanged cups? Emotional intelligence is not only high because you are all-round, but also by being able to identify people you can interact with and who you cannot interact with.

This female partner left me speechless. It's so annoying.

Wait until the female supporting role is offline, or the male protagonist is out of control, and then we'll watch.

White Lotus finally overturns, it's great, but I don't know when the male protagonist will break free.

Ahhhhh, it shouldn't be Qiao Dai, right?

Little sister! You're lucky. . . XXwuwu

I fell in love with the little puppy. He is more attractive.

How should I put it, so far, um... I feel a little aggrieved. The heroine is unprepared for Song's behavior behind his back. Let's take a look at the back.

? The progress is a bit fast. It's like riding a rocket. The male protagonist is really lucky. One after another, women appear (light a cigarette and meditate). I hope the male protagonist can be more transparent about his preference for the female protagonist. Otherwise, every time there is a disaster, two men and three men save or witness it. It is really easy for me to drift away and fall in love.

Still not offline? ? I'm really speechless. Isn't this boss very good?

Is it going to start? Is it going to start!

"Song Qingzhi" gave the author a big worm~ Qiao Dai?

Check in, check in, check in

I haven't explained that I went to the wrong room yet.

Hahaha, the filial son scatters flowers

Check in, check in, check in

I would like to know which hair care oil is described above

Ahhhh, I want to see the back! ! ! !

Ah, why haven't you updated TAT yet?

This system is like crap

So I still don't understand whether the little naughty dog ​​likes the original heroine or not.

Why does the heroine always wear plush slippers? She has been wearing plush slippers since she first appeared in the variety show. There are also descriptions of wearing high-waisted wide-leg pants with plush slippers. She did not twist her ankle when she first participated in the variety show.

"Song Qingzhi" gave the author a big worm~ Qiao Dai

Why do I have so many Shura fields?