If you like it, stay, if you don't like it, leave. Stay or go as you like, cherish each one.
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When Fu Shuyu first saw An Bei, he felt that this person must be his nemesis in his previous life. Sure enough, this person made a huge difference in his future life.
Daily Question: Was the top singer threatened by his personal doctor today?
Lightning protection warning:
1. The high probability is BE, and I don't like to be defeated.
2. It is not updated regularly. It is very common for it not to be updated for a long time. You have to be busy with a lot of things.
3. The next one will probably be a lily novel, and I guess I won't write any more danmei novels in the future.
Intention: Tomorrow and accident
Reader comments
Newbie, new book. If you can't see the data now, it will take a long time to serialize.
In fact, maids do not need to wash some personal clothes...
I've finished reading it now, and then I'll say what I want to say (PS I haven't written much, it's purely my personal thoughts as a reader, not a professional. If it bothers the author, I'll see if I can delete the comment myself).
1. I feel that the plot is relatively flat, with no ups and downs, and the pace of the plot is too fast. Some things that should be said are not mentioned, which seems very abrupt.
2. The characters are a bit broken, such as Fu Shuyu, who was very irritable at the beginning but became very mean later (no insult intended). Many supporting characters appeared in the middle, but they were very abrupt. However, the author only mentioned the names of the characters but did not introduce the relationship between the characters and the protagonist. It felt that they had no three-dimensional feeling and were very flat.
3. The description at the beginning felt a bit too much, like writing a composition, and Ji (or something, sorry to forget) threw the child away. I felt very speechless and did not explain why he went there. It didn't say why the couple (probably) wanted to adopt him. It felt like they just adopted him if they wanted. There was no description of the child after he was thrown away at the beginning, nor was it written that the couple had seen the child, only heard the voice, and then said they wanted to adopt it when they came back. The plot felt weird.
4. I personally feel that the author's writing style is still good, but the plot is very awkward. It is better to think more about how the plot will develop and make an outline.
5. I think this is the most important point. The characters are very broken, especially the protagonist. The author should think carefully about what kind of character his protagonist should be, and try to position him more. If there is a plot like this, what should he do and what should he not do? It is better to establish the character's image. (There may be typos, and I don't know if it won't be posted. If it bothers the author, I apologize here. I hope the author can read it and reply so that we can communicate (??ヮ??)?)
Newbie, new book. If you can't see the data now, it will take a long time to serialize.
In fact, maids do not need to wash some personal clothes...
I've finished reading it now, and then I'll say what I want to say (PS I haven't written much, it's purely my personal thoughts as a reader, not a professional. If it bothers the author, I'll see if I can delete the comment myself). 1. I feel that the plot is relatively flat, with no ups and downs, and the pace of the plot is too fast. Some things that should be said are not mentioned, which seems very abrupt. 2. The characters are a bit broken, such as Fu Shuyu, who was very irritable at the beginning but became very mean later (no insult intended). Many supporting characters appeared in the middle, but they were very abrupt. However, the author only mentioned the names of the characters but did not introduce the relationship between the characters and the protagonist. It felt that they had no three-dimensional feeling and were very flat. 3. The description at the beginning felt a bit too much, like writing a composition, and Ji (or something, sorry to forget) threw the child away. I felt very speechless and did not explain why he went there. It didn't say why the couple (probably) wanted to adopt him. It felt like they just adopted him if they wanted. There was no description of the child after he was thrown away at the beginning, nor was it written that the couple had seen the child, only heard the voice, and then said they wanted to adopt it when they came back. The plot felt weird. 4. I personally feel that the author's writing style is still good, but the plot is very awkward. It is better to think more about how the plot will develop and make an outline. 5. I think this is the most important point. The characters are very broken, especially the protagonist. The author should think carefully about what kind of character his protagonist should be, and try to position him more. If there is a plot like this, what should he do and what should he not do? It is better to establish the character's image. (There may be typos, and I don't know if it won't be posted. If it bothers the author, I apologize here. I hope the author can read it and reply so that we can communicate (??ヮ??)?)