My team leader, my teammate, Yu Xianzhu CP, is related to the plot of the Anti-Japanese War.
The author is a waste of emotional description OTL
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Reader comments
The character design is okay, but the writing style is relatively immature, the overall story is a bit drool-like, and the characterization is superficial. The same words are used over and over again. Maybe it would be better to change the adjectives or shorten them a little? I suggest you read it more after you finish writing it. From what I can see so far, there are a lot of grammatical errors.
The character design is okay, but the writing style is relatively immature, the overall story is a bit drool-like, and the characterization is superficial. The same words are used over and over again. Maybe it would be better to change the adjectives or shorten them a little? I suggest you read it more after you finish writing it. From what I can see so far, there are a lot of grammatical errors.