This novel is purely the product of resentment. In reality, I cannot defeat the krypton money boss. In the novel, I am the richest man.
Zhang Guoguo is an ordinary gamer, a serious collector, and a 100% money-making boss.
As a salty fish without dreams, Zhang Guoguo's biggest dream is to stay at home and play games without competing with the world.
However, she never dreamed that she, Zhang Guoguo, had traveled through time! ! !
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This is my first time writing an article, so please forgive me if there is some OOC in it! Thank you all for your understanding!
Please correct me if there is something unreasonable and I will work hard to improve it!
Intention: As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will be beautiful.
Reader comments
The author, if we just talk about certain qualities of the protagonist, she is very much in line with Slytherin, decisiveness (to be honest, I don't see the decisiveness, but I feel it vaguely), ambition (the desire to protect everyone is also a kind of ambition), and courage (although this word is very similar to the lions in Gryffindor next door, but it is undeniable that snakes need courage, and we need extremely sharp courage).
From these aspects alone, the protagonist is still very good, although some things are a bit reckless. Judging from the past life, she is not very old, and her living environment is not bad. Although she does not live under the pampering of her parents, it is still close. The living environment in this life is not challenging, and she also has the love of her parents and the love of her two brothers. It is not a problem for someone to be childish due to the influence of biological age, and it is not a problem to be reckless and soft. From now on, there are indeed some Mary Sue tendencies, but in reality, such a person is understandable.
The author's writing style is a bit immature and green. Considering that the author is not familiar with writing for the first time, I hope you can support me.
(I can only write this after roughly reading a paragraph of your article, and some minor details are still unclear.)
Here, I sincerely give the author a few small suggestions:
1. Please determine your writing style first. I know it is difficult for novices to determine their writing style, but for some things, the sooner you make a decision, the better.
2. The various details in the article are a bit messy. I also know that it is your first time to write an article and you cannot grasp the details. However, the addition of details can add a lot of color to the work. On the contrary, an article without details can only be called an outline.
3. The author, your writing style is a bit like those written ten years ago. This does not mean that you are lagging behind. I still like those articles very much, but I just think there may be some problems. Your writing style may not be suitable for Jinjiang today.
4. Every article written by an author is the author's hard work. I am not commenting on you with criticism, education, or malicious harm. I just hope that a new author can do better.
Everyone's style is different, and I can't force anything. For example, if I could create your style, it would obviously be impossible. I can't explain my writing style clearly, it's a little bit dark.
"Good luck girl, you should understand that the gift of fate comes with a price. The first time you paid for it with your life, but this time, what can you replace it with?"
"No matter what it is. Since I can give my life, I can also repay my soul. What's more, isn't the purpose of my coming here just for them? Destiny, since you know what I will say, I will give everything I have, but you just look at me indifferently. You are really evil!"
"Oh, my dear girl, don't you think this is interesting? Everything is my pawn, but you have more choices, wouldn't you do this?"
"No, of course I won't. Those people, for the sake of the future, can only become your pawns. As you said, I am a lucky girl. I have the right to choose, so all I have to do is to overthrow your chessboard."
"I'll see, my dear girl"
"As you wish"
Ahem, sorry, I accidentally wrote "hi". This text is actually a short paragraph in my writing. If it is inappropriate, I will definitely delete it. I wish you good luck and wish your articles will get better and better.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Xiaojiang come on! ! ! ! ! You are the best baby! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ah, I thought of Article 20
Do I need to spend another Galleons to buy the wand produced by the pig farm? (Okay, I also know it is to make things easier) But Ollivander wouldn't be able to recognize that this is not a wand he made himself?
The poor monk recommended Xiaolong, mainly because the Geminis are not easy to manage. I am not surprised that the Geminis produce and sell themselves...
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! ! !
No CP means whoring all, I want them all!
No one considers being a professor, but I'm afraid that my lack of writing skills will make me look like a substitute for literature.
Www The ideas are quite interesting! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Like] [Like [Like] [Red Heart]
You don't have a fever, are you feeling soft? And the male protagonist guessed it and asked him to pretend? It's so cliché, we agreed to go crazy together
(?>?<)/?
Have my comments been swallowed?
Damn, are you feeling better?
I saw your reply, and I thought about it again, Harry, forget it, after all, if the teacher had to watch the replica of James abducting the replica of Lily again, he might go crazy.
Snape: Because Potter entered the classroom with his left foot first, Gryffindor will deduct 100 points and be suspended for a month.
Harry: Uh
Snape: Talk back to the professor, and another 100 points will be deducted.
这是直接坑了啊？
Dad, I want to point out a small shortcoming of yours. Please don't be angry. It's like this. At present, the characters in Chinese writing are a little bit flat, and the plot progress bar is a little bit too fast, resulting in a little bit of streamlined and thin feeling. You can try various methods to make the plot fuller and the characters more vivid. The more the article makes readers feel involved, the stronger the rendering power and appeal will be, and the more brilliant it will be. It is just my personal opinion and reference only. Whether you adopt it or not is up to you. No criticism is intended. If you need a pat, please pat it gently.
Ps: You're welcome! I'm about to take the college entrance examination, so I won't come here often. I'll definitely come and see you when I have time. Chirmi~
Will the teacher still write two-dimensional fan fiction? I have fallen into the teacher's two serials and n pre-receipts and I can't get out [crying] [poor]
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I finally saw Qin Ze. I really like the author. It's so good and so good that I can't get enough of it! !
I like it. The copywriting has been changed. The previous copywriting made people uncomfortable.
I'm interested, the author's skills are so good, I feel like I'm immersed in the scene. Watching the Queen commit suicide made me so heartbroken [crying] [crying] [crying]
The first half is good to read. It's hard to say what follows.
The author is great. Is the birth of a child probably in that part of the article? Please inform
The author, if we just talk about certain qualities of the protagonist, she is very much in line with Slytherin, decisiveness (to be honest, I don't see the decisiveness, but I feel it vaguely), ambition (the desire to protect everyone is also a kind of ambition), and courage (although this word is very similar to the lions in Gryffindor next door, but it is undeniable that snakes need courage, and we need extremely sharp courage). From these aspects alone, the protagonist is still very good, although some things are a bit reckless. Judging from the past life, she is not very old, and her living environment is not bad. Although she does not live under the pampering of her parents, it is still close. The living environment in this life is not challenging, and she also has the love of her parents and the love of her two brothers. It is not a problem for someone to be childish due to the influence of biological age, and it is not a problem to be reckless and soft. From now on, there are indeed some Mary Sue tendencies, but in reality, such a person is understandable. The author's writing style is a bit immature and green. Considering that the author is not familiar with writing for the first time, I hope you can support me. (I can only write this after roughly reading a paragraph of your article, and some minor details are still unclear.) Here, I sincerely give the author a few small suggestions: 1. Please determine your writing style first. I know it is difficult for novices to determine their writing style, but for some things, the sooner you make a decision, the better. 2. The various details in the article are a bit messy. I also know that it is your first time to write an article and you cannot grasp the details. However, the addition of details can add a lot of color to the work. On the contrary, an article without details can only be called an outline. 3. The author, your writing style is a bit like those written ten years ago. This does not mean that you are lagging behind. I still like those articles very much, but I just think there may be some problems. Your writing style may not be suitable for Jinjiang today. 4. Every article written by an author is the author's hard work. I am not commenting on you with criticism, education, or malicious harm. I just hope that a new author can do better. Everyone's style is different, and I can't force anything. For example, if I could create your style, it would obviously be impossible. I can't explain my writing style clearly, it's a little bit dark. "Good luck girl, you should understand that the gift of fate comes with a price. The first time you paid for it with your life, but this time, what can you replace it with?" "No matter what it is. Since I can give my life, I can also repay my soul. What's more, isn't the purpose of my coming here just for them? Destiny, since you know what I will say, I will give everything I have, but you just look at me indifferently. You are really evil!" "Oh, my dear girl, don't you think this is interesting? Everything is my pawn, but you have more choices, wouldn't you do this?" "No, of course I won't. Those people, for the sake of the future, can only become your pawns. As you said, I am a lucky girl. I have the right to choose, so all I have to do is to overthrow your chessboard." "I'll see, my dear girl" "As you wish" Ahem, sorry, I accidentally wrote "hi". This text is actually a short paragraph in my writing. If it is inappropriate, I will definitely delete it. I wish you good luck and wish your articles will get better and better.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Xiaojiang come on! ! ! ! ! You are the best baby! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ah, I thought of Article 20
Do I need to spend another Galleons to buy the wand produced by the pig farm? (Okay, I also know it is to make things easier) But Ollivander wouldn't be able to recognize that this is not a wand he made himself?
The poor monk recommended Xiaolong, mainly because the Geminis are not easy to manage. I am not surprised that the Geminis produce and sell themselves...
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! ! !
No CP means whoring all, I want them all!
No one considers being a professor, but I'm afraid that my lack of writing skills will make me look like a substitute for literature.
Www The ideas are quite interesting! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Like] [Like [Like] [Red Heart]
You don't have a fever, are you feeling soft? And the male protagonist guessed it and asked him to pretend? It's so cliché, we agreed to go crazy together
(?>?<)/?
Have my comments been swallowed?
Damn, are you feeling better?
I saw your reply, and I thought about it again, Harry, forget it, after all, if the teacher had to watch the replica of James abducting the replica of Lily again, he might go crazy. Snape: Because Potter entered the classroom with his left foot first, Gryffindor will deduct 100 points and be suspended for a month. Harry: Uh Snape: Talk back to the professor, and another 100 points will be deducted.
这是直接坑了啊？
Dad, I want to point out a small shortcoming of yours. Please don't be angry. It's like this. At present, the characters in Chinese writing are a little bit flat, and the plot progress bar is a little bit too fast, resulting in a little bit of streamlined and thin feeling. You can try various methods to make the plot fuller and the characters more vivid. The more the article makes readers feel involved, the stronger the rendering power and appeal will be, and the more brilliant it will be. It is just my personal opinion and reference only. Whether you adopt it or not is up to you. No criticism is intended. If you need a pat, please pat it gently. Ps: You're welcome! I'm about to take the college entrance examination, so I won't come here often. I'll definitely come and see you when I have time. Chirmi~
Will the teacher still write two-dimensional fan fiction? I have fallen into the teacher's two serials and n pre-receipts and I can't get out [crying] [poor]
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I finally saw Qin Ze. I really like the author. It's so good and so good that I can't get enough of it! !
I like it. The copywriting has been changed. The previous copywriting made people uncomfortable.
I'm interested, the author's skills are so good, I feel like I'm immersed in the scene. Watching the Queen commit suicide made me so heartbroken [crying] [crying] [crying]
The first half is good to read. It's hard to say what follows.
The author is great. Is the birth of a child probably in that part of the article? Please inform