[Genshin Impact] I Am Amazing at Writing Fan Fiction.

After reading the whole article, I think my wife's idea is very good. The article is well foreshadowed, the writing is elegant and sophisticated, and the setting is complete and unobtrusive. The article was originally supposed to be excellent, but unfortunately my wife didn't grasp the rhythm well enough in some parts. The first is the second life, that is, the mortal life. The emotions are in place, but the process is a bit cliché. It's not that my wife's writing is bad, it's just that there are many alternative crematoriums in Jinjiang. The plot itself is not outstanding. The readers actually have a basic idea of the subsequent plot development, so it is easy to abandon the article. Now comes the third life. The biggest problem in the third life is that when Taoyao first enters the mountain gate, the readers are obviously there to see the emotional entanglement between the two protagonists, but the plot goes all the way to the fairy upgrade flow. I also have to admit that I didn't feel the pleasure of being slapped in the face while watching Tao Yao cultivating immortals. I just wanted to watch her get along with Chu Li. But the interaction between the two people was the least interesting. It was basically one-sided. Chu Li regretted Chu Li's compensation for Tao Yao's rejection. There may be an error here. The audience for the upgraded fairy tale and the crematorium emotional flow are actually different. If Taoyao, Xiangru, and Jun Qianzi were on the set of the upgraded streaming film, I would definitely be willing to watch it, but with the tragic love story of the second-generation king Chu Li and princess Taoyao ahead, I only care about how the two people will develop in the second life. Finally, there is the first life as a foreshadowing. My personal favorite is the first life, not only because the foreshadowing in the whole text is coherent, but also in just a few chapters, the innocent Taoyao and the gentle and persistent Chu Li are portrayed very three-dimensionally. Especially the story of the two people. The kind-hearted dragon left the red lotus in the palm of the Buddha due to his selfish thoughts, which led to the subsequent collapse of the situation. The two people were driven by fate to tragedy, which has a sense of fate. In fact, after reading the entire article, I don't think Chu Li was tortured enough at all. His characters are consistent. Whether it is the ruthless king Chu Li or the gentle dragon king Chu Li, they are both gods who look down on all living beings from a high place. They are indecisive. No matter whether they are kings, immortals or gods, he always wants too much and cannot give up. It was his inability to give up and his greed that made the whole story begin The same goes for Tao Yao. She was born with a blank slate. She either loves purely or hates truly. It is difficult for her to control her own life, so she wants to be wild and gain some freedom for herself. The protagonists are not perfect characters. Of course, if they were perfect characters, this would not be a story about chasing a wife in the crematorium. When I read this book, I didn't understand why it only had a few thousand collections. I thought about it carefully and understood the reasons why other readers abandoned the article. The first is that the painting style of Taoyao when she went up the mountain in the previous article was off-kilter. I didn't read that part carefully, so I just skipped over it, just to get a rough idea of what happened. The second is that the torture of Chu Li in the following article was not satisfying enough. When I say not pleasant enough here, I don't mean that Chu Li's torture was not cruel enough. He tortured him too cruelly. But why do we want to see Chu Chuli, because we want to see him change, and we want to see Taoyao become better because he was abused. But no, he was mistreated, but he was still indecisive, and his communication with Taoyao was still inconsistent. As for Taoyao, Chu Li's self-abuse was not good for her. On the contrary, she had been suffering because of other people during that time, because the Emperor of Heaven had even separated her relatives and friends because of Sanskrit. Compared with Taoyao's pain, Chu Li's pain was more like a kind of self-comfort, because Taoyao didn't get a chance to breathe mentally. Third, the character's stance is too one-sided I'm not saying that my wife's characters are not profound. On the contrary, in addition to Fanyin and other tool villains, there are a few people who impressed me deeply, including Moro, Xiangru, and Jun Suizi. Especially the part about Xiangru impressed me deeply. She was not a bad girl originally, and Jun Suizi was not a bad person originally. I was quite moved by the part where Jun Suizi chose Ling Dong and Xiang Ru blessed them. But my wife later made the two of them into villains. I felt sad when I watched it. Xiangru can understand that she is not a girl with strong opinions of her own. But Jun Suizi, who chose the demon, will eventually accompany Xiaohong to kill Taoyao. Taoyao's best friend on her way to immortality ended up getting separated from her. This is the issue I just mentioned. At the end of this article, except for Mo Luo, no one is in the same position as Chu Li Taoyao. Their former friends want to kill them, their subordinates Shen Yin, and everyone else in the demon world except Xia is deliberately taking advantage of them. This is so sad. Although the reversal of positions between Jun Suizi and Xiang Ru can be said to be justified, to me, they can no longer be regarded as friends from the moment they left. In the end, Taoyao didn't have a single friend except Mo Luo, and Xiaolang was also one of Chu Li's souls. She was isolated and helpless, so that in the later stage, Chu Li's actions and his efforts seemed even less worth mentioning. Because Taoyao's tragedy no longer lies in love, I even think that she will no longer have deep feelings for Chu Li, because her pain tolerance threshold has reached a very high limit. I think what my wife probably wanted to write at first was just a story about chasing his wife in the crematorium. But the cool thing about Chasing Wife Crematorium is that it suppresses first and then improves. The protagonist will get back all the love, career and status he lost later. But my wife gave this story a very wonderful and complete setting. If this was a story about cultivating immortals and upgrading, it would be very complete. The red lotus in front of the Buddha attained the great truth after experiencing many adversities. It's a pity that the two conflicted. We waited for Taoyao to get back everything that belonged to her after cultivating immortality, but when she went through suffering and gave up and returned to the palm of the Buddha, she was not compensated. After writing so much, I feel that my wife has the ability to write excellent works. A book is just a trial and error in the past. If my wife adjusts her direction, she will definitely be able to write better works. Looking forward to seeing your work on the gold list next time!

To be honest, I just saw a sentence, "We may even see Ramos tackle Ronaldo to protect Messi in our lifetime." It's absolutely hilarious. Grass, grew up

Damn, this is not a movie-viewing body. A movie-watching body means that all (or some of the protagonists) are transported into a space, and then they watch together what will happen in the past or in the future.

When will the second part be released? May is almost over, and all the doctors are offline.

... Watching it for the first time? I read it with mixed emotions...? It's just that the author really doesn't need to make some things so clear with metaphors... I feel distressed after reading the whole article - what is this - oh, it hurts - the old man on the subway is beating at any time while looking at his mobile phone... The plot is indeed very novel, please come on!

Hahahahahahahaha, Xiaolong is persecuted in every book (bushi )

Hahahahaha seventy articles a month

I saw the author added refined comments! So, author, are you still here?

The second brush found out that Xiaoxing is about to release a second part! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What a surprise! ! ! I was so excited that I went downstairs and ran a few laps [come on] [come on] [come on]

So exciting ah ah ah ah

Teacher, are you still writing this book? [Crying] I really like Ye Liu [Crying]

I'm fucking eating eating eating eating eating eating!

Wow, what a thrilling feeling

I feel like Yiluo doesn't have bad intentions, but she's used to overpowering her sister everywhere. I feel sorry for Yiyi [bursts crying] but Yi really doesn't give me a sense of security [please]

Zhou, long time no see (although you may have no impression of me, I still want to start with this) I am one of your readers. I have followed you since you posted your first work on Douyin, and started reading your book "Spring in the Dead Tree". I don't know if you still remember that you followed me on Douyin, but we still chatted a few times on Douyin, and I have read all of your books (I started reading "Dead Trees in Spring" before it was locked and you kept deleting it). I'm one year younger than you. Logically speaking, you should have finished the exam by now. I wish you good results and can enroll in the school of your choice (of course, I believe that with your ability, you can achieve something no matter whether the school you go to is good or not [Blue Heart]) When I found out that you were selling your Douyin account, my first reaction was that I was a little worried. Although you may not really have an impression of me, I did treat you as a friend. We were in different provinces. I was really worried because something happened to you (because of my mentality, I was very sentimental and a bit hypocritical at that time). Because I didn't have any other contact information for you, I could only come to your Jinjiang account. I found that most of your novels were locked and had not been updated, so I was even more worried. I went through a lot of things later. I would go to Jinjiang from time to time to see if you had updated. Then I had a very bad mentality for a long time (including today. I was supposed to take the Dragon Boat Festival holiday today, but I didn't go to school). Many things were forgotten by me. But fortunately, your novel was updated. Although it was last year, I am still very worried about you, but at least it means that nothing serious happened to you. I don't know when you will see these words, but I hope you will be happy, happy and safe when you see them [Rainbow Fart] (Remember to reply to me! If you and I can still see it, I will definitely add it back on Douyin. My Douyin name is the name of this account) Zhou, I wish you peace and success, and I wish we can all be happy [laughing]

I really like this cheerful, free and warm style [shy]

Simon came a little later so they could kiss for a while [Calico Cat Head]

The shiny Bekkeni is really too suai, Pasu

... So unstable and a pitfall

Ah, the five cats are so cute

There is a storyline about Naruto, it's so exciting [dog head holding rose][dog head holding rose][dog head holding rose]