The delicate-looking Bai Erer who can only cry is bound to the White Lotus Counterattack System, thus embarking on the path of constantly conquering the male protagonist.
Campus World: The aloof academic master vs. The scheming Bailian school beauty
Original male protagonist: A bumbling woman. Current male protagonist: You ignored me again today.
Ancient World: The indifferent and sinister prince vs the weak white lotus daughter
Before: boring. Now: When can we get married?
Doomsday world: The powerful boss vs. The selfish white lotus and dodder flower
Original: Who are you? Now: Do you want to leave me again?
The world of the entertainment industry: the movie star who has no desires and desires vs. The Internet celebrity who only has a few boats
It turned out: she was just a scheming girl. Now: it's another day of thinking about (simple and kind-hearted) Lei'er.
The World of Cultivation: A righteous and taciturn genius boy vs. A vicious and power-hungry young lady
It turns out: I'm not interested in you! Now: When will the engagement be fulfilled?
Bai Er'er didn't expect that she just came to do a task, but she lost her entire life! ?
Tentatively decide on these worlds
Meng is new to writing for the first time and is a novice at writing.
More than half of the manuscript has been saved
Intention: With you I find the meaning of existence
Reader comments
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Why don't you write it down? It's very beautiful! ! ! !
I think there is no need to write the content in brackets, because it has nothing to do with the main plot, and it would be a bit awkward to mark it specifically.
How can I say that the plot outline is okay, but the details are rather strange. One chapter says that the seventh prince is "like a real nobleman." Let's not say that the title of nobleman is a bit Western, like a nobleman? He's already a prince, isn't he expensive? There are quite a lot of details like this.
Then there is the character design. How can I say the heroine's character design? It can feel that it is already moving in that direction, but it is a bit too much.
Finally, some parts are too procrastinating. Good articles are often concise and accurate. When revising the article in the future, you can try it. Some parts can be deleted without affecting the meaning you want to express. Don't delete them carelessly. Don't let words become a burden.
If you are a newbie writing articles, they are actually pretty good. If you improve your writing style, read relevant popular science when writing, and improve some literary common sense and writing logic, it will be much better. You will be confused in the early stage, but keep writing, I feel you will be very good in the future!
I set it to taste delicious. My wife left a weibooo message. Please pay attention to prevent me from getting lost~~~
Why don't you write it down? It's very beautiful! ! ! !
I think there is no need to write the content in brackets, because it has nothing to do with the main plot, and it would be a bit awkward to mark it specifically.
How can I say that the plot outline is okay, but the details are rather strange. One chapter says that the seventh prince is "like a real nobleman." Let's not say that the title of nobleman is a bit Western, like a nobleman? He's already a prince, isn't he expensive? There are quite a lot of details like this. Then there is the character design. How can I say the heroine's character design? It can feel that it is already moving in that direction, but it is a bit too much. Finally, some parts are too procrastinating. Good articles are often concise and accurate. When revising the article in the future, you can try it. Some parts can be deleted without affecting the meaning you want to express. Don't delete them carelessly. Don't let words become a burden. If you are a newbie writing articles, they are actually pretty good. If you improve your writing style, read relevant popular science when writing, and improve some literary common sense and writing logic, it will be much better. You will be confused in the early stage, but keep writing, I feel you will be very good in the future!
Damn, there is no update yet~??
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