714好~~~我就权把这个当论坛回贴了...虽然真的感觉很奇怪ORZ
文章也陪了我好长时间,从去年暑假开始筹划转眼一年又到了呢,真是时光荏苒(谜:你在感慨什么啊)。
那我也姑且勉强算个small writer好了XD。如果每个人看文能有着属于自己感官的理解,而并非是拙劣如我去强加传达的什么,那真是一件让人觉得非常开心而有乐趣的事情呢。
感谢看文的大家,在小7载文的过程中每个人都是非常珍贵而重要的part,嗯,是值得感激和珍藏的一段旅程^^
to 其实我从来不知道到底是哪个又有几个某人的某人:
谢谢关心我会好好备考的(那还猫上网来...)
Congratulation! Finished such a big work! \(^o^)/
The story has been with us for a long period of time.
Gave me lots of emotional roller-coaster ride, up and down, left and right turn.
I am only a small reader, can't comment the writing skill or structure of the story.
But can say loundly, 似慕 and 紫笙's love had deeply touched me, their characters has sucessfully enter my heart!
May be I can't totally recevied/understand 小7's message in the stor, but received the story in my own understanding.
Once again, thanks 小7, so fortunated to play a little part in you first long novel! m(__)m
迟了七年的补分…
大人真牛, 一直潜水看完全文, 不得不留言加分呢.
文章很长,文字读起来也很伤神,不过还是让人欲罢不能~~
文笔很好啊 看的出文化造诣很深 不过这也是缺点 让人觉得有些做作 很多地方描写太累赘 反而牵连了故事的情节 俗话说:水满则溢 月满则亏 过多追求文字、词汇的堆叠 让人看多了就有些腻味了 物以稀为贵 极度浪漫细腻生涩的句型、构思的追求 若少些 则更好; 相信大人凭着深厚的文化功底 一定能再进一步创佳作
神无月的巫女~真的很像哦~ 喜欢和千歌音相似的慕~
迟钝这件事做得好,那就叫做性格。 呵呵,有道理
让人想起神无月呢…如果她们也能打破宿命…
呼,好长总算看完啦,文辞好美,佩服佩服,看样子这辈子也做不了写字的人了,呜呜…鲜花献上,小的闪人…
714好~~~我就权把这个当论坛回贴了...虽然真的感觉很奇怪ORZ 文章也陪了我好长时间,从去年暑假开始筹划转眼一年又到了呢,真是时光荏苒(谜:你在感慨什么啊)。 那我也姑且勉强算个small writer好了XD。如果每个人看文能有着属于自己感官的理解,而并非是拙劣如我去强加传达的什么,那真是一件让人觉得非常开心而有乐趣的事情呢。 感谢看文的大家,在小7载文的过程中每个人都是非常珍贵而重要的part,嗯,是值得感激和珍藏的一段旅程^^ to 其实我从来不知道到底是哪个又有几个某人的某人: 谢谢关心我会好好备考的(那还猫上网来...)
Congratulation! Finished such a big work! \(^o^)/ The story has been with us for a long period of time. Gave me lots of emotional roller-coaster ride, up and down, left and right turn. I am only a small reader, can't comment the writing skill or structure of the story. But can say loundly, 似慕 and 紫笙's love had deeply touched me, their characters has sucessfully enter my heart! May be I can't totally recevied/understand 小7's message in the stor, but received the story in my own understanding. Once again, thanks 小7, so fortunated to play a little part in you first long novel! m(__)m