It's quite exciting~~! I've been wondering about China Unicom and China Mobile!
You made me cry again, but this time I cried happily. I didn't expect that you would remember every detail of the six years between Xiao Yu and Xiao Bing so clearly. I am very touched. I now feel that I am the happiest person in the world.
Sweat - -, Mo Wei, is she a villain? - -, Alas, the fate of the protagonist is so tragic - -
Is it Lianwen? The style of each chapter is very different! It was not written by one person~ The author replied:
Yes, observe carefully! It's a joint article, writing each other's images, and there's a very interesting process involved.
Come on, keep writing, I kind of understand what I saw at the beginning...
I actually forgot to rate... Post again
Cherish your blessings~~~~~~~~~~~
I want to give you a truckload of bricks!
烂尾烂尾烂尾~~
Congratulations to Mr. Ye for winning the beauty home.
~~~ Don't be careless and attack that person named Yamada Ryoko!!!
Send flowers
Because the story has just begun, I can't say it too definitely now. Just give it a try, and the world is still unfolding in your mind. First of all, the author has given us a suspense concisely and neatly. It has the desire to let people get into the pit and uncover the mystery. The writing style is always smooth, but the description lacks a certain heat. It feels flat.
It has reached the third chapter, which is still the beginning of a story. If you look at the beginning of the novel, the author's writing is a bit complicated. Each chapter of the author follows one plot after another. This avoids procrastination in the general sense, but it leads to another procrastination - what is this beginning about? Who is the protagonist? Where is the entanglement? How do the different plots of these protagonists relate to the center of this article?
It is obvious that the author has something in mind, but what if you look at it from the reader's perspective? It seems that the plots and characters in these three chapters are a bit messy and broken. But if you carefully stitch them together, you can really understand it and find the key, but you feel that the process is so tiring and boring.
When the author is writing an article with a suspenseful nature, he must naturally pay attention to drawing hidden lines, laying out foreshadowing, and creating psychedelia. Therefore, the writing style must be more precise. Some of the things he writes that seem boring today may become important clues in the future. But even so, he must grasp the key points. There is a lot to say, but when he says it, he must unfold it in an orderly and clear manner.
This is my first review, so please accept it. After all, the number of words in the article is still small, so it is too early to judge at the moment.
Did I miss it? It was mentioned somewhere that the aunt and the child were back. And why didn't you let your uncle become the emperor from the beginning (his uncle didn't die this time. This way, you don't have to go through the trouble of setting up a prince ()
Biubiubiu~
It hasn't been updated yet, eh eh eh
Finally, I said, women are auditory animals.
Yes, hahaha, that's him
Hahahahahahaha
It would be great to write more happy diaries of Yu Helin~~ Let Ying's death be far away! !
Wwwwww Finished spreading flowers! !
It's quite exciting~~! I've been wondering about China Unicom and China Mobile!
You made me cry again, but this time I cried happily. I didn't expect that you would remember every detail of the six years between Xiao Yu and Xiao Bing so clearly. I am very touched. I now feel that I am the happiest person in the world.
Sweat - -, Mo Wei, is she a villain? - -, Alas, the fate of the protagonist is so tragic - -
Is it Lianwen? The style of each chapter is very different! It was not written by one person~ The author replied: Yes, observe carefully! It's a joint article, writing each other's images, and there's a very interesting process involved.
Come on, keep writing, I kind of understand what I saw at the beginning...
I actually forgot to rate... Post again
Cherish your blessings~~~~~~~~~~~
I want to give you a truckload of bricks!
烂尾烂尾烂尾~~
Congratulations to Mr. Ye for winning the beauty home.
~~~ Don't be careless and attack that person named Yamada Ryoko!!! Send flowers
Because the story has just begun, I can't say it too definitely now. Just give it a try, and the world is still unfolding in your mind. First of all, the author has given us a suspense concisely and neatly. It has the desire to let people get into the pit and uncover the mystery. The writing style is always smooth, but the description lacks a certain heat. It feels flat. It has reached the third chapter, which is still the beginning of a story. If you look at the beginning of the novel, the author's writing is a bit complicated. Each chapter of the author follows one plot after another. This avoids procrastination in the general sense, but it leads to another procrastination - what is this beginning about? Who is the protagonist? Where is the entanglement? How do the different plots of these protagonists relate to the center of this article? It is obvious that the author has something in mind, but what if you look at it from the reader's perspective? It seems that the plots and characters in these three chapters are a bit messy and broken. But if you carefully stitch them together, you can really understand it and find the key, but you feel that the process is so tiring and boring. When the author is writing an article with a suspenseful nature, he must naturally pay attention to drawing hidden lines, laying out foreshadowing, and creating psychedelia. Therefore, the writing style must be more precise. Some of the things he writes that seem boring today may become important clues in the future. But even so, he must grasp the key points. There is a lot to say, but when he says it, he must unfold it in an orderly and clear manner. This is my first review, so please accept it. After all, the number of words in the article is still small, so it is too early to judge at the moment.
Did I miss it? It was mentioned somewhere that the aunt and the child were back. And why didn't you let your uncle become the emperor from the beginning (his uncle didn't die this time. This way, you don't have to go through the trouble of setting up a prince ()
Biubiubiu~
It hasn't been updated yet, eh eh eh
Finally, I said, women are auditory animals.
Yes, hahaha, that's him
Hahahahahahaha
It would be great to write more happy diaries of Yu Helin~~ Let Ying's death be far away! !