108 Ways Male Insects Die

It's over. As I was lighting up my cigarette, I was thinking about what to do with Mu Qiu. You three might as well live your life together.

The first part is very detailed, but the second part is really short and jumpy. It feels like everything in the army is over in fifty chapters. Obviously, a life of two hundred years should be longer than the first thirty or forty years. I don't understand why I can write about the difficulties and growth lines in training in the previous article, but in the later article I won't be able to maintain success even if I become a legion commander and can't fight? Can't we write about infrastructure in such a remote and backward place? In fact, there is not much progress in the emotional line. Maybe because I really liked the previous article, and the setting in my wife's commentary was also very interesting, so I was disappointed because it was so sloppy in the end. I hope my wife can rewrite it and improve it in the extra chapter.

Oh, will there be a movie theater? Feifei's unknown past will be revealed across time?

The more I watch, the more I feel that the plot is going outrageous... [Crack][Crack][Crack]

It's okay. You can read it to kill time when you're bored, but you can't read it carefully. The advantage is that it does not create a completely different world view by blindly and fanatically praising the nobleness and holiness of human morality like a large number of assembly-line Zerg novels. It has created a reasonable Zerg setting, and the look and feel is not bad. The shortcoming is probably that the plot arrangement is young, a bit like writing whatever comes to mind. The early stage is very cute, the middle stage is not bad, just read it in the later stage, and the writing style is a bit immature. As for the love line, I was quite satisfied. I originally read it as a novel about raising a child without CP. The love line appeared late and ended in a mediocre manner. At least it didn't make the protagonist fall in love and become crazy about love. I was already very satisfied. In summary, this is a pretty good article in Zerg. (Stacked armor, I think)

The tone is flat: He is a god to me [dog head]

It feels a little bit off guard, so weird, but it doesn't seem like there's anything weird about it [changed]

A family of four will be happy forever [laughing]

The male insect brother who passed away before?

I want to know what my next book will be [A Dog's Head Holds a Rose]

The extra chapter is not over yet, (look into your head)

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