How to Work Undercover for My Brother

It feels like Xu Feiyu is just using Son of Dawn. . . And it does not reflect the connection between the various vests. . .

I didn't read many main stories before, but this one is really amazing. The character of Kaede Yagami is very successful. I really like him. The relationship between the protagonist and Shuichi, Rei, Sokai, and the inheritance of beliefs are very touching. Everyone has their shining points. I love gin so much. The final death is also very grand. The police academy team is also saved. Sure enough, the survival of the police academy team is the result of strong combat power. The roots are so cute. The cat party is ecstatic

The ending is too rushed, and it can be seen that the author had a hard time writing intermittently... Although many things are not explained clearly, at least it is not unfinished... I also like this ending, but I am still a little regretful.

It's okay to stop here. So far, the author hasn't written too deeply, so it doesn't feel particularly heavy. But in fact, just like the last chapter, there are always people who take pleasure in the suffering of others, but there are always people who look forward to being rescued and stop those who do evil. In the end, the government and the Children of the Dawn maintain this balance together, until the government does not need the Sons of the Dawn at all, and the 'Children of the Dawn' will always exist if the evil is not reduced. That's it. Just relax when reading the article. When you're older, you don't want to read the article until you have snot and tears.

It's finished, but it feels like the author hasn't finished writing a lot of foreshadowing, and the protagonist's situation hasn't been explained clearly. . But the setting is really good, and the conflicts between the characters are generally good, but some details are still not perfect, but it is really a good article! ! It would be great if I could be more patient and perfect the background and foreshadowing. I can afford the wait! ! ! The ending of the characters is indeed quite consistent with the characters, but the story between Menghuai and Jiang Ruixue in the end was a bit rushed. Why did Jiang Ruixue tell the truth? What's the benefit to him? He still wants Sons of Dawn to disband, maybe I didn't look carefully hahaha I really like how the author writes about the conflicts between several camps! ! It would be even better if it could be improved a little bit! ! ! Come on come on!

The setting is really good, but the author didn't write it in depth, and it felt like it stopped abruptly.

The main part is good, but the ending feels a bit rushed and unfinished

It's obviously a waste of money.

[Love Eyes][Love Eyes][Love Eyes] Big brother is so nice. He strangled me more than 200 times with cooperation. I want it too [Shy]

This is bad... If I did something wrong, I can let the law punish me instead of letting me read this article. Did the author want to write something and was sanctioned? At the end of the story, there is only a scene in the mirror, which I suspected was a dream. Then, the world still hasn't changed, the top federal officials are still doing evil in secret, ordinary people who are unlucky are still being preyed on, and the criminals will not be punished as they should be according to the law. What a terrifying world this is! There is a saying that when you find a cockroach, there is already a cockroach nest in the house. From the previous chapters, what I see is that this federation is in ruins. There is collusion between politics and business, deceiving the superiors and concealing the truth from the inferiors. The powerful class violates the law and will not be punished due to due legal procedures. The victims and their families are tortured mentally and physically, and have to pay the price with their lives. In the early stage, I was the only high-ranking figure in Zhengfang that I had a favorable impression of. I thought it was hope, but it turned out to be disappointment. Even members of Congress are breaking the law. What else can I say? From the older generation to the younger generation, everything sucks. Really, I don't ask too much. As long as it is revealed at the end that the oppressed people have the consciousness to resist this broken federation, I will be satisfied. Unfortunately, it is not. I feel mentally delayed!

Everything feels like a dream, the story is over, and I should wake up, but why do I have so many uneasy feelings? Obviously... This is just a game, a novel... It's over, but the person I like can't come back. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. But I still want to cry. This is the he that I think is the least like he. I'm sorry that the stamina is a bit too strong. I feel so bad. But I have already expected this ending. Maybe this is the best. After everything, everyone still does what they want to do and what they should do. I like that the world in the story will change for the better, it will!

It's the player's HE, to achieve the HE ending of Mirror Flowers and Water Moon...

Www still feels a little rushed (gesturing). I feel that Shang Xuyin could have more scenes, such as the emotional scene with his brother.

Let's just stop here, it's already pretty good, but now that I think about it, Ayu can also be...

The ending is actually not bad. After all, it is difficult for anyone to give a perfect answer to solve social conflicts. . But why did it end so quickly? ! It feels like there are still a lot of things that have not been said. The conflicts buried earlier have not fully exploded, making it not enjoyable enough to watch. . It's a bit too bland, especially when Xiao Yu's identity is exposed, which should be the most exciting point in the whole novel, but it still feels a bit off. (I want to say something else: I especially want to see the reactions of Pei Han and Xingzhou!! This point has been completely avoided. Pei Xiaohan's time has been stagnant. In fact, I really want to see the plot of Xiaoyu confronting Pei Xiaohan after his identity is exposed and trying to instigate him to join the Sons of Dawn. Xiaoyu When Yu was still undercover in the Special Ops Department, the conflict of ideas and positions could be concealed, but what about after returning to Son of Dawn? Will he feel a chill from the inside out when he looks at the familiar and unfamiliar person opposite him? The other side of Xiaoyu was finally fully exposed and had to be faced.) (Or if the Sons of Dawn were completely defeated, Xiaoyu, as a player, did not want to be captured alive and tried to commit suicide with a special weapon but was stopped and controlled. Looking at his brother's eyes that were no longer calm, he had to give up. Thoughts! ! Want to see more crazy Xiaoyu) Although Xiaoyu's choice to withdraw from the camp conflict is quite reasonable, but for readers like me, it would be more dramatic if Xiaoyu could stick to his position because of his ideals or the warmth he feels from other members. . In short, the ending can be calm and warm, but it would be better if it is the calm after the great storm qwq

Was it forced? What separates my brother and Xiaoyu is not only the difference in concepts, but also the lives and sacrifices of so many people. How can they continue to live together without any grudges? On the contrary, I feel that the two of them are completely different. The elder brother continues to adhere to his ideals, and Xiaoyu continues to work in the organization. This is the most suitable ending for the two of them [crying]

I originally thought there would be a revolution in the ending

Harmful. It really sucks. . . The front part is clearly shaped so well, but the last part is like being forced to make dumplings

This ending is really rushed. If it wasn't rushed, why did you stop updating for so long and suddenly the update is finished?

It's a bit rushed, but it seems that life revolution, life bondage and so on are all there is to it. Finished spreading flowers!

I read this article a long time ago, and I still like it very much. The plot and rhythm are good, and it didn't fall apart in the later stages. Some fast-travel stories fall apart at the end.

Congratulations on the completion! Although it was rushed, I wanted a happy ending.

There is still a lot that has not been explained. Can you look forward to the extra chapters?

It feels like there should be a big climax,,, it was well written, but why did it end?

I watched it a long time ago. I still feel very happy after watching it 2 times.

Finished reading. I cried and laughed during this period. Thank you very much. Thank you for meeting me. You are worth everything. When I finished reading Chapter 49, I felt timid for the Nth time, just like every other book I read. I'm afraid of the end, so I think, why don't I stop for a while, and then when I feel OK, I can continue reading, then I can finish it? But in this matter, I should know myself quite well. Once I stop and want to pick it up again, I don't know when it will be, so I told myself to finish reading it and at least "give" their story an ending. Because both "The Reason for the Formation of Track Clouds" and "The Butterfly Story" have scenes of getting married and giving birth to a baby, I thought this one would be the same, but haha, I really liked this ending, so I stopped here. It was just right. I am very happy and have a long future. Just keep moving forward, we are always here. It's been a long time since I've read your article, and every time I open a new one, I'm always pleasantly surprised. You are really getting better and better, there is no doubt about this, everyone can see it, please believe in yourself and be sure of yourself, you are really good, the articles you write are really beautiful and superb, you can put your hands on your hips and tell yourself "Emma, ​​how can I write so well"! ! ! Hahaha. Emm, the next one should be in "Yousha". I also hope that the new article will go smoothly. No matter what, you should pay attention to your mood state and balance work and rest. I once saw a point of view on the Internet about whether hard work is greater than talent. [Effort has a second advantage over talent: it can be changed and improved through acquired influences. Although there are high and low levels of talent, innate talent is limited, while hard work has unlimited possibilities. Therefore, hard work often determines personal success and destiny more than talent. Even if you have talent, it will be difficult to achieve without hard work] (This point of view may be a bit off-topic here, but what I want to express is that every effort you put in is never in vain, it is given back to you, them, and us little by little. Your future has unlimited possibilities) The Chongjing series has finished spreading flowers. I hope that they in the parallel world can be healthy, smooth, happy and happy. From there, move on to the next chapter.

Good-looking and good-looking. Three brushes

Will I still see updates in my lifetime [vomiting blood]

What is the senior's character like? Such a contradictory feeling