Love, he originally thought he would not have that kind of feeling...
For twenty years, she has always regarded that calm and elegant man as a close relative like a father...
However, as the years go by, feelings change silently...
When he tasted jealousy for the first time in his life, he could no longer regard her as the most beloved junior in his memory. He could only think about her, look at her, love her, and long for her. Just when she was determined to give up and let her be with the man she liked, her life was about to end...
She couldn't believe that the man in front of her was someone who doted on her like a beloved daughter. His cold and deep eyes were burning with another emotion that shocked her. Wherever he looked, even his childhood sweetheart who had just confessed to her not long ago did not dare to take a step closer to her...
When hesitation and giving up turn into asking and plundering...
The pampering and care of elders turns into the passionate love between lovers...
When those eyes as dark blue as the ocean under the moon stared at her quietly...
How does she, who is frightened and smart, make a choice? …
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After the completion, I need to overhaul a new version, adopt the suggestions, and cut off part of the supporting characters. There are too many cumbersome jokes in the front, and they cannot be consistent with the rest of the text. I will just make do with it for the time being. My level is limited, and I feel ashamed.
Modifications are very time-consuming, and they are all useless. Please help me.
Filling in the chapters that feel superfluous: paragraphs X to XX to XXX are very wordy and unnecessary!~~~~~~~
I'm looking forward to more sharp and sharp comments. It's best to give a quick and direct response, which will be helpful for future revisions. Thanks in advance.
Conception:
Reader comments
It still feels like it's not in blizzard mode. At first, I didn't quite understand that it didn't involve the police, the company didn't care about the body, etc., So I didn't get into the plot.
Ahhhhhhhhhh love my wife! ! !
~(≧▽≦)/~
After reading it, the author's writing is great and I like it very much. As a person who likes diving, I came out to express my feelings. I was very moved after reading it. I am very happy to come across this book. I wish the people in the story happiness forever. I also hope that the author will have everything go well and be safe and happy.
Congratulations on the completion! ! ! (My reflex arc...) I have been too busy recently and have no time to look at the update results. When I came back, I was caught off guard and it was over..._(:_∠) There is one less person to chase...
No one can explain this thing clearly. I think Xiaoli's worries are justified. . .
But I don't think Yukimura will give up so easily. There's something good to watch~··
Where is this week's update?
Yes, it's distorted as I write it. There is a feeling that Onihime is the protagonist (oo ) Maybe it's because Ao's description is too little (●°u°●) " Onihime and Ibaraki are cp|ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ
,,
Have! The author is great~ Come on!
Suddenly I really want to read Liu Jie and Viscount's article
Wenwen is great, but it's a pity that there aren't two sweet pet stories. I also want to know more about Wanmei.
I jumped from the end of the world to support you.
New York! I just want to see Nini QAQ
So Brother Hammer only remembered to bring the gay girl back when he was eating after the fight?
Ahhhh~\\(≧▽≦)/~Rhubarb is so sweet~\\(≧▽≦)/~
In Sogas Nei, one goes through the book and the other is reborn. Rounding it all off is Xiao Ma Literature|ω?)
I haven't watched it for several months and I finished it QAQ
It still feels like it's not in blizzard mode. At first, I didn't quite understand that it didn't involve the police, the company didn't care about the body, etc., So I didn't get into the plot.
Ahhhhhhhhhh love my wife! ! !
~(≧▽≦)/~
After reading it, the author's writing is great and I like it very much. As a person who likes diving, I came out to express my feelings. I was very moved after reading it. I am very happy to come across this book. I wish the people in the story happiness forever. I also hope that the author will have everything go well and be safe and happy.
Congratulations on the completion! ! ! (My reflex arc...) I have been too busy recently and have no time to look at the update results. When I came back, I was caught off guard and it was over..._(:_∠) There is one less person to chase...
No one can explain this thing clearly. I think Xiaoli's worries are justified. . . But I don't think Yukimura will give up so easily. There's something good to watch~··
Where is this week's update?
Yes, it's distorted as I write it. There is a feeling that Onihime is the protagonist (oo ) Maybe it's because Ao's description is too little (●°u°●) " Onihime and Ibaraki are cp|ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ
,,
Have! The author is great~ Come on!
Suddenly I really want to read Liu Jie and Viscount's article
Wenwen is great, but it's a pity that there aren't two sweet pet stories. I also want to know more about Wanmei.
I jumped from the end of the world to support you.
New York! I just want to see Nini QAQ
So Brother Hammer only remembered to bring the gay girl back when he was eating after the fight?
Ahhhh~\\(≧▽≦)/~Rhubarb is so sweet~\\(≧▽≦)/~
In Sogas Nei, one goes through the book and the other is reborn. Rounding it all off is Xiao Ma Literature|ω?)
I haven't watched it for several months and I finished it QAQ
What a romantic story