Zuo Wei returned to Guang's side again
Everything starts again, it's not Tanmei~~
Reader comments
By accident, my husband Song Ziyan is already 40 years old~
Very pretty~~~~~~~
Touched
Give the heroine better benefits! It's a bit bullying, and can the heroine stop pretending to be cute? (So disgusting)
Why is there no next chapter? . .
?????? Why aren't there the last two chapters????
Sai You are finally back! ! What a joy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
When will there be a new one?
The plot is average, the writing is average, some small details are ignored, and overall the article seems to be run-down in many places. The point is, I don't see anything particularly bad about this heroine now. She and Xiao Shou will be separated later, so I guess Xiao Gong won't be able to hold her back. So I would like to ask, where do you place the heroine? Although in BL stories, women are cannon fodder. No matter how I write Yuan Gongshou later, I think this is a failure. This article has its cute spots, such as campus. But I hope the author can grasp the idea better and not fall short.
Let the guy who bullies Xue live a life worse than death. I hate being sanctimonious the most.
Finally a happy ending^^
Wow wow wow! This subtle feeling is great
Netizen: Ah ah Comments: "(SD Xianliu) OUT OF AFRICA" Rating: 2 Publication time: 2007-06-06 03:39:57 Chapters reviewed: 1
After reading it, I was very moved~~
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Thank you^^.
Not bad!
Bookmark it!
Big update soon!
Sprinkle flowers~~~~~~~~~~`
By accident, my husband Song Ziyan is already 40 years old~
Very pretty~~~~~~~ Touched
Give the heroine better benefits! It's a bit bullying, and can the heroine stop pretending to be cute? (So disgusting)
Why is there no next chapter? . .
?????? Why aren't there the last two chapters????
Sai You are finally back! ! What a joy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
When will there be a new one?
The plot is average, the writing is average, some small details are ignored, and overall the article seems to be run-down in many places. The point is, I don't see anything particularly bad about this heroine now. She and Xiao Shou will be separated later, so I guess Xiao Gong won't be able to hold her back. So I would like to ask, where do you place the heroine? Although in BL stories, women are cannon fodder. No matter how I write Yuan Gongshou later, I think this is a failure. This article has its cute spots, such as campus. But I hope the author can grasp the idea better and not fall short.
Let the guy who bullies Xue live a life worse than death. I hate being sanctimonious the most.
Finally a happy ending^^
Wow wow wow! This subtle feeling is great
Netizen: Ah ah Comments: "(SD Xianliu) OUT OF AFRICA" Rating: 2 Publication time: 2007-06-06 03:39:57 Chapters reviewed: 1 After reading it, I was very moved~~ ------------- Thank you^^.
Not bad! Bookmark it! Big update soon! Sprinkle flowers~~~~~~~~~~`