Thank you Mr. Tiaoxian for making the cover. It's really beautiful. I like it very much~~~~~~
"In the past, when I went there, the willows and willows lingered. Now when I come to think about it, it is raining and snowing."
When I opened my eyes again, time and space changed.
She once thought it was a foreign land with fantasy powers. As a result... It was discovered that he was a homosexual.
Is this world real, and is "I" real?
The literary preface actually tells the story of a good-for-nothing girl with Wow skills living in the hunter world.
Not Holy Mother, not Xiaobai, not NP.
The heroine does not have the ability and ambition to be arrogant in the world, nor does she have the capital or mood to harvest a lot of beautiful men.
I just want to... Clarify my existence and spend this life in a down-to-earth manner.
The original characters appear later.
Because I hope the heroine can have a sound mind and not live for others.
After reading "Mary Sue Case Report" in Chang'an in August, I suddenly realized that I also have a lot of Mary Sue plots, so I started to write down my Mary Sue fantasies... It turns out that I have been away from Loli for many years...
I couldn't grasp Mary Sue's rich imagination, so... This story of Mary Sue, who was always worried about the rigor of scientific principles, actually gradually became a bit serious.
This article is only dedicated to the ones I love~~~
The pit has been completed.
Ancient dark history.
Hisoka and Illumi weren't engaged yet, hahahaha.
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I finally finished reading this article. Comment on the heroine here: I see that many people are dissatisfied with the heroine (lack of IQ, irrationality, etc.). As I said in my previous comment, the heroine is a child who was affected by the past life but has no memory of it (which can be understood as an authentic native of the comic world). She has lived a happy and peaceful life since she was a child. Except for sometimes being confused about her own existence, she has basically never suffered much, and her social circle is also very small. She was passively pulled into the hunter's world at the beginning. We all know that the hunter's world is very cruel (but the heroine doesn't know it and doesn't understand it very well). She is a genius in the secular sense. She went to college very early and studies hard every day. So she is also a little simple and proud, and because she has "magic" to rely on, she is also impulsive. When others have been experiencing the harm of this world since they were young, the heroine is cared for by everyone. She thinks this world is the same as her before (except that there are... Such dark forces) She entered the dangerous world of hunters at a loss when she was already in her teens. The heroine has some abilities, but there are too many people who are better than her, and she is not good at negotiating with others and intrigues (she can only explore with her innocence and relying on those self-righteous little cleverness). The character of the heroine has been criticized by many people, but the logic of her behavior is quite consistent with her own experience, experience and thoughts. As Mary Suwen certified by the author, I think she is already very brave and powerful. When the heroine did those good deeds, many people must have thought that she was irrational and had no IQ (I was also a little sullen when I saw it), putting herself in danger and finally having to trouble others to save her. The author said that the heroine is not kind and she only did these good deeds because she subconsciously repented and accumulated good fortune without thinking too much about it (because of killing people and hurting people). I have some different understandings. I think the heroine has a kind foundation, and the behavioral motivations of repentance and accumulating blessings only account for a small part. She may still feel pity for the "cannon fodder" she has never seen but take no action, but when a living person is about to die in front of her, I don't think she can remain indifferent. Not wanting others to be hurt is more like her subconscious behavior (just like what we have been taught since childhood), her actions are already faster than her brain. Although the follow-up will be very unpleasant, I can still accept it when the heroine is not OOC. The introduction and the article feel like they are two different styles. The heroine in the introduction gives people a very poetic feeling (the same is true at the beginning of the article) that attracts me. I am not sure whether the character described in the introduction is not the Holy Mother or Xiaobai. What I am sure of is that this article is a piece of pure love, and the heroine is not having an affair with anyone else (I don't like people who are half-hearted). The author also said later that this is a Mary Su story. If you don't mind the heroine being impulsive at certain times, I still recommend reading this article.
I looked through some previous comments and found that many people were discussing that killing animals means killing animals, and the heroine just doesn't kill her own kind. Let me talk about my understanding now. Killing is indispensable for most living things. Animals need to survive, and humans also need it. The only thing we can do is to let them realize their value without too much pain. I like animals and life (I pity them). I have never seen animals being slaughtered and turned into steaks. I think I should be touched, but it does not affect me from eating meat. Just like there are many drugs that need to be tested on mice, it is all for our health. We also regard animals as family members, or when we see spiritual animals such as sheep and cows, we feel the bond between life and life without harming them (without killing them). This should be the approach and thinking of most people. I think the heroine will be somewhat similar to what I thought. After all, humans are the most spiritual animals, and the bonds within them are also the most difficult to cut off and let go. [Lop-eared rabbit head]
There are two columns for people asking for a sign. The one on the left is asking for marriage, and the one on the right is asking for a child. Then you also wrote that they chose the right side without hesitation. In the end, the sign they asked for was still a sign for marriage. Did you write it backwards?
Are there as many Tsunayoshi who have lived the lives of ordinary people as there are Lin Ze who died? But, he won't be able to see his companions anymore... I'm really curious about Tsunayoshi over there's thoughts when he saw the tutoring manga.
Da Ni Howl, here in the world of mortals, it's okay to call me Chenchen~
Chenchen is used to being cute, so don't mind it. I didn't see the realm of shortcomings. I went to Baidu and found that the character seemed pretty beautiful, but I didn't have time to pursue it [This is a sad story (ーー゛)].
I watched it as an original, so don't blame me if the plot is too harsh sometimes, QAQ.
First of all, the copywriting. Chenchen thinks the text of the copywriting is quite good and the layout is beautiful, but the big cover at the back kind of ruins the beauty. Ahem, it's too big and conspicuous.
Of course, this may be a big personal preference, it's just what people say, don't mind it.
First of all, the opening of the first chapter. I looked at it like a big fuss. Of course, it's not that the writing is not bad. This writing style, I really like how to break it. The opening is really concise and clear, and it directly points to the topic hahaha.
However, I found that the girl's writing style is very, how should I put it, not even funny, but it's quite likeable anyway, and I hope to keep it up. However, I think the girl seems to accept it a little faster_(:зゝ∠)_.
If you habitually read a chapter and write a sentence, people who don't complain will be shitty.
When I read the second chapter, I knew that this was a suspense story with high IQ [serious face]. However, what I saw was a little joyful. I finally found this adjective. The joyful plot made me laugh so hard.
I was so surprised when the God of Death appeared. I almost thought it was a Death God fanfic. Ahem, I was a little confused when I had not read the original work. I remember that the author wrote in the copy that even if you have not read the original work, you can understand it, so I suggest you write more clearly.
But it's also possible that Chen Chen's brain is stupid and slow to react QAQ.
Then, I want to ask why the heroine has five lives. Is it the setting in the original work? QAQ I have been reading for a long time and I don't understand what's going on here.
Watching the movie silently to the end, Chenchen suddenly discovered that the heroine died a lot, and then she was tortured in the last scene. Although I still couldn't understand it, my eyes shed tears.
I don't know if the author did it on purpose, but the writing style is obviously spicy and humorous, but it's really spicy and sadistic. Although I didn't think it was very sad, I only cried three or four times!
Really, please look at my sincere eyes [starry eyes].
I originally thought that you, the author, were going to end it like this. The plot of BE made my eyes red with tears, but when I looked at the comment section again, hehehe, I laughed. It would be so spicy if BE had not ended the drama.
Let's just say that the author has such a funny writing style that he is willing to abuse abuse, so I am really looking forward to what will happen next. Is he going to develop the method of time and space?
For example, let's say five or ten years _(:зゝ∠)_.
As a result, when I wrote this, I realized that the author Jiang gave a lot of pertinent suggestions. Chenchen could only say that Chenchen was a QAQ reader. He only had a few suggestions, and they were all written before. There was nothing else. Chenchen only thought about when to read the next chapter of QAQ.
Finally, I silently followed the link to listen to the song, and once again I tortured myself until my face was bloody. If you don't give me a good ending, I won't let you go. QAQ, author-chan, did you sing this song? Because I saw [lyrics/singing/mixing: author-jun], hehe, author-chan's voice is nice.
It is spicy and cool with a sweet sound.
Finally, go back to this article, bookmark it and wait for updates. I hope this little comment will be helpful to you, okay?
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The Flower of Tao Yao·Wen Ping Pu
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I finally finished reading this article. Comment on the heroine here: I see that many people are dissatisfied with the heroine (lack of IQ, irrationality, etc.). As I said in my previous comment, the heroine is a child who was affected by the past life but has no memory of it (which can be understood as an authentic native of the comic world). She has lived a happy and peaceful life since she was a child. Except for sometimes being confused about her own existence, she has basically never suffered much, and her social circle is also very small. She was passively pulled into the hunter's world at the beginning. We all know that the hunter's world is very cruel (but the heroine doesn't know it and doesn't understand it very well). She is a genius in the secular sense. She went to college very early and studies hard every day. So she is also a little simple and proud, and because she has "magic" to rely on, she is also impulsive. When others have been experiencing the harm of this world since they were young, the heroine is cared for by everyone. She thinks this world is the same as her before (except that there are... Such dark forces) She entered the dangerous world of hunters at a loss when she was already in her teens. The heroine has some abilities, but there are too many people who are better than her, and she is not good at negotiating with others and intrigues (she can only explore with her innocence and relying on those self-righteous little cleverness). The character of the heroine has been criticized by many people, but the logic of her behavior is quite consistent with her own experience, experience and thoughts. As Mary Suwen certified by the author, I think she is already very brave and powerful. When the heroine did those good deeds, many people must have thought that she was irrational and had no IQ (I was also a little sullen when I saw it), putting herself in danger and finally having to trouble others to save her. The author said that the heroine is not kind and she only did these good deeds because she subconsciously repented and accumulated good fortune without thinking too much about it (because of killing people and hurting people). I have some different understandings. I think the heroine has a kind foundation, and the behavioral motivations of repentance and accumulating blessings only account for a small part. She may still feel pity for the "cannon fodder" she has never seen but take no action, but when a living person is about to die in front of her, I don't think she can remain indifferent. Not wanting others to be hurt is more like her subconscious behavior (just like what we have been taught since childhood), her actions are already faster than her brain. Although the follow-up will be very unpleasant, I can still accept it when the heroine is not OOC. The introduction and the article feel like they are two different styles. The heroine in the introduction gives people a very poetic feeling (the same is true at the beginning of the article) that attracts me. I am not sure whether the character described in the introduction is not the Holy Mother or Xiaobai. What I am sure of is that this article is a piece of pure love, and the heroine is not having an affair with anyone else (I don't like people who are half-hearted). The author also said later that this is a Mary Su story. If you don't mind the heroine being impulsive at certain times, I still recommend reading this article. I looked through some previous comments and found that many people were discussing that killing animals means killing animals, and the heroine just doesn't kill her own kind. Let me talk about my understanding now. Killing is indispensable for most living things. Animals need to survive, and humans also need it. The only thing we can do is to let them realize their value without too much pain. I like animals and life (I pity them). I have never seen animals being slaughtered and turned into steaks. I think I should be touched, but it does not affect me from eating meat. Just like there are many drugs that need to be tested on mice, it is all for our health. We also regard animals as family members, or when we see spiritual animals such as sheep and cows, we feel the bond between life and life without harming them (without killing them). This should be the approach and thinking of most people. I think the heroine will be somewhat similar to what I thought. After all, humans are the most spiritual animals, and the bonds within them are also the most difficult to cut off and let go. [Lop-eared rabbit head]
There are two columns for people asking for a sign. The one on the left is asking for marriage, and the one on the right is asking for a child. Then you also wrote that they chose the right side without hesitation. In the end, the sign they asked for was still a sign for marriage. Did you write it backwards?
Are there as many Tsunayoshi who have lived the lives of ordinary people as there are Lin Ze who died? But, he won't be able to see his companions anymore... I'm really curious about Tsunayoshi over there's thoughts when he saw the tutoring manga.
Da Ni Howl, here in the world of mortals, it's okay to call me Chenchen~ Chenchen is used to being cute, so don't mind it. I didn't see the realm of shortcomings. I went to Baidu and found that the character seemed pretty beautiful, but I didn't have time to pursue it [This is a sad story (ーー゛)]. I watched it as an original, so don't blame me if the plot is too harsh sometimes, QAQ. First of all, the copywriting. Chenchen thinks the text of the copywriting is quite good and the layout is beautiful, but the big cover at the back kind of ruins the beauty. Ahem, it's too big and conspicuous. Of course, this may be a big personal preference, it's just what people say, don't mind it. First of all, the opening of the first chapter. I looked at it like a big fuss. Of course, it's not that the writing is not bad. This writing style, I really like how to break it. The opening is really concise and clear, and it directly points to the topic hahaha. However, I found that the girl's writing style is very, how should I put it, not even funny, but it's quite likeable anyway, and I hope to keep it up. However, I think the girl seems to accept it a little faster_(:зゝ∠)_. If you habitually read a chapter and write a sentence, people who don't complain will be shitty. When I read the second chapter, I knew that this was a suspense story with high IQ [serious face]. However, what I saw was a little joyful. I finally found this adjective. The joyful plot made me laugh so hard. I was so surprised when the God of Death appeared. I almost thought it was a Death God fanfic. Ahem, I was a little confused when I had not read the original work. I remember that the author wrote in the copy that even if you have not read the original work, you can understand it, so I suggest you write more clearly. But it's also possible that Chen Chen's brain is stupid and slow to react QAQ. Then, I want to ask why the heroine has five lives. Is it the setting in the original work? QAQ I have been reading for a long time and I don't understand what's going on here. Watching the movie silently to the end, Chenchen suddenly discovered that the heroine died a lot, and then she was tortured in the last scene. Although I still couldn't understand it, my eyes shed tears. I don't know if the author did it on purpose, but the writing style is obviously spicy and humorous, but it's really spicy and sadistic. Although I didn't think it was very sad, I only cried three or four times! Really, please look at my sincere eyes [starry eyes]. I originally thought that you, the author, were going to end it like this. The plot of BE made my eyes red with tears, but when I looked at the comment section again, hehehe, I laughed. It would be so spicy if BE had not ended the drama. Let's just say that the author has such a funny writing style that he is willing to abuse abuse, so I am really looking forward to what will happen next. Is he going to develop the method of time and space? For example, let's say five or ten years _(:зゝ∠)_. As a result, when I wrote this, I realized that the author Jiang gave a lot of pertinent suggestions. Chenchen could only say that Chenchen was a QAQ reader. He only had a few suggestions, and they were all written before. There was nothing else. Chenchen only thought about when to read the next chapter of QAQ. Finally, I silently followed the link to listen to the song, and once again I tortured myself until my face was bloody. If you don't give me a good ending, I won't let you go. QAQ, author-chan, did you sing this song? Because I saw [lyrics/singing/mixing: author-jun], hehe, author-chan's voice is nice. It is spicy and cool with a sweet sound. Finally, go back to this article, bookmark it and wait for updates. I hope this little comment will be helpful to you, okay? [Red Dust] Review The Flower of Tao Yao·Wen Ping Pu
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