An introduction that is not an introduction:
It's a little bit violent, a little murderous, a little boring, a little exaggerated. The most important thing is that, as written, it has a little bit of everything, but there is no feeling at all. Alas...
Intention:
Reader comments
In fact, many novels have superfluous extras.
AD's age is not right, he was less than 120 when he died, definitely not over 150
I finished reading it in one day, and my happiness was gone (?ω? )
This ended a little hastily.
Kageyama, what have you been through? Hahahahahahahaha
It's very sudden, but it's barely rounded out, but the writing is too straightforward, like a running account.
Except for the description of the emotional line, it is indeed a bit flat, but I have to say that it is really sweet... Hehe, I love reading sweet articles! But I think my wife can work hard and write high-quality sweet articles!
Please update as soon as possible. All the flowers I have been waiting for have faded.
Good looking, pitiful, woo woo woo
I have watched Louis grow up all the way, and I really like her. The teacher wrote it so well! !
"If I just kill Hazama..."
Xi Yue's eyes were cold, "But you took Ling'er away too. Master, Juan, Ning!"
-------------I think the person who really wants to leave is Qu Ling, not Shi Juanning at all.
Ahhhhh, I want them all, Nini, Master, Sherlock, Little Spider
Why does the little fox have to listen to that old Taoist priest to persuade God to save those mortals? I am speechless =_=
Haha, there will be time travel! It feels like magic skills are for practicing time and space travel, hehe
Second grade of junior high school? Leave it to the teacher. . . What a great courage. . Admire and admire. . Awesome. . .
I'm optimistic about you. . . It can be developed into a novel. . If you have time. .
What a shocking BT novel
Ahhhhhh! ! ! Madam update! ! I was so hungry that I jumped into the pit.
In fact, many novels have superfluous extras.
AD's age is not right, he was less than 120 when he died, definitely not over 150
I finished reading it in one day, and my happiness was gone (?ω? )
This ended a little hastily.
Kageyama, what have you been through? Hahahahahahahaha
It's very sudden, but it's barely rounded out, but the writing is too straightforward, like a running account.
Wow... Passionate duel, Chiji (secret observation)
Except for the description of the emotional line, it is indeed a bit flat, but I have to say that it is really sweet... Hehe, I love reading sweet articles! But I think my wife can work hard and write high-quality sweet articles!
Please update as soon as possible. All the flowers I have been waiting for have faded.
Good looking, pitiful, woo woo woo
I have watched Louis grow up all the way, and I really like her. The teacher wrote it so well! !
最最最期待的一集！[可怜]好萌的小情侣！好萌的一家人！好萌的互动！我可以再看一百集！平凡才是生活的最伟大之物啊[垂耳兔头][竖耳兔头][竖耳兔头][垂耳兔头]栗光集团好好听哦，听起来也很好吃哦
Is the Buddha the Jade Bodhi?
"If I just kill Hazama..." Xi Yue's eyes were cold, "But you took Ling'er away too. Master, Juan, Ning!" -------------I think the person who really wants to leave is Qu Ling, not Shi Juanning at all.
Ahhhhh, I want them all, Nini, Master, Sherlock, Little Spider
Why does the little fox have to listen to that old Taoist priest to persuade God to save those mortals? I am speechless =_=
Haha, there will be time travel! It feels like magic skills are for practicing time and space travel, hehe
Second grade of junior high school? Leave it to the teacher. . . What a great courage. . Admire and admire. . Awesome. . . I'm optimistic about you. . . It can be developed into a novel. . If you have time. .
What a shocking BT novel
Ahhhhhh! ! ! Madam update! ! I was so hungry that I jumped into the pit.
Excessive indulgence is not acceptable!
好看！！虽然很短但很深刻很有力量！