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Tragedy. I don't like tragedy. ..
What a soul-stirring journey this is! From the previous "Mother of the World" to the current "She is a Teacher", whenever I can't calm down, I always feel calm. Whether it is Xiaoyue (the nickname of the Virgin) or Fanyin, these two children can be liked calmly and remembered forever. Sanskrit is a teacher. I want to be a teacher soon. Sanskrit has taught me a lot. Who should I live in? What this author taught me Although you are still young, your mind is as broad as the sea, your heart is as bright as a mirror, and your heart is as broad as the sea. The ending of Fanyin is what I like to see. She is such a calm and casual person, so that kind of ending is very good, making people feel warm and calm from the heart. In fact, when I read your article, a clear spring kept flowing to my limbs. "The Holy Mother" made me cry for a long, long time. Every story made me feel so heartbroken, especially Xiao Ai (cough, sorry, I am off topic) What kind of heart can accept others, forgive others, open other people's hearts, walk in, and then exit? Xiaoyue and Fanyin have carved a symbol in everyone's heart. It's not deep, but it's worth it. Children with traumatized hearts and us readers can always remember and experience that feeling - tranquil truth, warm tolerance. It can be said that no other author can make me so moved, from the bottom of my heart So what kind of mind can do that well? Sanskrit's persistence, pride, spontaneity, and agility may sometimes be a little lazy, a little willful, and a little silly. Cute and silly, a child so silly that it makes people feel bad, so silly that no one can blame him or say anything. All we have to do is watch, watch how the children below her engrave the symbols in their hearts in the face of adversity. And then grow into an extremely good person or a person who is truly open-minded. Fanyin also received setbacks and grew up in her own journey, allowing us to see her happiness and then smiled and said: "It's great." Xiaoqiu's writing style can be verified in so many long reviews. Although you are still a child, it is already very good, so I may have misjudged your age. What kind of experience will make you have such a deep understanding? Or it is only with such a clear mind that you can see the essence of things and tolerate it with all your heart. Mieko is such a child, so is Fanyin, and so is Xiaoyue. After all, Xiaoqiu is such a very good child. Really, when I read your article, I feel heartbroken and smile. Then I try to see the essence of things clearly or only see the surface. I use all my understanding and love to teach my students everything I know and everything I feel. Xiaoqiu, it would be great if there was a second part of "The Holy Mother". I want to see more stories of healing and being healed. There are so many distressed children. The small habitat turns into years, leaving behind a wind-like gentleness and water-like tranquility in their lives, and then spreads a gentle warmth in the hearts of our readers. Fanyin will always be good and happy, and will even care for her students off-line. It doesn't matter if she is injured, because after the snow melts, it will be spring! Xiaoqiu will be like Toru Honda. A truly good child. A child who can be loved regardless of anything. I really like you. I like your words, your kindness and warmth Finally, I hope that everyone can live casually and be kind to the people around you and be more open-minded. Then it will be very, very good. This place where we live will be warm and loved because of you...
Sir, have you finished the exam? I only have tomorrow left Why don't you preface it first to celebrate?
Ah... It's over I missed something a few days ago, and when I came back I saw it ended like this I didn't expect that it would end at Xiao Yi's place. A little bit unfinished... Really... Can't it be continued?
Actually... I like this ending very much... Very good... Really good...
Being able to witness at the end the love that I had privately identified as early as the beginning of the article is complete and true. ; A; I don't think it's a bad ending. From a spiritual point of view, this is the most natural ending. I have to say that after reading the whole story, some plots are indeed suspected of being pretentious... But at the end, I slowly felt relieved. The emotions were molded very real. More than 220,000 words created a Chu Fanyin, an ordinary person, a teacher who presses forward with persistence. She may be a little better than ordinary teachers, but her students are hardly ordinary people. In comparison, she is just an ordinary person... Hypothesis, hypothetical, there is still a continuation; a classmate below said that the space for extension in Soul Society is very vast. In the moment of the author's thought, the author is the god of the article. Hypothesis can be corrected at any time - then what? This is somewhat similar to some TV dramas in Taiwan that were postponed in order to compete for ratings. Starting, continuing, turning, and combining, people who have written scripts and drafted stories should be able to understand that it is pieced together into a complete story, starting from the layout, turning, and then conflict, and then the turning leads the story to the ending... In short, for a story with a complete structure, conflict is the most important part and the basis of the story. A story without conflict is as boring and meaningless as a running account, without focus, and it will not be a good story. The so-called unfinished articles are like video-based movies or comics. Human emotions are like a rubber band. The longer the story drags on, the rubber band will be pulled off repeatedly due to the influence of the plot, and it will often become tired or even loose. As a story with key points and educational value, the key points should be clearly divided, and unnecessary fragments that will affect the reader's absorption and understanding should be used as little as possible. Although the article "She is a teacher" is basically coherent, it can actually be divided into short stories based on different students. Perhaps Chu Fanyin can resolve all crises in this way until the entire class of students is gathered together, but the spirit of the author's statement has also been weakened... And may even become real hypocrisy. After all, the concept will deviate from reality and become a fairy tale. Will it be so beautiful? Can this better convey Chu Fanyin's desperate desire to become a good teacher and even his determination to die...? No, I thought. When there are too many twists and turns, the viewer will become tired, especially when the same thing is repeated over and over again. When the reader is tired of watching it, how can the plot capture the reader's emotions? The loosening of the rubber band also means that the story slowly loses its appeal and its impact on the reader's mood becomes weaker, and the key spirit of the story seems to be unimportant. Why bother? A good story, the ending is also a matter of knowledge. Perhaps, a few other students' stories can be inserted between Qingming and the Killer Chapter, but in the Killer Chapter, if Chu Fanyin dies several times but still saves the day, the crisis will be downplayed, and her persistence will be based on the assumption that her life is not completely in danger. If she still moves forward without retreating, that would be a miracle... This seems too pretentious. Looking around the world, how many can you find? The focus is completely lost, because the probability of the hypothesis coming true is too slim, and the point at which readers will be touched is also much lower. … The word count accidentally became a long review, and I'm very ashamed. I didn't mention Chu Fanyin, Chu Qingchen, or even Ye Wang Qingming Yi Ermi in the article, nor did I mention the emotional description of the characters. I just saw someone at the end of the article saying that the unfinished game is a bit inconvenient. In terms of spiritual communication, if you want to make it HE, it will really be much weaker and not so effective in comparison. The difference lies in the direction of the author's writing. What is it trying to convey? Or just want to write a story, a story with a happy ending... Chu Fanyin in the article, to be honest, made me frustrated several times due to some wishful thinking; but because of this, she is not so perfect, which makes her more real and humane. As for the part about Chu Qingchen, to be honest, I feel it is incomplete. His whole heart seems to be only for Chu Fanyin, which makes his decision at the end of the article a selfish motivation. He takes Chu Fanyin's unfinished dream as his own, becomes a good teacher on her behalf, and unites the entire class; in fact, , this is different from wanting to be a good teacher wholeheartedly, and Chu Qingchen's determination is separated by Chu Fanyin. How true is that sincerity and how long will it last... At least, it makes me question whether he can inherit Chu Fanyin's original intention and not hesitate to fly into the flames for his students...?
In fact, you can also imagine that after death, a ray of Sangyin's soul goes to the Soul Society and continues to be a teacher at the Mao Spiritual Arts Academy~ Maybe, you can also be Aizen's teacher~ I would like to mention that, in fact, this story has the potential to be continued~~!
Draw circles in the corner Big Is this the end? ? ? Although it's a pity about Xiaoyin's ending~~~, the writing is very touching It seems like this is natural
Not willing to give in! Not willing to give in! ! ! ! ! ! ! Xiaofeng, if you write tragic articles again in the future, I will hack you to death~~
Ahh~! ! ! ! Stepmother, stepmother! ! ! !