He wants to pick off the first moon standing in the shadow of snow
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话说人家今天段考，人家初二，物理好难555555555～o(>﹏<)o求妹子来安慰
First cry
Then I silently imagined the scene where Shota Kim was replaced by Uncle Kim and hung around Ben's neck...
Immediately break the power_(:з)∠)_
.... It was easy as promised
What world is next?
Hahaha, friendship is friendship, adding pure makes it look not pure.
I read it in one sitting, very good article.
To be honest, I only read two chapters, and then I couldn't read anymore...
1. There are many minor flaws in writing, such as overusing this and that.
2. This is also the biggest problem, the characters' relationships are confusing!
3. The story jumps out and there are some problems in logical expression.
I feel that every time I write a story, I have to solve and complete a task. Now your task is to straighten out this story so that people can understand it and read it.
Come on, some of the rhetoric is really good, and some of the allusions (such as the last leaf) are also good, come on, let's encourage each other! ! !
It hasn't been updated yet today. . Reminder
话说人家今天段考，人家初二，物理好难555555555～o(>﹏<)o求妹子来安慰
First cry Then I silently imagined the scene where Shota Kim was replaced by Uncle Kim and hung around Ben's neck... Immediately break the power_(:з)∠)_
.... It was easy as promised
What world is next?
Hahaha, friendship is friendship, adding pure makes it look not pure.
I read it in one sitting, very good article.
To be honest, I only read two chapters, and then I couldn't read anymore... 1. There are many minor flaws in writing, such as overusing this and that. 2. This is also the biggest problem, the characters' relationships are confusing! 3. The story jumps out and there are some problems in logical expression. I feel that every time I write a story, I have to solve and complete a task. Now your task is to straighten out this story so that people can understand it and read it. Come on, some of the rhetoric is really good, and some of the allusions (such as the last leaf) are also good, come on, let's encourage each other! ! !