[Full-Time Master] the Character Card Drawing Style Is Wrong

Teacher, I really hope you can come back. I really like this article so much. Woohoo, if I leave you a long comment, will you have more desire to come back? I have a lot of rainbow farts that I want to blow to you. Woo hoo hoo, never mind, as long as you have a chance to see it and have a slight thought of wanting to come back, my rainbow fart will be meaningful, I will start blowing it right now! ! ! Although teacher, you have mentioned many times in your essay that you are not very satisfied with your writing, but I really think your writing is excellent! Next, I will explain why I think this article is well written from the following aspects! First, the character creation is excellent Teacher, you are really good at creating characters. As an old bookworm, I have read a lot of books (there must be thousands of them), but there are very few heroines as lovable as Bai Wu. She has extraordinary beauty. Generally, this kind of setting is easy to write into a disgusting love-at-first-sight story or a somewhat flat beauty-invincible story. This is not the case at all. Teacher, you designed a very wonderful flaw for Baiwu - pathological social fear, which turned her from a flat heartthrob to a beautiful and powerful woman with special style. This article fully portrays Bai Wu. She is beautiful, pure, fanatical, idealistic, reserved but tragic. Although Baiwu gained a lot of initial favorability from the male guests because of her beauty, her beauty never really made her journey to glory go smoothly (instead, it brought some minor setbacks), and the goodwill born of Baiwu's beauty did not turn into exaggerated special treatment or anything like that. Moreover, beauty is the least worth mentioning advantage of Bai Wu. Her stubborn protection of the people she cares about, her desperate pursuit of victory, and her perseverance in adversity... All of this makes Bai Wu's character extremely dazzling in the context of a full-time master. It can be said that Baiwu's style of painting is so well integrated with that of the Avatar, and she is almost like a native Avatar character. Her core is so similar to those pure players in the Avatar that the collision creates a particularly wonderful spark, which makes people want to stop watching! Speaking of which, I have to mention that this article really spent a lot of effort to figure out the character. Not only the heroine Bai Wu, but also the other original characters who interact with her are also wonderfully portrayed! Writing about Bai Wu's protection of Lin Jingyan corresponds to Lin Jingyan's escape and wavering after he wanted to repay this protection but was defeated; writing about Bai Wu and Ye Xiu being both idealists corresponds to writing about Ye Xiu's constant love for Bai Wu. The intolerance of hurting others after being frustrated and the silent care behind the mocking face; writing about Zhao Yuzhe, who hurt Bai Wu and was hidden by Bai Wu, not only writes about his guilt under the admiration of his youth, but also writes about his eagerness for attention; writing about Huang Shaotian, not only Not only does he write about him being enthusiastic and talkative, but he also writes about him being a sinister and cunning opportunist. When writing about Fang Rui, he not only writes about his kindness, but also about his loneliness and arrogance outside the team; Second, the relationship line and career line and growth line are particularly well balanced. In romance novels about The Master, it is actually very difficult to write about the heroine as a fan of the contestants, because as a contestant, you cannot only write about the emotional line, but also about the career line of the contestant. It would be okay if these two lines only focused on the emotional line, but for a bookworm with my taste, it would be almost uninteresting. This book is particularly good. It mainly writes about Bai Wu's career as a player, and other people's emotional changes towards Bai Wu as undercurrents as she grows up. The most important thing is that not only is it well-balanced, but the career-line competition is really wonderfully written! When describing game competitions, if you use game terminology too much, it will be dry, and if you describe the pictures too much, it will be draggy. This book combines the skill terms of the game with the pictures that create the effect very wonderfully, giving people the feeling of watching a cartoon! Especially the scene between Bai Wu and Zhou Zekai in the arena, it was tragic and beautiful, and it was so exciting just reading the text. If there is an animation, it will definitely be the return of God! I feel like, sir, if you write martial arts fan fiction or immortality novels, it will definitely be exciting. Your ability to depict fights is amazing! Baiwu's growth has not been smooth sailing, and her career path has been full of setbacks. But teacher, you have grasped it very well. At least I did not feel aggrieved. Instead, I was fascinated by this feeling of beauty, strength, and misery. Beauty, strength, and misery are right. There are no setbacks at all, and the excitement will drop when I wake up later! Woohoo, I just fell into a trap before I got to the cool place... Beauty and beauty are my permanent xp. I am also a lunar person. I really like all kinds of beauty in the moon (Artoria, Black Jeanne, Karna, Cave King...) In short, the beauty and beauty on Baiwu's body is really very lunar style. I like it so much. Teacher, please come back! I have reread this article many times. I haven't counted it specifically, but basically I come back to it every once in a while, maybe five or six times. Every time I read it, I am particularly touched. Thank you teacher for creating an article about fairy grass! (It would be better if you can come back to fill in the pits.) Teacher, the last time you updated was several years ago. At that time, your IP was still displayed abroad. I wonder if you are still doing well in the third dimension now. It is not peaceful abroad now. I hope everything is well with you, teacher! Teacher, a few years have passed. Maybe for you, you will face many problems when you come back to fill in the pits (such as not remembering the original setting, your love for full-time work has faded, writing articles requires rest time...), But I really want to say, teacher, you are a very, very talented and special person. Don't be a clever person, you are simply born to eat online articles. The articles you write are very exciting and attractive. Not only the characterization and career line I mentioned above, this novel also has many other special advantages. Even if there is only one in 10,000 chance, please consider coming back to fill in the gaps! Even if one chapter is updated a month, that's still great! Finally, come to life, my love! ! ! ! [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

Woohoo, can you still wait for the update? My favorite full-time fan fiction 😭 I am really picky about what I read. It is the first time I am so addicted to a fanfic with so many battle descriptions. In fact, I will be very nervous and carefully watch every function and action. I have the idea of ​​​​supporting each team to go all out. I am very happy and touched when I read it, and it is not OOC! ! (This is really rare among rare things). It can be seen that the author has very high requirements for himself. It is not easy to continue this article. It is normal for it to be difficult to write. But does it have to be more complete? 😭😭😭 This story deserves an ending. How can I express how moved I am after reading it... Anyway, I will wait, I really, really like it 😭🙏🏻

I don't know how many times a desperate squatter has replayed the game. Why is he so good at writing? Teacher, please come back quickly. [Crying] (Dark crawling)

I have read a lot of full-time articles recently, and I have wandered back to this pit. Teacher, your writing is really good. Are you too busy in the third dimension? Woohoo, I really hope to see updates in my lifetime. I like Baiwu very much, and I also like this article. Woohoo, teacher, you are really good at writing. Sports, I love it every time I read this article. It's obviously Su Wen, but he writes such a beautiful, powerful, and miserable tragedy. It's really special. There's no meal replacement at all. Wow. [Crying] Teacher, please come back and update. If you come back and update, everyone is willing to do anything [crying] [crying]

The first reaction when Shichu regained consciousness was the red-haired kitten looking for Strawberry Leopard [please]

Who knows the pleasure of seeing the whole thing in one breath, I will eat the fragrant rice [kiss][kiss]

No, who can understand my despair after reading this chapter and clicking on the table of contents to find that it was written in 23 years? Teacher, please come back! !

Bai Wu tried his best and couldn't pull up the whole team. What should Lin do? Can this story continue? Lan Yu hasn't written it yet. Come on, author, your writing is really good. We are all looking forward to their development trajectory in the parallel world.

Madam... Please come back [crying]. I won't give up waiting for you!

Madam, please come back and cook. It's so delicious. There are so many people writing about Lao Lin in the second-level articles now o(╥╥)o

Is there still a chance to see the next chapter [crying]

I still like it after reading it again. I turned to my wife's column and read other articles and I also like it. Come back, my wife. O(╥╥)o I can join V full time. I will keep waiting.

I miss you so much. I will be satisfied if I can see the ending in my lifetime.

Collect it and wait for the day when you will come back to the pit

We stopped at a place where I still had a lot of fun, what a pity...

Happy New Year, boss www. When will you come back?

Ah ah ah, the teacher has cooked something. It's delicious. I love it. I want to eat... Rice! ! !

After reading it, I opened the table of contents to see how many more there were, and found out that this was the last chapter, the last chapter updated in 23 years...

Teacher, there is no way to throw thunder [vomiting blood]

Which club will you go to next? I'm curious, will the account card be brought there? I feel like I won't (because the attributes of the silver equipment are wrong, and other teams don't necessarily need knights), but it's very unpleasant if the similar face on the account card is in the hands of other people, and it is used by the SB boss to make money [cheek support]

Will I still be able to see updates in my lifetime [changed]

I shed tears while watching. Boss, please at least let me know who the winner will be in the end.

After reading two books in a row, I suddenly remembered that my original intention was to read the beginning and not finish it because it was so good. . . . I read books very seriously, and the content of the book will stay in my mind for a long time after I finish reading it, until I feel that there is nothing left to recall, so my reading sequence actually starts from the theme park in New York next door. . . Then I started to think about it over and over again, and I never dared to start with other books in the author column. Of course, some of the books were not finished at that time. . . I'm really afraid that I won't be able to watch it once I finish it. . . After saving for so long, I was faced with the situation I had expected at the time. I couldn't help but read two books. It was really a book that suited my appetite and I missed reading one book. Every plot, story rhythm, and ideas that can surprise me are really amazing. . . What's even more despairing is that I've almost finished reading all the other books and am a bit short of books, so when I came back to read them, I learned from the authors of these two books a cruel truth that I probably should have known a few years ago – are these all masterpieces? ! ! ! After writing these few books, is it the end of the comprehensive British and American series? ! ! Now I am even more reluctant to part with all the books in the author column (involving the United Kingdom and the United States). . . Ah, the heroine who is so delicious and full of external feelings and these emotions are so hard to eat anymore, woo woo woo, I can't bear to leave behind some melancholy,,,,, ugh. . . . When I get tired of writing other things, I'll come back and take a look. It's still very good to read about Britain and the United States. . . .

N I brushed it, it still looks good, please come back [biting handkerchief]

Resurrection, my love

My aunt comes here twice every once in a while [covering her face and crying] Oberon and Asker are so strong hahahaha it makes me laugh. Yuanyi: Just Breathe Cave King: Provoke me Enichi has something in common with Karna and Giyu (am I not disliked?

Isn't it so beautiful that it's gone?…

Can we still wait until my wife comes back?

Teacher, come back, I need you very much. I want to see, I want to see, Bobo's infinite possibilities! ! !

I've finished reviewing it again🥹Teacher, I miss you so much at the bottom of the pit