Please give me some advice for new writers!
General introduction: 17-year-old Luo Weiwei failed to save 18-year-old Han Chuan. Later, Luo Weiwei, who always cared about Han Chuan, accidentally returned to 17 years old again.
Fragment 1: He pushed her against the wall when no one was around, staring at her with red eyes, "Why don't you be nice to me?" Luo Weiwei pushed the man who was about to press on her, "I'm nice to you, you and I are the best in the world." He hurriedly ran away with a red face.
Ahhhhhh everyone, this is my first time writing, my writing is not very good but I will improve! Please collect it!
1V1 is super sweet!
I will try my best to update!
Intention: Get up from where you fell