Well... In fact, this kind of narrative is much better than a full-length dialogue, but it is prone to a problem, that is, it is too bland, and the plot has no sense of ups and downs. It would be better if dialogue and straightforward narration were combined. Many things in the article are mentioned in one stroke, and the details that should be detailed are also mentioned, and there is no sense of rhythm.
That's just my personal feeling, I don't know if it's right or not, O(∩_∩)O~
Madan Madam came out and scared me><
Well... In fact, this kind of narrative is much better than a full-length dialogue, but it is prone to a problem, that is, it is too bland, and the plot has no sense of ups and downs. It would be better if dialogue and straightforward narration were combined. Many things in the article are mentioned in one stroke, and the details that should be detailed are also mentioned, and there is no sense of rhythm. That's just my personal feeling, I don't know if it's right or not, O(∩_∩)O~