Suddenly I got a little bit of creativity, so I paired it with a big cliché
Shui Mu, who has never written any short articles, long articles, or short jokes, wants to follow the footsteps of his predecessors and improve his language skills, so he uses this short essay to ask for advice from his predecessors.
Please read the article and please use your words to point out all the shortcomings, errors, and deceptions in the article.
I look forward to friendly criticism. Your criticism is the nourishment for my growth.
I am still confused about the character setting. I just want to write a heroine who is not too novice, not very strong, not very calm, not very crazy, so that she can impress her lover with the temperament of an urban white-collar worker, and use a brain influenced by modern civilization to solve small problems. I don't want her to be the key to the conspiracy of desire, I just want her to rely on herself and her loved ones to protect what she cares about. .
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The heroine Yun Ranchi was originally a new era woman in the 21st century. She worked for a large portal website as a less leisurely editor. An unforgettable accident caused her and her friend's souls to travel through time and space and attach themselves to a strange space.
In a foreign country, she had father's love, brother's love, and friendship, but Que Dudu did not dare to accept the love of that man.
If you want to be attached for the rest of your life, you have to face the reality of having a group of wives and concubines.
If you want an ordinary life, you have to survive in those supernatural powers
Facing an irreversible era
Yunranchi
How can we finish this life together?