Xiao Gen fanfic of the American TV series "Person of Interest".
This article is a continuation of the main play. Following the plot of the main drama, only one plot has been changed.
In 510, after Root was shot, he was sent to the hospital for emergency treatment. Fusco was the one who rushed to the hospital, not Shaw. Personally, I think this is an OOC situation in the drama. Shaw didn't go to the hospital. It was the screenwriter who forcibly prevented Root and Shaw from meeting each other and forced Root to die alone. In my opinion, a hero can die alone, but logically.
Given Shaw's sense of teamwork and her personal feelings for Root, after learning that Root was shot and sent to rescue, she didn't go to the hospital to protect her. This is completely illogical. The setting in this article is that after Shaw learned that Root had been shot, he rushed to the hospital immediately.
This article was published in Lao Ford in 2018. It has been slightly modified and sent to Jinjiang.
Purpose: To soothe the hearts of people who like Xiao Gen who have been hurt by 510.
Reader comments
Every time Root says hi, sweetie, it makes me feel like it has happened again and again, and it is so beautiful. Ms. AA is really perfect for the role of Root. The two are simply tailor-made for each other and complement each other perfectly.
Come on, come on, come on, be sure to write it down. As soon as I saw this, I remembered how difficult it was for Jiuzhe to go all the way, and tears filled his eyes.
After reading it, the main idea is very clear throughout the whole text. In fact, there are many details that can be clearly seen. There is a sense of familiarity with the writing. The first half felt a little rushed, after all, it is a short story, and the time span is quite long. But when I got to the back, it looked very hearty. The last plot and the last sentence are very immersive and passionate. I can really get a feel for Ling and Lu, but the characters of Lin and Yue gave me a vague impression. If the image could be strengthened or the characters changed, it would make us readers more focused. With multiple characters, it would be difficult to quickly focus on the main character who promotes the development of the main plot. So much so that it became clear to me in the end that Ling turned out to be an important figure. (Sorry
In fact, I was surprised to find that the research part was not mentioned before, but when it appeared later, it was unusually fast to read, and it was even more three-dimensional than the images of several male contestants. I feel that it is not very suitable for writing delicate emotional lines, but is suitable for writing about imagination and large structures. If these two parts are written in detail, I think it can really go to a higher level. Finally, I would like to express my love. This is my first time to write a review, which may be more based on my intuitive feelings. Please bear with me.
[Crying] [Crying] It's great to have Ling's father. I really feel sorry for losing Ling Yu's second father.
24 Years old, Xiao Gen is still a genius
The teacher's writing is really very good and delicate, and I can feel his sincere feelings for Xiao Gen. Although I didn't watch the tenth episode and ended it in the ninth episode, the ending was almost spoiled at that time, including the teacher's death. How can I put it, thank you teacher for writing such an article, which gave me such great comfort in the most uncomfortable time. And in my opinion, this is the ending that truly belongs to them, including the fourth uncle, including the house manager, thank you teacher! ! ! You are really attentive [Rainbow Fart]
Thank you teacher! I really got a lot of comfort!
I'm still crying for Xiao Gen in 2024
I'm still crying for Xiao Gen in 2024
It felt like Gong Zichuan's energy was almost gone and he was a little unsure of himself. If something happens to Cheng Zhong, he feels like he is being dragged down by his father, and he doesn't know what to say to Cheng's father. (Why can't Jinjiang delete comments [crying])
Shoes meant for walking on mountain trails can't be comfortable, right?
No one in the team can be missing [crying]
The one and only!
Thank you so much, it's so well written!
Ahhhhh, I'm so excited to see it
Big! Update quickly! [Dog head holding rose in mouth]
Finally a perfect ending, so great
Thank you to the author for giving Xiao Gen a perfect ending [crying]
So well written! I wish everyone freedom, courage, peace and joy [Fireworks]
This is the original text... Thank you for your great output, both logic and emotion are online
Why is there AI generated comments?
First of all, thank you for the limited exemption. Secondly, this article is so beautiful (?ω? )
Do you want to hear me play the piano?
Do you want to hear me play the piano?
Do you want to hear me play the piano?
Like this sentence! Wish us all the best in life! [Laughing] (I still like to watch drunk jokes haha)
Every time Root says hi, sweetie, it makes me feel like it has happened again and again, and it is so beautiful. Ms. AA is really perfect for the role of Root. The two are simply tailor-made for each other and complement each other perfectly.
Come on, come on, come on, be sure to write it down. As soon as I saw this, I remembered how difficult it was for Jiuzhe to go all the way, and tears filled his eyes.
After reading it, the main idea is very clear throughout the whole text. In fact, there are many details that can be clearly seen. There is a sense of familiarity with the writing. The first half felt a little rushed, after all, it is a short story, and the time span is quite long. But when I got to the back, it looked very hearty. The last plot and the last sentence are very immersive and passionate. I can really get a feel for Ling and Lu, but the characters of Lin and Yue gave me a vague impression. If the image could be strengthened or the characters changed, it would make us readers more focused. With multiple characters, it would be difficult to quickly focus on the main character who promotes the development of the main plot. So much so that it became clear to me in the end that Ling turned out to be an important figure. (Sorry In fact, I was surprised to find that the research part was not mentioned before, but when it appeared later, it was unusually fast to read, and it was even more three-dimensional than the images of several male contestants. I feel that it is not very suitable for writing delicate emotional lines, but is suitable for writing about imagination and large structures. If these two parts are written in detail, I think it can really go to a higher level. Finally, I would like to express my love. This is my first time to write a review, which may be more based on my intuitive feelings. Please bear with me.
[Crying] [Crying] It's great to have Ling's father. I really feel sorry for losing Ling Yu's second father.
24 Years old, Xiao Gen is still a genius
The teacher's writing is really very good and delicate, and I can feel his sincere feelings for Xiao Gen. Although I didn't watch the tenth episode and ended it in the ninth episode, the ending was almost spoiled at that time, including the teacher's death. How can I put it, thank you teacher for writing such an article, which gave me such great comfort in the most uncomfortable time. And in my opinion, this is the ending that truly belongs to them, including the fourth uncle, including the house manager, thank you teacher! ! ! You are really attentive [Rainbow Fart]
Thank you teacher! I really got a lot of comfort!
I'm still crying for Xiao Gen in 2024
I'm still crying for Xiao Gen in 2024
It felt like Gong Zichuan's energy was almost gone and he was a little unsure of himself. If something happens to Cheng Zhong, he feels like he is being dragged down by his father, and he doesn't know what to say to Cheng's father. (Why can't Jinjiang delete comments [crying])
Shoes meant for walking on mountain trails can't be comfortable, right?
No one in the team can be missing [crying]
The one and only!
Thank you so much, it's so well written!
Ahhhhh, I'm so excited to see it
Big! Update quickly! [Dog head holding rose in mouth]
Finally a perfect ending, so great
Thank you to the author for giving Xiao Gen a perfect ending [crying]
So well written! I wish everyone freedom, courage, peace and joy [Fireworks]
This is the original text... Thank you for your great output, both logic and emotion are online
Why is there AI generated comments?
First of all, thank you for the limited exemption. Secondly, this article is so beautiful (?ω? )
Do you want to hear me play the piano? Do you want to hear me play the piano? Do you want to hear me play the piano? Like this sentence! Wish us all the best in life! [Laughing] (I still like to watch drunk jokes haha)