The writing is not very good for newbies. Some places may be like other novels or even some Mary Sues, and embarrassing. Is there any place where I can put forward my opinions?
Two S-class killers in Moling City fell in love and killed each other.
Lu Yitang was so frightened by the NPC that he was sweating profusely. Seeing that Chen Qichi was safe and sound, he asked a little unconvinced: "Aren't you afraid?"
Chen Qichi sat down and handed her the water. He took a sip of the drink he bought and said slowly: "I'm not afraid."
"Why"
Chen Qichi leaned into Lu Yitang's ear and whispered
"Because my crush is from hell"
Purpose: Complete the unfinished story between him and me