After I had my first male lover in my life, I picked up a drunk lover from the bar. The lover told me with drunken eyes and tears that he had a crush on me since he was seventeen years old. It has been ten years now, and I knew nothing about it.
Possible lightning points: 1. Attacking melons is unclean, there may be a bit of torture, but not abuse.
2. Poor writing style.
3. First person, don't let those who are thunderous enter.
4. The update may be slow.
Intention: Be bold and don't miss it