A perverse kid meets a big brother who plays hard to get.
Jiang Qi had a tragic life experience since childhood, and met Huaihe by chance on his way to become a master.
The eldest brother is very gentle, considerate, can tell stories, and gives grape cakes to the children.
During that year, the publicity in Jiang Qi's heart gradually exposed his perverse appearance.
Later, Jiang Qi met the ruthless young master Chi Zha and was forced to be involved in a crisis, but he looked exactly like Huaihe. He gave Jiang Qi hope, but Jiang Qi did not dare to disturb this beauty.
Later, Jiang Qi met Shen Huai, who felt to him like the Huaihe River that had been missing for a long time. The seeds in his heart kept breaking through the constraints, and he buried his love deep in his heart.
Later, when the riddle is solved and the lie is exposed, you will always be just that Ah Huai.
Why can't I escape every time? What happened 1,000 years ago?
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"My Ah Huai is never alone."
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Demining:
Perhaps at the beginning, you had too much ambition and too little ambition, resulting in many anchor points.
*Inconsistent, in the later stages the plot is forgotten and the logic is confused.
*Introducing the protagonist too much and accumulating emotions.
*Don't know your actual level.
*The characters do not fit the image language.
*Clear water, not much of a conflict.
Next book: "Meet Yao".
Scarf @.
Intention: Those years with you
