Hey, everyone suggested that I revise the copy. First of all, it is not about gods, but a metaphor of two generations and four protagonists.
The story goes like this: There was a child with good talent and excellent character. It's a pity that my father doesn't love my mother. Pooh! I really can't write copy.
In fact, it is about the grievances and resentments caused by the life experience of Yin Wenshu, the ninth son of Wudang. The protagonist is very cute, naughty, perverse, precocious but kind-hearted. His partner is very vulgar, he is a big devil, he is very handsome, he is more precocious than Xiao Yin, and he sees things in a different way. This is actually related to his origin. The two people met in a chaotic world of opposites, and through a series of complicated situations, they discovered that the other person was very fond of them. The Big Devil was originally a person with very clear goals in life, but he would not act against his own will, so he used his own way to let Xiao Yin get rid of the past and start over. Kind of a weird way, really. (Suddenly discovered that my advertising talent is not false advertising!)
Reader comments
Oh... To be honest, it's a bit annoying for these people to be so entangled...
Come on(? ??_??)?
It's so messy. It would be strange not to be confused.
What is the big orchid planning? Pregnant women should handle it with care!
If I have the urge to read on, the author replies:
Then read it carefully, I think you will understand it after reading it.
I still say the same thing, if the male lead is changed to Ning Ruo, it doesn't matter, but I have to abuse the amateur. . . . . .
0.0 Damn, you finally updated it, I'm in tears waiting for it.
Are you wearing it? Isn't that Miss Gu the Bailian bitch?
Updated (心心眼)
I wrote a review before in the heat of the moment, but I still can't express my love for this article! ! My little green diary has a special page for calculating variables for Xiaoyaoyou. Well, the variables I have seen are a total of 5 straight characters and 4 pictures... It just happened to coincide with my birthday. .
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I was originally planning to buy a physical book, but it seemed like I had no hope before the high school entrance examination, and I burst into tears.
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The Xiaoyaoyou described by the author is like a world that exists in another dimension, making people very concerned about his subsequent development and the lives of everyone in the group. Originally, before Qiu Qiu came out, this feeling was not strong, and I could imagine that they were living awkwardly in Kunlun Wonderland, but... Qiu Qiu's appearance clearly told me that this was impossible. .
-------------Although the author did not say that seeking retreat is the follow-up to Xiaoyaoyou World, but... The same "weird" Kunlun immortals and the same theory of the order of heaven, as well as the appearance of Chan Jiao and the second brother gave me this hope.
----------------------------------So the next questions are basically based on this situation. . ----------------------------------------
1. In seeking retreat, the people of Chanjiao appeared, but they were described as "twelve light groups". Why? What happened to Master and the others?
2. And the main seat of Yuanshi Tianzun in Yuxu Palace is empty, why? What happened to Lord Tianzun?
3. Later, a voice came from those light groups, and Yun Zhongzi said, "I'm sorry, my nephew." Then it was obviously the second brother who said before that the collapse of a certain sky was delayed. So why? There are only 12 light groups there, shouldn't there be a total of 13 of the Twelve Immortals + Jian'er. ?
---It's not that I doubt their ability, it's just that it is "God's will" and "order" after all, and the ancestors have all fallen into this. And it seems that the article about asking for a retreat also mentioned that they cannot leave Kunlun and can only possess the "unlucky" crane...
4. What will happen to them in the future? . ? And the immortals of Duantianmen? Ye Fengda also said in the following article that the human world will eventually collapse. What about Chan Jiao? What should the leader do? Can they hold on until then? Doesn't it mean that the greater the ability, the greater the danger? .
---So I thought about the empty seat of Tianzun before, and felt all kinds of worries. . Although Tianzun has always been a "magic nemesis", he was not said to be a "mana nemesis", and as shown in Xiaoyaoyou, Tianzun's magic power is definitely not weak, and he directly destroyed the magic horse in the illusory realm... I still firmly believe that the "level is poor", so is Yuanshi the first to be unlucky? What will the leader do? Although he only has his soul left, I think he will find a way to fight for it. He is "rebellious in temperament" and "loves his senior brother". Moreover, Jian'er will never sit back and watch Master and the others perish! . . . Then what will these two masochistic people do? . . . Is there a sense of tragedy? !
------Okay, maybe I'm overthinking it, but I'm still worried. . Please give me some clarification! , No! Yes, please give me new articles! . . I really hope the follow-up can continue~
Is this a frog boiled in warm water? Take your time
Soft? Very good name
If you want to write, you can write about life after marriage. Mo Qing is so pitiful~
Oh... To be honest, it's a bit annoying for these people to be so entangled...
Come on(? ??_??)?
It's so messy. It would be strange not to be confused.
What is the big orchid planning? Pregnant women should handle it with care!
If I have the urge to read on, the author replies: Then read it carefully, I think you will understand it after reading it.
I still say the same thing, if the male lead is changed to Ning Ruo, it doesn't matter, but I have to abuse the amateur. . . . . .
0.0 Damn, you finally updated it, I'm in tears waiting for it.
Are you wearing it? Isn't that Miss Gu the Bailian bitch?
Updated (心心眼)
I wrote a review before in the heat of the moment, but I still can't express my love for this article! ! My little green diary has a special page for calculating variables for Xiaoyaoyou. Well, the variables I have seen are a total of 5 straight characters and 4 pictures... It just happened to coincide with my birthday. . --------------- I was originally planning to buy a physical book, but it seemed like I had no hope before the high school entrance examination, and I burst into tears. --------------- The Xiaoyaoyou described by the author is like a world that exists in another dimension, making people very concerned about his subsequent development and the lives of everyone in the group. Originally, before Qiu Qiu came out, this feeling was not strong, and I could imagine that they were living awkwardly in Kunlun Wonderland, but... Qiu Qiu's appearance clearly told me that this was impossible. . -------------Although the author did not say that seeking retreat is the follow-up to Xiaoyaoyou World, but... The same "weird" Kunlun immortals and the same theory of the order of heaven, as well as the appearance of Chan Jiao and the second brother gave me this hope. ----------------------------------So the next questions are basically based on this situation. . ---------------------------------------- 1. In seeking retreat, the people of Chanjiao appeared, but they were described as "twelve light groups". Why? What happened to Master and the others? 2. And the main seat of Yuanshi Tianzun in Yuxu Palace is empty, why? What happened to Lord Tianzun? 3. Later, a voice came from those light groups, and Yun Zhongzi said, "I'm sorry, my nephew." Then it was obviously the second brother who said before that the collapse of a certain sky was delayed. So why? There are only 12 light groups there, shouldn't there be a total of 13 of the Twelve Immortals + Jian'er. ? ---It's not that I doubt their ability, it's just that it is "God's will" and "order" after all, and the ancestors have all fallen into this. And it seems that the article about asking for a retreat also mentioned that they cannot leave Kunlun and can only possess the "unlucky" crane... 4. What will happen to them in the future? . ? And the immortals of Duantianmen? Ye Fengda also said in the following article that the human world will eventually collapse. What about Chan Jiao? What should the leader do? Can they hold on until then? Doesn't it mean that the greater the ability, the greater the danger? . ---So I thought about the empty seat of Tianzun before, and felt all kinds of worries. . Although Tianzun has always been a "magic nemesis", he was not said to be a "mana nemesis", and as shown in Xiaoyaoyou, Tianzun's magic power is definitely not weak, and he directly destroyed the magic horse in the illusory realm... I still firmly believe that the "level is poor", so is Yuanshi the first to be unlucky? What will the leader do? Although he only has his soul left, I think he will find a way to fight for it. He is "rebellious in temperament" and "loves his senior brother". Moreover, Jian'er will never sit back and watch Master and the others perish! . . . Then what will these two masochistic people do? . . . Is there a sense of tragedy? ! ------Okay, maybe I'm overthinking it, but I'm still worried. . Please give me some clarification! , No! Yes, please give me new articles! . . I really hope the follow-up can continue~
Is this a frog boiled in warm water? Take your time
Soft? Very good name
If you want to write, you can write about life after marriage. Mo Qing is so pitiful~
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