"The way of heaven requires gods to be ruthless. I will peel off the gods and pick out the bones of the immortals. It doesn't matter if the gods don't do it!"
The way of heaven requires gods to have no desires, but I want to drag these gods and Buddhas all over the sky and fall into the world of mortals, full of desires and sins. "
"Broken sexual precepts, shattered golden bodies, ruined Taoism, and lost merit.
A hundred years of thunder whipping, three reincarnations to rebuild.
From beginning to end, there is only the word "willingness". "
It's hard to describe the path of cultivating feelings in just one word* The extremely affectionate Buddha cultivation attack
Remarks:
Cutting off the flesh of one's legs to practice writing
The writing is immature, please bear with me.
Intention: The way of heaven without mercy, the way of lovers
Reader comments
Nice! Big, come on!
Embrace every copy of Monk Attack
Ouch! The monk likes him! ! Jealous?
Oops! Ji Zheng is so cute
Isn't this chicken eating? ! ! Oh! ! ! Well written in big words!
Zhou Chu will not be eliminated! ! ! !
Hey... Xiao Xiao is so cute
Xiao Shu is called Xiao Shu by the monk! !
Wait for the update! ! Come on! ! !
When~~will it be updated~~~big~~~~
Come on, don't give up, I'm waiting for your update.
Hey, happy Lantern Festival!
Oh, have the updates started yet (laughing). But I have an exam coming up and I don't have time to read it?? (???)???. After the exam is over, I will give you a long comment and ask you casually: Does DaDa update daily?
The first time I discovered Dada's article was in the Xianxia category. At that time, Dada had only been updated to Chapter 19. When I clicked in, to be honest, neither the title nor the introduction attracted me very much, so could I change the introduction? (Manual funny) (^-^)/
You must know how important an attractive introduction is to an article. Some people will stop when they see the introduction, and they will not have the urge to read the article. Moreover, the writing style is very plot-oriented, and it is not an article that makes people happy to read it. If the plot is not compact and exciting enough, how can we retain readers and make them spend time reading the article? They will just watch the drama. Another point: Stable updates are very important. Only with stable updates can you have stable readers. Stable updates Stable updates Stable updates! Say important things three times. M(._.)M
Also, most of the plots are too lengthy. Doesn't the first chapter violate the rule of having the main character appear within three hundred words? A good opening is also very important. You have to think carefully about what occasion to write about, what story to tell, what foreshadowing to lay out, and what message to reveal to best retain readers. However, the writing style is very good and the details are well described. However, the article does not have a strong sense of substitution (personal feeling). Overall, it is very good. The key to writing online novels is to tell the story well. It doesn't matter whether the writing is good or not. Of course, if the writing is good, it is the icing on the cake. I think Gong's name is very nice (Yan Gou Tonggui, it sounds a bit familiar). Let me guess if Jiang Shu's setting is a loser, will he turn around in the end? Don't be emotional when you are in love. Will it be a bit cruel later? A small amount of abuse will make you happy, but a big abuse will hurt your body. Please tell me! I can only accept a happy ending, or the two of them are no longer together, the kind where one lives and the other goes. (Just kidding, I can accept either big or small, a little bit of abuse would be better. Hahahahahahaha, just follow your heart)
I guess you don't know how many words you plan to write in this article^o^ I don't know if you have an outline. What's even more amazing to me is that there seems to be no typos in this article (I didn't see any typos anyway). Oh, remember to change the introduction, this introduction is really not good. It shouldn't be too troublesome to change the profile (super quiet)
Final wishes
All the best, transform into a code machine.
，！
Nice! Big, come on!
Embrace every copy of Monk Attack
Ouch! The monk likes him! ! Jealous?
Oops! Ji Zheng is so cute
Isn't this chicken eating? ! ! Oh! ! ! Well written in big words!
Zhou Chu will not be eliminated! ! ! !
Hey... Xiao Xiao is so cute
Xiao Shu is called Xiao Shu by the monk! !
Wait for the update! ! Come on! ! !
When~~will it be updated~~~big~~~~
Come on, don't give up, I'm waiting for your update.
Hey, happy Lantern Festival!
Oh, have the updates started yet (laughing). But I have an exam coming up and I don't have time to read it?? (???)???. After the exam is over, I will give you a long comment and ask you casually: Does DaDa update daily?
The first time I discovered Dada's article was in the Xianxia category. At that time, Dada had only been updated to Chapter 19. When I clicked in, to be honest, neither the title nor the introduction attracted me very much, so could I change the introduction? (Manual funny) (^-^)/ You must know how important an attractive introduction is to an article. Some people will stop when they see the introduction, and they will not have the urge to read the article. Moreover, the writing style is very plot-oriented, and it is not an article that makes people happy to read it. If the plot is not compact and exciting enough, how can we retain readers and make them spend time reading the article? They will just watch the drama. Another point: Stable updates are very important. Only with stable updates can you have stable readers. Stable updates Stable updates Stable updates! Say important things three times. M(._.)M Also, most of the plots are too lengthy. Doesn't the first chapter violate the rule of having the main character appear within three hundred words? A good opening is also very important. You have to think carefully about what occasion to write about, what story to tell, what foreshadowing to lay out, and what message to reveal to best retain readers. However, the writing style is very good and the details are well described. However, the article does not have a strong sense of substitution (personal feeling). Overall, it is very good. The key to writing online novels is to tell the story well. It doesn't matter whether the writing is good or not. Of course, if the writing is good, it is the icing on the cake. I think Gong's name is very nice (Yan Gou Tonggui, it sounds a bit familiar). Let me guess if Jiang Shu's setting is a loser, will he turn around in the end? Don't be emotional when you are in love. Will it be a bit cruel later? A small amount of abuse will make you happy, but a big abuse will hurt your body. Please tell me! I can only accept a happy ending, or the two of them are no longer together, the kind where one lives and the other goes. (Just kidding, I can accept either big or small, a little bit of abuse would be better. Hahahahahahaha, just follow your heart) I guess you don't know how many words you plan to write in this article^o^ I don't know if you have an outline. What's even more amazing to me is that there seems to be no typos in this article (I didn't see any typos anyway). Oh, remember to change the introduction, this introduction is really not good. It shouldn't be too troublesome to change the profile (super quiet) Final wishes All the best, transform into a code machine. ，！