The Main Plot Has Been Completed [Quick Travel]
主线已完结[快穿]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Chapters
- 207
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
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8.7Score
19.4kNutrition
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5.2kComments
主线已完结[快穿]
I think the first few worlds are better written. The first few worlds suffer from the fact that the system can only talk to each other from a distance, and the love and career lines are not yet obvious. The writing is quite exciting, but the later ones are too complicated. It is about to climax and then slowly decline. Is it a slap in the face? Just give it a tap, do you want to fall in love? It's greasy and crooked, and the career line is becoming increasingly blurry. Also, after the protagonist's mission is completed, the ending is almost similar. They are all about establishing a new order, promoting the progress of the entire civilization, and engaging in science. In the extra story, although different worlds have different characteristics, there are no characteristics. There is no cultivation in the world of cultivation. To convince the original son of destiny to engage in automation or kindergarten in the end. In the world of martial arts, I have never seen the scenery of martial arts. It started modernizing the infrastructure, compiling teaching materials for the little prince, and developing all-round moral, intellectual, physical, artistic and labor development. The maids set up textile factories and restaurants. Finally, it started to modernize. In the school world, I only watched the protagonist living in school a few times. I made up a bloody plot but never cared about the use of this setting! The protagonist's entrepreneurial journey is still very vague, and any subject starts scientific research again. When modernization begins, let's start science fiction. It's always like this, and the ending is always so similar. Isn't it okay not to engage in science and not promote modernization? The slap in the face is dull, the love is crooked, and the career line is not detailed. In short, the end of the fast-travel world always converges to the infinite approach to modern society. Love is sweet but it is not considered love. It is a bit boring on honeymoon. The first world in the career line is the most exciting and detailed. Whistle to the world is the most enjoyable, but the career line is also rough. In short, the elements of several worlds add up, some are too light, some are too heavy, and they become dull.
I don't think this is a sadistic story. The two people are firmly moving towards each other. Although there are all kinds of twists and turns, it really feels like they can't be abused, hahahaha. I edited all my wife's articles, they look great!
I really like to see Qiang Shou being so vulnerable in front of Gong and having low self-esteem, trying to make Gong feel sorry for him by crying.
As expected of a puppy, he's so watery now
The wolf cub in pursuit, tut tut [poor]
Feeling attack requires a lot of attention and care.
The names were exchanged several times in this chapter and I was dizzy.
Can Wang and Sun's names be changed? Dizzy
Hahahahahahahahaha From the neck down, you can only have sex, whether it's me or the general
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Congratulations! Sprinkle flowers~~
It's a bit confusing, who is following whom?
"Sun Yu" caught a big bug for the author~ Damn, Sun Yu and Wang are written backwards in this sentence. Wang wears books.
Congratulations on the completion, looking forward to reading the new article!
Very self-disciplined ~ Finished, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers
Come on, do you have any extras? When will a new pit be opened?
The end of "Spreading Flowers", is there any extra?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh????
Hard work on the idea and writing, see you in the next one~
233333 Thank you for your hard work. See you next time.
Why does the makeup look so scary at the end?
Why would someone stop the two of them from being together?
Damn it, finish spreading flowers
Congratulations on the completion, scatter flowers
Come and see my full order logo~
Finished spreading flowers, my wife is really hard-working
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Or is it the end of the show~Happy (○^?^)??
Reliving the story of Xiao Ying and Xiao Qu again, I am still moved by their love.
Finished spreading flowers! Susu and Xiaozhuti will also live happily ever after!
Finished reading, yay! !