Normal copywriting version:
After picking up the homeless Li Zheng home in the rainy night, things around Xie Tan gradually became strange.
The parent of the student who had been harassing him died in a car accident and appeared on social news
In high school, the female classmate who had isolated and bullied him with his classmates suddenly died of love murder.
Even my father, a gambling addict who couldn't get rid of him, was tortured and killed.
Copywriting love version:
Xie Tan picked up a poor little boy on a rainy night.
Although the little poor boy was born in an orphanage, he is not withdrawn and sharp, but considerate and considerate.
He went into the hall and into the kitchen, making Xie Tan feel the warmth of home for the first time.
Xie Tan and Xiao Meili fell in love.
CP: Xie Tan x Li Zheng
Intention: good will be rewarded with good, evil will be rewarded with evil. Only when people do not do evil can they achieve good results
Reader comments
I thought it was the World of Mountains and Seas chapter by Fei Fei, and I was thinking that it had hundreds of thousands of words, so I planned to save it, but when I flipped through the bookshelf today, I found that it was finished. Oh maiga
But it's still as warm and joyful as ever
By the way, does this count as fertility and hunting and giving birth to a daughter (some history)
It only takes 0.00001S to know who Princess Yongan is [bad smile]
Please update. I don't know how many times I have read your article and the first season. Please update it.
Asking for a bts eight-person novel, the male protagonist is a third-generation beauty, and Quan Zhilong makes a guest appearance
Super Sweet and Sour [Make Me Kangkang] likes this kind of cross-channel dialogue
Shakui Gang, the dungeon that the protagonist enters won't be Fengsha Old Castle, right? [Dog head][dog head]
Author, please be nicer to the male protagonist. I feel so sorry for you.
I love my roommate so much. Please hurry up and start the truck service. I will kneel down and listen.
Will Ali be found out if he kills someone? So scared! How should I put it? I always prefer the protagonist unconditionally. I hope he will be the one in the end.
Damn it! Why is it another tragedy?
Who is it? () Mainly, Sweetie made too much millet porridge () It depends on the situation!
[Orange Candy] Got it
This chapter is a rare literary confession and a gentle interlude in the main storyline of oppression of reality and tense revenge. The style of writing suddenly shifts from campus bullying and nightmare entanglement to the thoughts of learning lyrics and the small interests of life. The elegant style and slow rhythm give the story an extra layer of pyrotechnic poetry and the author's true character.
1. Structural context: from the origin of fascination to the creation of words in life
The whole article is told according to the timeline, naturally and smoothly:
1. Origin: I was touched by the lyrics of "Bohai King", a group friend, and felt envious and dissatisfied, which ignited my desire for creation.
2. Start: First sing the harmony with the lyrics of "Watching Youth", then study the Song lyrics and ponder the rhythm.
3. Breaking out of the cocoon: Wrote the first song "Huanxi Sand" and officially entered the door of lyric writing
4. Singing harmony: In harmony with King Bohai, the song "Ru Meng Ling·Catching Crabs" is playful and clever.
5. Obsessed: I love the short tune "Ru Meng Ling", and casually write all the trivial things in life into the lyrics.
6. Lifestyle lyrics: chestnut picking, persimmon picking, fishing by the river, walking in the snow to find a wife, all included
7. Affectionate memories: It ends with walking in the snow at the age of twenty to find a wife, tender and warm, with a long aftertaste
Written along the way, inspired by people, introduced by learning, written by love, and interesting by life, the layers are clear and the true feelings are revealed.
2. Writing style and temperament: the true character is revealed, and the literary heart can be expressed
The most touching thing about this chapter is that the author's own literary style and temperament are vividly displayed on the page:
- Feeling itchy after seeing other people's masterpieces, refusing to admit defeat and wanting to compete, so real and cute
- Shenxin has not written easily for several months, and her attitude is humble and persistent.
- The lyrics are informal and can be used to write about lovesickness at night, catching crabs and being pinched, chestnuts being smashed, etc.
- The language is half literate and half white, with both ancient charm and local flavor.
- Self-deprecating, "It's like playing around like a dream", proud and unassuming, very down-to-earth
This kind of literati's little fun + the true temperament of life make the text particularly kind and engaging.
3. Highlights of lyrics: Xiaoling writes about fireworks and deep feelings
Although the selected lyrics are small, they all have their own flavor:
- "Huanxi Sand": The opening chapter is steady and concise, with lovesickness at sunset and loneliness at night, beginning to take on an ancient charm.
- "Ru Meng Ling·Catching Crabs": lively and vivid, with "ouch ouch" spoken in the lyrics, full of visual sense
- Qiuli, Fat Persimmon, and Fishing:
It's all about daily life in the countryside, "ouch", "oh haha", "ha miao" and "ashamed",
A call and a response, full of interest, it can be called a model of rural Xiaoling
- "Like a Dream: Walking Alone in the Snow":
Desolate paths, cold bamboos, snow, and fairy clothes, the artistic conception is pure and pure.
Beautifully written about young, reckless and hot love
Although the words are small, they are full of flavor, and the flavor of life and classical charm are perfectly blended.
4. Narrative function: buffering rhythm, fleshing out characters
Inserting this paragraph in the high-voltage advancement of the main line of Revenge is very clever:
- The rhythm is relaxed: bullying, nightmares, counterattacks, emotional tension in the previous part; here it turns to elegance, relaxing the reading rhythm
- Rich characters: The protagonist is no longer just a tool of "humiliation-revenge", but has a literary background and a tender side
- Laying the groundwork: The talent of writing lyrics may later become a weapon of struggle (writing lyrics to expose, building public opinion, etc.)
- Warm background: proves that the protagonist still has love, poetry and passion for life in his heart, not just hatred.
Final comment in one sentence
A small order enlightens the literary mind, and half a lifetime of fireworks enters the forest of words.
From singing and singing competition to life becoming poetry, it not only shows the elegant taste of literati, but also the gentleness of the world, adding a clear background to the heavy story.
It's over, it's a good ending, I feel relieved
A loved flower will grow soft flesh and blood [Come on]
I thought it was the World of Mountains and Seas chapter by Fei Fei, and I was thinking that it had hundreds of thousands of words, so I planned to save it, but when I flipped through the bookshelf today, I found that it was finished. Oh maiga But it's still as warm and joyful as ever
By the way, does this count as fertility and hunting and giving birth to a daughter (some history)
It only takes 0.00001S to know who Princess Yongan is [bad smile]
Please update. I don't know how many times I have read your article and the first season. Please update it.
Asking for a bts eight-person novel, the male protagonist is a third-generation beauty, and Quan Zhilong makes a guest appearance
Super Sweet and Sour [Make Me Kangkang] likes this kind of cross-channel dialogue
Shakui Gang, the dungeon that the protagonist enters won't be Fengsha Old Castle, right? [Dog head][dog head]
Author, please be nicer to the male protagonist. I feel so sorry for you.
I love my roommate so much. Please hurry up and start the truck service. I will kneel down and listen.
Will Ali be found out if he kills someone? So scared! How should I put it? I always prefer the protagonist unconditionally. I hope he will be the one in the end.
Damn it! Why is it another tragedy?
Who is it? () Mainly, Sweetie made too much millet porridge () It depends on the situation!
[Orange Candy] Got it This chapter is a rare literary confession and a gentle interlude in the main storyline of oppression of reality and tense revenge. The style of writing suddenly shifts from campus bullying and nightmare entanglement to the thoughts of learning lyrics and the small interests of life. The elegant style and slow rhythm give the story an extra layer of pyrotechnic poetry and the author's true character. 1. Structural context: from the origin of fascination to the creation of words in life The whole article is told according to the timeline, naturally and smoothly: 1. Origin: I was touched by the lyrics of "Bohai King", a group friend, and felt envious and dissatisfied, which ignited my desire for creation. 2. Start: First sing the harmony with the lyrics of "Watching Youth", then study the Song lyrics and ponder the rhythm. 3. Breaking out of the cocoon: Wrote the first song "Huanxi Sand" and officially entered the door of lyric writing 4. Singing harmony: In harmony with King Bohai, the song "Ru Meng Ling·Catching Crabs" is playful and clever. 5. Obsessed: I love the short tune "Ru Meng Ling", and casually write all the trivial things in life into the lyrics. 6. Lifestyle lyrics: chestnut picking, persimmon picking, fishing by the river, walking in the snow to find a wife, all included 7. Affectionate memories: It ends with walking in the snow at the age of twenty to find a wife, tender and warm, with a long aftertaste Written along the way, inspired by people, introduced by learning, written by love, and interesting by life, the layers are clear and the true feelings are revealed. 2. Writing style and temperament: the true character is revealed, and the literary heart can be expressed The most touching thing about this chapter is that the author's own literary style and temperament are vividly displayed on the page: - Feeling itchy after seeing other people's masterpieces, refusing to admit defeat and wanting to compete, so real and cute - Shenxin has not written easily for several months, and her attitude is humble and persistent. - The lyrics are informal and can be used to write about lovesickness at night, catching crabs and being pinched, chestnuts being smashed, etc. - The language is half literate and half white, with both ancient charm and local flavor. - Self-deprecating, "It's like playing around like a dream", proud and unassuming, very down-to-earth This kind of literati's little fun + the true temperament of life make the text particularly kind and engaging. 3. Highlights of lyrics: Xiaoling writes about fireworks and deep feelings Although the selected lyrics are small, they all have their own flavor: - "Huanxi Sand": The opening chapter is steady and concise, with lovesickness at sunset and loneliness at night, beginning to take on an ancient charm. - "Ru Meng Ling·Catching Crabs": lively and vivid, with "ouch ouch" spoken in the lyrics, full of visual sense - Qiuli, Fat Persimmon, and Fishing: It's all about daily life in the countryside, "ouch", "oh haha", "ha miao" and "ashamed", A call and a response, full of interest, it can be called a model of rural Xiaoling - "Like a Dream: Walking Alone in the Snow": Desolate paths, cold bamboos, snow, and fairy clothes, the artistic conception is pure and pure. Beautifully written about young, reckless and hot love Although the words are small, they are full of flavor, and the flavor of life and classical charm are perfectly blended. 4. Narrative function: buffering rhythm, fleshing out characters Inserting this paragraph in the high-voltage advancement of the main line of Revenge is very clever: - The rhythm is relaxed: bullying, nightmares, counterattacks, emotional tension in the previous part; here it turns to elegance, relaxing the reading rhythm - Rich characters: The protagonist is no longer just a tool of "humiliation-revenge", but has a literary background and a tender side - Laying the groundwork: The talent of writing lyrics may later become a weapon of struggle (writing lyrics to expose, building public opinion, etc.) - Warm background: proves that the protagonist still has love, poetry and passion for life in his heart, not just hatred. Final comment in one sentence A small order enlightens the literary mind, and half a lifetime of fireworks enters the forest of words. From singing and singing competition to life becoming poetry, it not only shows the elegant taste of literati, but also the gentleness of the world, adding a clear background to the heavy story.
It's over, it's a good ending, I feel relieved A loved flower will grow soft flesh and blood [Come on]