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Fu Shiyi's evaluation of his ex-wife Jian Lu was: a dead fish.
The kind that dies day and night.
Three months after the divorce, Jian Lu, a dead fish, appeared on the racing track and was the first to cross the finish line.
After taking off her safety helmet, she smiled brightly and wowed the audience.
Sitting in the audience, Fu Shiyi began to have doubts about his vision and life.
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On the day of the divorce, Fu Shiyi asked Jian Lu: "Is it because of guilt and wanting to make amends that you got married?"
After a long silence, Jian Lu nodded.
In that minute-long silence, Jian Lu thought that it was best not to let the other person know about the shameful thing of losing oneself because of loving someone who was not interested in her.
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After a carefully planned fairy dance, Lu Nanxi suddenly became the quasi-young mistress of the famous Guan family and Guan Rui's fiancée.
The man who was tricked by her ignored the past grudges, supported her and abused her outside, gave her enough face, and was tolerant and considerate to her at home.
Happiness came so suddenly, and it was natural for Lu Nanxi to fall.
Until the day of the engagement, the house was full of guests, but the male protagonist was absent because he was looking for another woman, and her high-end dress turned into a clown costume——
Only then did she realize that in that person's eyes, she was just a high-end fake.
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Lu Nanxi did the breakup very neatly, and it was already a few months after Guan Rui found her.
She held another man's arm at the dinner party and greeted him with a sweet smile, like a stranger.
In the long, quiet corridor, he blocked her path, suppressing the emotions surging in his heart, "Come back, I can continue to help you."
She curled her lips slightly and smiled brightly: "Unfortunately, you are no longer of use."
Purpose: Expressing the male and female protagonists' pursuit and desire for happiness.
Reader comments
This heroine is very well written. At the beginning, I felt very interested in reading it. The theme is good, the character of the heroine is also very real, and the plot design is also very good.
How should I put it, the plot in the middle and later stages is a bit unsatisfactory. After Qi Yizhong married the heroine, I personally felt that his character had changed a bit, and it even made people feel a little thin and boring. The previously cute, strong, and lovable character gradually disappeared after that.
The plot has been narrated in a long way. When I wrote about Emperor Jing, it was probably from the perspective of the protagonist, so I couldn't quite understand the fundamental reason for the change in the relationship between Emperor Jing and the heroine. When I wrote about the death of the emperor and the empress, I personally felt that the part was a bit rushed.
It feels like the author's enthusiasm and investment in this article are not as much as at the beginning, and the plot has become a bit abrupt, not as exciting and exciting as it was at the beginning.
However, this article is written fluently and logically, and the various elements are integrated very appropriately. Titles and the status of men and women, two issues that are often poorly dealt with in female literature, are also handled very well. The writing style is very relaxed and pleasant in the main drama, and the lightness is just right, making people very comfortable.
Come on, go check out your modern novel about heroines, please update it soon.
This heroine is very well written. At the beginning, I felt very interested in reading it. The theme is good, the character of the heroine is also very real, and the plot design is also very good. How should I put it, the plot in the middle and later stages is a bit unsatisfactory. After Qi Yizhong married the heroine, I personally felt that his character had changed a bit, and it even made people feel a little thin and boring. The previously cute, strong, and lovable character gradually disappeared after that. The plot has been narrated in a long way. When I wrote about Emperor Jing, it was probably from the perspective of the protagonist, so I couldn't quite understand the fundamental reason for the change in the relationship between Emperor Jing and the heroine. When I wrote about the death of the emperor and the empress, I personally felt that the part was a bit rushed. It feels like the author's enthusiasm and investment in this article are not as much as at the beginning, and the plot has become a bit abrupt, not as exciting and exciting as it was at the beginning. However, this article is written fluently and logically, and the various elements are integrated very appropriately. Titles and the status of men and women, two issues that are often poorly dealt with in female literature, are also handled very well. The writing style is very relaxed and pleasant in the main drama, and the lightness is just right, making people very comfortable. Come on, go check out your modern novel about heroines, please update it soon.