Demining: It's in the first person, and it's more common in daily life. I'll revise the article.
I'm revising the article and outline. The protagonist's character tends to rush all the way to be. I'm trying to make it reasonably sweet. It's normal for characters to be OOC. We belong to a parallel world. Any slight disturbance "may" change every move of the original character. To exaggerate, you can't ask a child who grew up among wolves to be helpful as soon as he returns to the human world.
You can point out the normal and unreasonable things, and I will change your mind if I agree with you.
Also, can you write about McDull?
Purpose: Seeking common ground while reserving differences