[Gintama] I Want to Take My Husband's Last Name Sakata

I feel that Shen Tangyi's life experience is not that simple

Red ScarfPingwen Shop I have been a diver for many years = = My brain is not working well. I only remember the exchanges in the forum = This is my first long review dedicated to you. I won't go into too many compliments. Your request is just a little venomous. The copywriting is amazing... I'll tell you I didn't understand it the first time I read it? Chapter 1 At the beginning of the article, to be honest, this kind of fantasy novel about another world is really not my thing. It was a bit dry at the beginning, like eating hard biscuits in the summer = = But it got much better in the middle, and I immediately understood, ah, it turned out to be foreshadowing, but when the heroine appeared, it was really a bit confusing. When she first appeared, my first impression was that of a typical white heroine in a CEO novel. Whether it was that I couldn't walk well and fell down, or I thought that the king had been smashed and traveled through time, thinking that I could leave now that the king was gone, no matter what dared to stop the girl, or whether I was confused and confused about whether the king was a thing or not, in my opinion, it was full of the fragrance of the president's writing. Also, = = When the girl suddenly raised her head and said that after sitting in that place all day, the balabala started to explode... Pay attention, pay attention. The next sentence was Snow King frowning and secretly screaming that something was wrong. When I first read it, I thought it was Snow King who had touched the girl's anger. After reading it, I realized that it should be: Snow King frowned, and the girl secretly screamed that something was wrong. (Probably so) Next, I saw the scene of the girl getting angry and her brother putting out the fire = = ORZ Actually, there is nothing to complain about here. Forgive me for my impure heart = = When I saw this, I thought the male protagonist was the elder brother, a brother and sister love each other. 0.0 Then the female protagonist began to think normally, and all kinds of coldness began to appear. = = Finished Summary: The heroine's character span is too big. Chapter 2, only then did I realize that the heroine is a dark-bellied, aloof, venomous, sometimes a little bit funny. Then I suddenly discovered that in most CP articles, either the heroine looked at the hero's body, or the hero looked at the heroine's body, or they coughed and kissed (at least that's the case in most of the articles I read) From the beginning of this chapter, I discovered that Gui Lan and the heroine had a relationship between the scolder and the scolded. When two people quarreled, one person would always be unable to quarrel with the other = = Gui Lan, the unlucky child, was on the weaker side = = If I were the author, I would also make it like this. After all, it is my mother who treats the heroine better. This chapter is over, I forgive the newbie who has too little eyesight to find a place to be vicious = = Chapter 3: The ninth line of the Demonic Animal Realm was mistyped and became the Animal Demonic Realm. And [the color of Guilan's hair suddenly turned into a cold and sharp color like ice crystals, and her skin color turned pale in an instant: "You don't understand."] I don't know how to put it, it just feels a bit abrupt. I discovered a characteristic. The author's names are a bit biased. Whether it's Ti Wei, Gui Lan, Qie Meng, etc., Or the names of God Emperor Realm, Ghost Spirit Realm, Demonic Animal Realm and Xu Zhao Space, they are all very biased. = = I will tell you Qie Meng's name. I still found Du Niang to know the name of qie? There was an introduction earlier about making machines and so on. When I saw Ti Wei recording her ideas with pen and paper, I really wanted to ask, did she use a ballpoint pen? In the fourth chapter, the heroine entered that place. When I saw it, I thought the author had made a typo. He wanted to say water lake. After reading it, I couldn't help but knock my rag head = = The alien continent is indeed different from the world of us normal people! It turns out that there are water foxes in the water = = The following paragraph deeply stimulated my little normal heart. When the heroine saw a baby boy underwater, her first reaction was to wonder why there were humans in this place! Damn it = = If I were scared to death, there would be a baby boy under the water. My first reaction would be that this cliff is in the rhythm of a horror movie! = = I think I need to take medicine, otherwise I will be cute. Chapter 5 The conversation between Gui Lan and the servant is not quite right. It feels like the two of them are chatting at the same level, but isn't the servant a servant in the house? Can you speak like an equal to your own son? Gui Lan still has to think of an excuse to deceive the servant? Finally, the word "lips bleeding" is fine if it is foreshadowing, but if not, it seems very abrupt, and it seems to the reader that the pink-robed man's lips are really bleeding. Chapter 7 [The beast tamer brought out a flying monster, which was different from the monster rented outside. These monsters were covered with towels with their family crests printed on them, and they were placed in comfortable pavilions and seats that were sheltered from the wind. How big of a monster is this to fit into the pavilion? Author, are you sure you didn't make a typo? No more wood. Chapter 8 [Gui Lan's expression changed, she quickly untied the tie, rushed over to hug Ti Wei, and held down her hand to untie the tie] Did you fall to the ground? He just untied the belt without letting Ti Wei untie it = = Gui Lan, is it really okay for you to be so sacrificial for yourself? [A certain family held a party on a floating island in the sky] This "someone" seemed too deliberate in Ti Wei's words. She might be able to say: a certain family somewhere is having a party on a floating island in the sky, or something else, but she just can't say "someone". [It is impossible for any living thing to catch up with the speed of light. But you have to prove how much effort you can put in to take your loved one with you, transcending time, aging, and changes. That's where the girl's confidence lies in giving her heart to you] I like this sentence very much, although I can't understand it = = but it feels so profound. Then there won't be much of a problem with the rest. The more you look at it, the better it tastes. = =Maybe you've noticed that I'm just nitpicking... I really don't think I have a venomous tongue = = Author, have you noticed the soft and cute tone in my words? I am actually a healer. If you think there is anything bad about the long review, you are welcome to complain, Qingyan allows you to complain 0.0