Generate electricity for love. If you don't like it, just go to the right.
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1. Pay equal attention to plot and emotion. It's a slow burn, at least the first two volumes have no real ambiguity at all, just everyday.
The middle part focuses on emotional advancement, while the later stages mainly serve the plot, involving the consequences of the combination of the time turner and the Horcrux. The heroine will behave very strangely, and she may only like the emotional flow or the sweet and careful entry, and the reading may feel messy and irritable.
I would like to declare here that if you feel uncomfortable while reading the article, abandon the article as soon as possible to avoid wasting time. Friends who say that you are mentally damaged after reading the article, that this article should not be free, and that you want me to compensate you are sorry, you are out of luck.
2. Sweet article! But before every piece of candy appears, sweetness is Schrödinger's sweetness.
According to the feedback from reading the article, some people say it is sweet, while others say it is realistic towards forced love (the perception is closely related to the plot, but the reveal will be delayed until the middle and late stages of the article. If you feel uncomfortable, please turn to the right in time)
3. Lao Fu was the product of his mother using magic potions to confuse Lao Riddle (a certain potion turned out to be a word of mouth), but it would be too unfair for Merlin to blindly define him as a "bad species".
Therefore, the heroine plays the horror game as a nurturing game (starting from a baby in an orphanage), which is very vulgar and redemptive. Those who are allergic to the Virgin should be careful.
Regarding the reaction of some readers to Riddle's character being OOC after watching the part in the Wu's Orphanage where he first met Dumbledore, in fact, in this part, most of Riddle's demeanor and language descriptions are respectful of the original work... Young Tom's vigilance is superficial and not very restrained.
4. It is not a textual criticism, but if there is anything wrong in the article, you are welcome to discuss it and we will fix it when there is time.
5. The setting of Nagini is explained in the first chapter, and there are changes compared with the original work; she will turn back into a wizard in the end, which is considered an easter egg.
6. We do not discredit any academy, we do not whitewash the original work, and we try our best to express the characteristics of each small animal; however, characters with different personalities and different academy will have different positions (according to the comments, this article is not suitable for the promotion of any academy, and you may feel uncomfortable after reading it)
In addition, the original work did not focus on the characters and their personalities, and the descriptions in this article generally do not conform to the general tone of fan fiction.
The article includes both male and female protagonists who have obvious character flaws, and they like to be cautious about perfect characters.
7. The heroine entered the Snake Yard with Lao Fu, but she was not a pure Snake Yard person (emphasis added)! ! No spoilers related to the plot.
8. This article has two endings! The ending of BE comes with an extra chapter and is one less volume than HE (click on the table of contents for details), you can choose to watch it.
Another: Mary Sue & Tom Sue
Purpose: Children born as a result of potions should not be deprived of the rights of their loved ones
Reader comments
I generate electricity for love, I don't like to point out the cross directly.
I will object to anyone who insists on leaving subjective comments when selecting products. If they are excessive, they will be deleted. Everyone is free.
Be sure to read the copy before reading it.
An old couple was having fun and was overheard by a child hahahaha
Looking at Tom's question at the end, "Will you give me a home?" I thought of the prefect Tom saying to Dumbledore in the original Pensieve, "But I don't have a home."
I feel that Eileen always lacked a little bit of decisiveness because of her family of origin. She was unable to cut off the persecution of her family when she was young, and she was unable to escape from a toxic marriage when she grew up.
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This article is really highly recommended! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a smooth, bug-free HP fanfic with original settings! Regarding the male protagonist, we cannot conventionally regard him as Tom Riddle or Voldemort (there is no big difference between the two in this article), because in this fanfic, Tom still made a Horcrux, but even if his feelings for the female protagonist when he was young were stripped away, he still loves her.
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This article involves Horcruxes and Time-Turners. The only thing I don't think is particularly clear is the setting that the heroine accidentally killed her other self, so she also had Horcruxes, but wandered through the cracks in time. Maybe I didn't look carefully enough. Did the heroine make the Horcrux herself (seems like she was guided by herself who traveled through the time turner?) Or did Tom help her make it? I don't quite understand this.
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Anyway, except for my own little doubts above, this article is really great! Highly recommended! I'm also very interested in the male and female protagonist's close friend who is like a squib daughter~
So beautiful! This is a completely logical Voldemort fanfic! Yes, this place can be called Voldemort! Because of Ann's existence, Voldemort here is still
Tom~
It's really awesome. I think the story line is very complete.
I must have read Harry Potter many times. There are so many little details in it.
What surprised me the most was that the male and female protagonists in the characters were very consistent. There was a sense that they were in the same space as ours or that they really existed in another parallel universe. There is no sense of dislocation in reading the story. Perhaps it is because of the unpredictability or changes of human nature that makes us so fascinated to write it.
It's a really good article. It can be seen that the author is really treating this novel with great care. It's amazing?
Finally, I wish you can more and more accurately describe some of your ideas.
A thousand readers will create a thousand Hamlets. The text is very logical and the heroine is well established. However, from my subjective perspective, I feel that Riddle is a bit OOC. It is too easy to "return to good" and is not a "Dark Lord". He expresses his love very frankly and is willing to change for the heroine.
Another point is that I vaguely remember that in the middle of the article, it was said that the heroine will be more sophisticated in the later stage. I have been looking forward to it, but I didn't expect that there was no development in the career line. In the end, the plot relied heavily on the identity of the uncle and the hero.
Could it be that her daughter is like a "squib" because she is the inheritor of ancient magic? All the inheritors of ancient magic in Huo Yili only awakened their magical power at the age of 16...
I want to ask about the foreshadowing laid out earlier. The first one is that Grus treats Rhea like his own daughter. Is it because of Rhea's mother? The second one is to ask what happened to Malfoy and Eileen at Hogwarts?
My wife's writing is great, and the closed-loop plot is very bright! No one has good work? Those who can will be rewarded first??
Weekly Chacha makes people feel so distressed, wuwuwu~
It seems that Sif is a classmate of the heroine's daughter.
Eileen is still on the same path
I want to ask about the foreshadowing laid out earlier. The first one is that Grus treats Rhea like his own daughter. Is it because of Rhea's mother? The second one is to ask what happened to Malfoy and Eileen at Hogwarts?
What an exquisite design! Looking forward to my wife's next HP article!
Ah ah ah, it's Nirvana
"The world" is a big bug for the author~
Nice! I read it all night
Currently being serialized: "What the hell, are you a man?"
Next book: "The Target of Strategy Is Always Non-Human (Greek Mythology)"
Ahhhh it's over! Today is my birthday. I just read Chapter 162. I'm on the train. I'm going to school in the afternoon because I have classes tomorrow (╥_╥)
The younger brother and sister's IDs are so funny, they're not telepathic, they're not bacteria hhhhh
Finished spreading flowers [please] looking forward to a lot of extras [touching the head]
So sweet, so sweet [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] Huang Meitian's pain is soothed
Qingyun Hotel is really cute
Wu Zetian herself was pretty enough. The one about her was not as good-looking as the one about Lu Pheasant.
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I generate electricity for love, I don't like to point out the cross directly. I will object to anyone who insists on leaving subjective comments when selecting products. If they are excessive, they will be deleted. Everyone is free. Be sure to read the copy before reading it.
An old couple was having fun and was overheard by a child hahahaha
Looking at Tom's question at the end, "Will you give me a home?" I thought of the prefect Tom saying to Dumbledore in the original Pensieve, "But I don't have a home."
I feel that Eileen always lacked a little bit of decisiveness because of her family of origin. She was unable to cut off the persecution of her family when she was young, and she was unable to escape from a toxic marriage when she grew up.
Write a book review! This article is really highly recommended! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a smooth, bug-free HP fanfic with original settings! Regarding the male protagonist, we cannot conventionally regard him as Tom Riddle or Voldemort (there is no big difference between the two in this article), because in this fanfic, Tom still made a Horcrux, but even if his feelings for the female protagonist when he was young were stripped away, he still loves her. . This article involves Horcruxes and Time-Turners. The only thing I don't think is particularly clear is the setting that the heroine accidentally killed her other self, so she also had Horcruxes, but wandered through the cracks in time. Maybe I didn't look carefully enough. Did the heroine make the Horcrux herself (seems like she was guided by herself who traveled through the time turner?) Or did Tom help her make it? I don't quite understand this. . Anyway, except for my own little doubts above, this article is really great! Highly recommended! I'm also very interested in the male and female protagonist's close friend who is like a squib daughter~
So beautiful! This is a completely logical Voldemort fanfic! Yes, this place can be called Voldemort! Because of Ann's existence, Voldemort here is still Tom~
It's really awesome. I think the story line is very complete. I must have read Harry Potter many times. There are so many little details in it. What surprised me the most was that the male and female protagonists in the characters were very consistent. There was a sense that they were in the same space as ours or that they really existed in another parallel universe. There is no sense of dislocation in reading the story. Perhaps it is because of the unpredictability or changes of human nature that makes us so fascinated to write it. It's a really good article. It can be seen that the author is really treating this novel with great care. It's amazing? Finally, I wish you can more and more accurately describe some of your ideas.
A thousand readers will create a thousand Hamlets. The text is very logical and the heroine is well established. However, from my subjective perspective, I feel that Riddle is a bit OOC. It is too easy to "return to good" and is not a "Dark Lord". He expresses his love very frankly and is willing to change for the heroine. Another point is that I vaguely remember that in the middle of the article, it was said that the heroine will be more sophisticated in the later stage. I have been looking forward to it, but I didn't expect that there was no development in the career line. In the end, the plot relied heavily on the identity of the uncle and the hero.
Could it be that her daughter is like a "squib" because she is the inheritor of ancient magic? All the inheritors of ancient magic in Huo Yili only awakened their magical power at the age of 16...
I want to ask about the foreshadowing laid out earlier. The first one is that Grus treats Rhea like his own daughter. Is it because of Rhea's mother? The second one is to ask what happened to Malfoy and Eileen at Hogwarts?
My wife's writing is great, and the closed-loop plot is very bright! No one has good work? Those who can will be rewarded first??
Weekly Chacha makes people feel so distressed, wuwuwu~
It seems that Sif is a classmate of the heroine's daughter.
Eileen is still on the same path
I want to ask about the foreshadowing laid out earlier. The first one is that Grus treats Rhea like his own daughter. Is it because of Rhea's mother? The second one is to ask what happened to Malfoy and Eileen at Hogwarts?
What an exquisite design! Looking forward to my wife's next HP article!
Ah ah ah, it's Nirvana
"The world" is a big bug for the author~
Nice! I read it all night
Currently being serialized: "What the hell, are you a man?" Next book: "The Target of Strategy Is Always Non-Human (Greek Mythology)"
Ahhhh it's over! Today is my birthday. I just read Chapter 162. I'm on the train. I'm going to school in the afternoon because I have classes tomorrow (╥_╥)
The younger brother and sister's IDs are so funny, they're not telepathic, they're not bacteria hhhhh
Finished spreading flowers [please] looking forward to a lot of extras [touching the head]
So sweet, so sweet [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] Huang Meitian's pain is soothed
Qingyun Hotel is really cute
Wu Zetian herself was pretty enough. The one about her was not as good-looking as the one about Lu Pheasant.