Hmm...
I don't know what to say...
It feels weird.
The heroine is a bit too much of a Mary Sue...
And [a 10cm piece of silk costs 10,000J] makes people feel that this is too exaggerated.
Also, [why the heroine is so popular] this question needs to be explained carefully!
Hmm...
Overall it's pretty good,
Come on.
Hmm... I don't know what to say... It feels weird. The heroine is a bit too much of a Mary Sue... And [a 10cm piece of silk costs 10,000J] makes people feel that this is too exaggerated. Also, [why the heroine is so popular] this question needs to be explained carefully! Hmm... Overall it's pretty good, Come on.