It's a very good start, laying down a lot of clues, but the theme of time travel is not new anymore, so I need to write it with a different feeling, come on! Author's reply:
This is a good question, and one I've been thinking about.
I just write casually, hoping to give everyone a different story.
It's a very good start, laying down a lot of clues, but the theme of time travel is not new anymore, so I need to write it with a different feeling, come on! Author's reply: This is a good question, and one I've been thinking about. I just write casually, hoping to give everyone a different story.