Li Xunhuan's story has been tampered with!
Because I don't like the plot of flying knives to ask for love, I did it myself and had enough food and clothing!
This is an old work from high school, I want to share it with my friends who have the same passion!
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The attack begins! ! ! !
Review - The reverse strategy of Korean dramas
To be honest, I chose Zhonggu Liang's article because the title of this article struck a chord with me. After reading this article, the beautiful cover, the introduction that highlights the key points and cute points of the article, and the loving four-frame comic were all the reasons why I accepted this article. The only slight deficiency is probably the pattern dividing line across the copy. When the length of the text is long, having one or two pattern dividing lines may be a highlight, but here it feels a bit cumbersome and complicated. As for suggestions on copywriting layout, I personally think that the author can focus on simplicity and elegance. After all, these patterns are not the focus.
If the copywriting is a highlight that attracts me, then the following text makes me somewhat disappointed. As I read each chapter, I felt that the appeal of this article was slowly diminishing. Honestly, is there any cuteness in this article? I can say for sure - there is. But why are articles becoming less and less attractive?
Personally, I feel that in addition to having cute features to attract readers' attention, an article is more importantly supported by a plot. However, looking at the full text, the plot unfolds so slowly that it is irritating.
The plot develops slowly, which naturally has its advantages and disadvantages. The obvious benefits are well reflected in this article. Due to the slow development of the plot, the author is very good at describing the details and successfully showing the movements, expressions, and psychology of the characters. Therefore, naturally, the characters in this article are no longer monotonous and flat, but full-dimensional and vividly displayed in front of the readers.
However, again, the plot develops so slowly that it is easy to feel that the article is dragging on, or that the article is seriously watered down. The plots that stick together will make readers irritable, and once the readers have no patience to continue reading, the loss of readers will be a fact before their eyes.
The narration of the story plot can be said to be the most important point for an article. Cuteness can be used as a means to attract readers' attention, but it is not the factor that maintains the skeleton of the entire article. A successful online article can be said to retain the reader in the shortest possible time, and then attract the reader as the description unfolds. As far as this article is concerned, the title, copywriting, and beginning, which serve as the face of the online article, are all very successful. This can be seen from the data in this article. But why are there fewer and fewer readers? I think it's largely because of the bland plot development. Because the plot development is not attractive enough, and the climax is not promoted enough, it makes readers feel that this article is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. Over time, fewer people will read it.
In addition to the plot content, I have a few non-issues that I hope can be discussed with the author Gu Liang.
1. Who is Nanzhu? This question has been lingering in my mind since I started reading the article. Until very late, I guess there is some rush to finally come out. Therefore, this point leads to a small flaw in the author's arrangement of character appearances. The appearance of each character needs to be carefully arranged by the author, and the length of the article should also be roughly arranged and controlled. Don't give people the feeling that the supporting characters occupy the majority and the protagonist is the soy sauce.
2. What is the so-called overturning and counter-introduction? In fact, after reading the full text, I still feel a little unclear and confused about this point.
The above are some minor flaws of this article. Of course, this article also has its advantages. Let's talk about it below——
1. The characters are vivid. It can be said that this is very difficult for many fan fiction nowadays to achieve. There are too many fans who pretend to be the names of original characters. Although this article will definitely have some minor problems, these minor problems will not affect the reader's understanding - "Ah, this is the person!", Thus arousing a deeper love for these original characters.
2. The language is humorous. The author's word choice is very accurate and sophisticated, and the whole writing style makes people feel relaxed and cheerful, with beautiful writing skills.
To sum up, although this article has some problems, it also has some notable highlights. I hope Gu Liang can continue to work hard and write good articles.
The above are all opinions of Cherry's family and are inevitably biased. I hope the author Gu Liang can forgive me.
It's over, so sad to let go!
Congratulations~~
I haven't thought about having a baby or something... I haven't thought about it yet... Let's talk about it~~ Anyway, I don't even have a partner yet XDDDD
But raising children is very tiring~~it takes a lot of time, effort and money~~
Come on!!!!!!
What can I say, the writing is quite good, and it is updated today. Is it a daily update?
The attack begins! ! ! !
Review - The reverse strategy of Korean dramas To be honest, I chose Zhonggu Liang's article because the title of this article struck a chord with me. After reading this article, the beautiful cover, the introduction that highlights the key points and cute points of the article, and the loving four-frame comic were all the reasons why I accepted this article. The only slight deficiency is probably the pattern dividing line across the copy. When the length of the text is long, having one or two pattern dividing lines may be a highlight, but here it feels a bit cumbersome and complicated. As for suggestions on copywriting layout, I personally think that the author can focus on simplicity and elegance. After all, these patterns are not the focus. If the copywriting is a highlight that attracts me, then the following text makes me somewhat disappointed. As I read each chapter, I felt that the appeal of this article was slowly diminishing. Honestly, is there any cuteness in this article? I can say for sure - there is. But why are articles becoming less and less attractive? Personally, I feel that in addition to having cute features to attract readers' attention, an article is more importantly supported by a plot. However, looking at the full text, the plot unfolds so slowly that it is irritating. The plot develops slowly, which naturally has its advantages and disadvantages. The obvious benefits are well reflected in this article. Due to the slow development of the plot, the author is very good at describing the details and successfully showing the movements, expressions, and psychology of the characters. Therefore, naturally, the characters in this article are no longer monotonous and flat, but full-dimensional and vividly displayed in front of the readers. However, again, the plot develops so slowly that it is easy to feel that the article is dragging on, or that the article is seriously watered down. The plots that stick together will make readers irritable, and once the readers have no patience to continue reading, the loss of readers will be a fact before their eyes. The narration of the story plot can be said to be the most important point for an article. Cuteness can be used as a means to attract readers' attention, but it is not the factor that maintains the skeleton of the entire article. A successful online article can be said to retain the reader in the shortest possible time, and then attract the reader as the description unfolds. As far as this article is concerned, the title, copywriting, and beginning, which serve as the face of the online article, are all very successful. This can be seen from the data in this article. But why are there fewer and fewer readers? I think it's largely because of the bland plot development. Because the plot development is not attractive enough, and the climax is not promoted enough, it makes readers feel that this article is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. Over time, fewer people will read it. In addition to the plot content, I have a few non-issues that I hope can be discussed with the author Gu Liang. 1. Who is Nanzhu? This question has been lingering in my mind since I started reading the article. Until very late, I guess there is some rush to finally come out. Therefore, this point leads to a small flaw in the author's arrangement of character appearances. The appearance of each character needs to be carefully arranged by the author, and the length of the article should also be roughly arranged and controlled. Don't give people the feeling that the supporting characters occupy the majority and the protagonist is the soy sauce. 2. What is the so-called overturning and counter-introduction? In fact, after reading the full text, I still feel a little unclear and confused about this point. The above are some minor flaws of this article. Of course, this article also has its advantages. Let's talk about it below—— 1. The characters are vivid. It can be said that this is very difficult for many fan fiction nowadays to achieve. There are too many fans who pretend to be the names of original characters. Although this article will definitely have some minor problems, these minor problems will not affect the reader's understanding - "Ah, this is the person!", Thus arousing a deeper love for these original characters. 2. The language is humorous. The author's word choice is very accurate and sophisticated, and the whole writing style makes people feel relaxed and cheerful, with beautiful writing skills. To sum up, although this article has some problems, it also has some notable highlights. I hope Gu Liang can continue to work hard and write good articles. The above are all opinions of Cherry's family and are inevitably biased. I hope the author Gu Liang can forgive me.
It's over, so sad to let go!
Congratulations~~ I haven't thought about having a baby or something... I haven't thought about it yet... Let's talk about it~~ Anyway, I don't even have a partner yet XDDDD But raising children is very tiring~~it takes a lot of time, effort and money~~ Come on!!!!!!
What can I say, the writing is quite good, and it is updated today. Is it a daily update?