Friends, if you read it before July 9, 2023, you can re-read the article, because I have re-edited many chapters. Considering the unclear character development and unclear emotional explanation of the heroine, I reshaped the heroine again. The current heroine is somewhat arrogant and has the cunningness of a little snake.
I also reshaped the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists.
It's like this. The author found that many chapters of this article, which was written in early 2020, were very stiff, the writing was messy, and the male and female protagonists' emotional lines were not clear enough. (It was very stiff) and the author decided to make corrections.
I'm so speechless. Why did I put Regulus and Sirius in the same grade? What was I doing at that time...
Regarding why the heroine's eyes are dark red, I will mention it later when I write the extra chapter.
I noticed that when I wrote characters before, I seemed to only write about the good or evil of their age, but I didn't notice that when they were teenagers, they had bad characters (such as Sirius Black and Severus Snape), but they should also have a good side.
The emotional line between the heroine and the professor needs to be developed slowly, or it can be placed at a later stage, but there will be no shortage of interaction between the two.
Purpose: Slytherins are not the only cunning people
