The writing is delicate and the story is relatively compact. I read Chapter 7 in one breath and couldn't bear to read the rest. Apart from feeling sorry for Beibei, I have to say that this is a good article. Please keep it up! If you want to conform to the Jinjiang style, you only need to add explosive points in the first three chapters of the story, throw out the contradictions, and then use it as an entry point to slowly unfold or recall, which will attract everyone to read further. You can also focus on the male and female protagonists in the first three chapters (although I think this will not be the style of Jinjiang). Generally, the first three chapters of Jinjiang's novels are very fast-paced, and the title of the book is also very straightforward, so that it is more direct and easier to capture the readers' hearts. You can try campus sweet articles in the future. I will keep following this article and look forward to it.
I saw that in the early morning, it was gone~~just waiting for a group of young ladies to dance~
Hahahahahaha, it's already been certified by Little Kitty
So sweet(?>ω<*?)
Ask for extras! ! ! ! ! ! !
This group of people is going to go against the grain.
Chen Ruixuan: I am just a young grass
As expected, we will be together owo
Ah, I really want to see the trajectory. Woohoo.
How are the eldest son and the third brother? The male protagonist's ending is pretty good.
Yu'er is so cute~ Haha, so cute! !
Is voodoo a physical attack?
Life is too fragile, life is too sharp.
The writing is delicate and the story is relatively compact. I read Chapter 7 in one breath and couldn't bear to read the rest. Apart from feeling sorry for Beibei, I have to say that this is a good article. Please keep it up! If you want to conform to the Jinjiang style, you only need to add explosive points in the first three chapters of the story, throw out the contradictions, and then use it as an entry point to slowly unfold or recall, which will attract everyone to read further. You can also focus on the male and female protagonists in the first three chapters (although I think this will not be the style of Jinjiang). Generally, the first three chapters of Jinjiang's novels are very fast-paced, and the title of the book is also very straightforward, so that it is more direct and easier to capture the readers' hearts. You can try campus sweet articles in the future. I will keep following this article and look forward to it.
I saw that in the early morning, it was gone~~just waiting for a group of young ladies to dance~
Hahahahahaha, it's already been certified by Little Kitty
So sweet(?>ω<*?)
Ask for extras! ! ! ! ! ! !
This group of people is going to go against the grain.
Chen Ruixuan: I am just a young grass
As expected, we will be together owo
Ah, I really want to see the trajectory. Woohoo.
How are the eldest son and the third brother? The male protagonist's ending is pretty good.