I read a novel today (I also have a novel that I have been chasing recently (*'▽'*)?), And I also read the novel I wrote. I probably know something is wrong in it. I feel that the interaction between the male and female protagonists is too stiff. I will improve it as appropriate. Please give me your opinions, cutie. I will change it when I master the essentials. ?
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She touched her heart, as if something was missing
But what's missing?
She looked up and looked ahead. There were her groom, relatives, and friends.
What exactly is it?
Intention: end