Reborn as a Young Man

My wife's cookies are great! It's really comfortable to have a smooth journey. Although it doesn't seem to have that sense of ups and downs of comedy, the IQs of both the attack and the end are online, and the plot is reasonable and reasonable. It's really good! It just feels like I pressed fast forward in the second half. After reading the full text, it's the script written by Emperor Chang Ning that impressed me even more.

I think this dirty information is a bit embarrassing. Doesn't it say that the protagonist is the adopted son of the Xin family? Then he still needs to find the sponsor

Emmm It's sweet, but it feels very bland when you look at it. A small suggestion to the author, when writing, pay attention to making the skeleton fuller. This means that the author's writing feels to me like an assembly line product with only a skeleton. You can make some plots more fleshed out, especially in the psychological and emotional changes of the characters. Sometimes, although language can express a person's feelings very well, other times it is indifferent. In the process of writing, you should appropriately add some psychological changes of the characters and their attitudes towards certain things. You can also add some introductions about certain things to make the narrative more complete and the storyline richer and more interesting. The frame is important, but in the process of writing a novel, it is not just the big frame, but the small branches that can promote the development of the storyline. The characters in the novel have souls. What kind of character this person is and what kind of things this character will do can be expressed psychologically. Or you can appropriately use some aspects such as profile description, that is, through other characters' attitudes towards the protagonist's certain things, or psychological description. Some small suggestions are already great. Good luck to the author for the next one!