I'm Waiting for You in the Abyss

In fact, the only drawback is its short size. In fact, Shou's character design is quite good, but the relationship with Gong may be short-lived, and the love may be a bit untenable, but there is a sense of sympathy. They both have similar tragic experiences, but they both maintain their integrity and are still very kind people, so they are really beautiful. Hey, maybe beauty only exists in novels.

Alas, I am quite disappointed. The ending is too hasty. The love between attack and reception is really untenable. Everything else is perfect. This book is really amazing. The too absolute ending in the front will make people more regretful than the hasty ending in the back. Oh my god, I will come back and read this book again sometime, ahhhhhhhhhhh!

The worldview setting and logic of this article are excellent, and the protagonist is also very charming. The problem is probably that the author is too anxious. It is a pity that the article is not expanded. (Running into communism, poof)

I feel that this article is the predecessor of Ideal Town. This article was not successfully written at the time, but Ideal Town is still very well written.

I like these two worlds very much. The author is very imaginative, and I also liked the character of the protagonist from the beginning. But it's really like riding a rocket at this speed, so much so that the back is completely unsupported. It's round, but it's very... Emmmmm, it's hard to describe in words. It's a pity. There is a lot that can be expanded on such a large worldview, and it can also be completed more satisfactorily. I don't know if I will think of this book one day.

I feel that although many places have not been elaborated on in detail, and unfortunately, the emotional line between the attacker and the enemy has progressed too quickly and some transitions and psychological descriptions have been missing, the overall world view and plot have been fully explained, and it is not unfinished. I think the character of Shou is pretty good as it is now, a very brave person, like a little angel woo woo woo

A very good worldview, but the characters and plot could be improved. It would be great if it could be turned into a full-length unit drama [Let Me Kangkang]

I really hope that the author can expand this book one day. This world view is really interesting. The world in the shopping mall is amazing, and the character design of Gongshou is also very good. It can be turned into a full-length setting.

No, in fact, it can really be written as no cp. I think they haven't reached the level of love yet, but it is a very special relationship.

Is it Lan Qing's handwriting writing? To be honest, I really like the setting you mentioned here, Lan Qing. Of course, I also like the current setting of Jian Huai. The emotional line is a bit confusing. I can't quite understand why Shi Changfeng suddenly fell in love with Jian Huai. Maybe if I think carefully, I can understand the sentence that I am lucky to meet you. Maybe it's because you said that you can't let go of your hands and feet to write. The switching of perspectives in the beginning of this article makes me sigh, Lan Qing, you can write infinitely. The flow is really beautiful. Thank you for being my spiritual food for unlimited flow for a while. I hope that I can maintain my original intention and create more and better works in the future. (Ahem, I came all the way from the high-energy QR code.) (I feel that the high-energy QR code is really beautiful.) (The ideal town is too long and I dare not touch it.) I will not be found when I go crazy and lament here. Lazy Qing, I really want to see the emotional line ()! ! ! Just like what you said to Shi Changfeng to say Su Chuozha: Whenever I don't believe in you once, I will lose you. I cried, this setting is really fragrant and delicious, I just like the strong character in Infinite Stream! ! !

It was so short that I thought that bringing Jian Huai out meant that they were in a serious relationship, but in the end, there were other worlds. I'm very curious about how these chapters end... How should I put it? I don't think the word "bad ending" is appropriate. It's more appropriate to describe it as "the author can't write anymore eunuch".

There are dozens of dungeon worlds in this worldview, but they are so short.

At first I thought it was a long story, but then I suddenly remembered it and came back to read it again. I really didn't get enough of it!

I'm a little disappointed, but the whole article is a good read.

Because it is too short, I read the comments after reading the essay. Sure enough, apart from myself being dissatisfied, everyone thinks there is nothing wrong with it besides being short →_→ The ending is too hasty because it is short.

There is no need to expand the story. Life is too long and there are too many trivial things to finish. We already know the path they are going to take, which world they may die in, or the world may be balanced and the two of them live happily, which is good. One thing to say, Lin Zhengying was so pure that even the bullies of that era didn't say anything! ! ! Too over the top! ! ! !

When I read the first short story, I felt that it was going to be a quick travel type, but I didn't expect it to end in two worlds. I was confused. In fact, both worlds are very well written and could be written into a full-length novel. The first world is particularly amazing.

The ending is indeed a bit rushed and there is no emotional line. I think the ending I want to see is that after Jian's father reconciles with all the previous memories, they go to the real world together to give Xiao Huai a loving home.

I really like the big text! ! I think it's well written now! ! Although this is over, it is actually just the beginning. If there is any fantasy world setting, we can make a spin-off and write about Xiao Huai and Time Team going to save the world! ! Sigh... It's just my delusion... I don't always write extras... What a pity! ! Obviously I still want to know the subsequent stories of each protagonist...

This article is really charming. At the beginning, I was very angry about how there could be such a father. When I read it later, I was like

This relationship line is not written reasonably enough. Why did they suddenly get together? The ending is true and feels sudden, but overall it is good and very innovative. Also, I feel that the target of attack and reception is meaningless. The ending of their relationship is too crude. I hope you will continue to work hard.

Although the ending was a bit rushed, I still felt that I felt what the author wanted to convey! As a story it is complete

It did progress quickly in the later stages, but the answers to the main questions were already known. Finish spreading flowers

I was confused by this emotional line. It's been a long time since I've seen the plot and emotions end so quickly. It made me dizzy.

This chapter somehow feels like watching an ideal town, haha. It's nice to say goodbye to my dad.

? ? ? ? ? So the attack and the attack are together?

Except for being a little short, everything else is perfect

That's it? ? ? ? So short? ? Not just starting out? ? ? ?

It's well written, but not enough to read. . Um. . It's really not enough, please give the author a boost! !

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