Don't Mess With
别惹
by Early Deer (早鹿)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 230k Words
- Chapters
- 48
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Theme
- Love Story
- POV
- Female Lead
- Age rating
- 13+
- Updated
- 5h ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
Honours
Synopsis
Fishing fairy vs cool and sinister boss/pseudo-orthopedics/deliberate approach Cen Jin is the school girl of Jinghua Middle School. She comes from a prominent family, is cold and hard to follow, and never gives any girl a chance. Cen Jin was recently obsessed with a transfer student. The girl grew up like a fairy, but she insisted on pestering him. She played basketball, brought him water, followed him to extracurricular classes, and sent messages to harass him every day. But later, Cen Jin only accepted the water she gave him. She was the only girl beside him, and he would only smile at her. The brother teased: "Are you admitting defeat?" An insider said: "Pfft, that's Mr. Cen's sister." As we all know, Cen Jin has nothing to do with this sister. She is both a mother and a father. As long as her eyes turn red, all principles will be abandoned and surrendered. - Cen Jin was arranged by his family to go abroad. Su Mi comforted him: "Brother, I'm not going anywhere. I'm just waiting for you to come back at home." During the vacation after Su Mi's college entrance examination, Cen Jin came back from abroad, and Su Mi, who said she would wait for him to come back, had already disappeared. There was only a countdown to the college entrance examination hanging on the wall, and a very small line below: The college entrance examination is over, and it's time for me to leave. Those years of trying to please and pretend to be good were just a show she played. Many years later, in a claustrophobic space, Su Mi's hands were tied with a tie and pressed against the wall above her head. Her thin waist was close to her, and the man's breath on her neck was hot. She was trembling all over: "Brother, this is not appropriate for us." "Inappropriate? How did you seduce me before? You asked me to sleep with you." That night, Su Mi cried and begged for mercy many times. In the eyes of outsiders, Cen Jin is a cold and ascetic flower of the high mountains. Only she knows the paranoia and super possessiveness behind this man's calm appearance. -No blood relationship -Change from campus to city ~~~~Advance receipt~~~~ "Hooked" The girl who lost her footing in fishing vs. The cold-hearted Buddhist/Ten-year age difference/Deliberate approach/The superior bows down for love Yin Yan, the leader of the Yin family, is cold and handsome, arrogant and will not stop for the weak. The wealthy ladies use various clues to find out his preference in choosing a mate. All I know is that he doesn't like women whose age difference is too big or who are too wealthy, and he hates being deceived. How many women tried their best but failed, and some were dismissed by Assistant He without even seeing Mr. Yin in person. Assistant He looked at the woman who frequently appeared next to the boss in recent days. It was said that she was the daughter of the Huo family who had just returned from abroad. The rose tattoo on her arm was her characteristic. The woman was dressed maturely and charmingly, and her pair of fox eyes were very attractive. However, her methods were clumsy, and Assistant He could easily see her methods clearly. Assistant He watched the woman pretending to sprain her ankle and fall down in front of Boss Yin, then pulled the stern man's trouser leg and said coquettishly: "It hurts so much, I can't walk anymore." I really wanted to persuade this lady not to waste her efforts, but I thought that Mr. Yin didn't even bother to look at her with mercy. With the woman grabbing his trouser legs and refusing to let go, Mr. Yin sighed, knelt down and picked up the princess. The woman leaned on his chest proudly, and came up with a plan. She held his neck and kissed the corners of his lips, and quickly buried her face shyly. I thought that Mr. Yin would darken his face and throw the woman in his arms away, but he just gently pulled the corner of his lower lip and smiled. Assistant He thought he was hallucinating, and when his thoughts were over, Lengqing Buddha was dragged off the altar. - When Yin Yan gradually became attracted to this woman, she suddenly ran away and stopped teasing her. He found her in a simple and dark rough room. The girl had lost her mature and charming dress, her plain face was slightly childish, she was wearing a cheap T-shirt, and the red rose tattoo on her arm was gone. I thought she was a delicate rose, but she was just a weed on the roadside. Her identity and age were false, and even her "I like you" was false. Mr. Yin, who could turn his hands into clouds and rain, was fooled around by a nineteen-year-old little fox. Intention: Study hard and make progress every day
After the encounter, I still felt too aggrieved after reading it for the second time. I understand the truth, but unfortunately I don't have the ambition and revenge of the protagonist. I am a layman, so I feel very aggrieved. The most uncomfortable thing in the series is this one. All the people who died deserved their death, but I can't help but think about the possibility of another one surviving... Maybe the destruction of the supporting cast is consistent with the background of this troubled world; plus the scene where the grandmother recognizes Jiang Heng. As Zhang said in the chapter review, she had two opportunities to be honest in front of everyone, but she still waited until the last person was gone before they recognized each other in private. Although Prince Long and Jiang Heng were flesh on the palms and backs of her hands, I felt that when my grandmother treated the perpetrators' beneficiaries and victims equally, it was essentially unfair. Several members of the royal family occasionally had this kind of "subtle malice", which made me feel depressed. The emotional line is also a bit slow to advance, but it is understandable that Jiang Heng must understand his life experience before the two of them can talk about orthopedics. However, in the column, I felt that the emotional line in this book is too light and there are no twists and turns. I won't poke fun at it, but the article is not about emotional flow in the first place and is oriented toward drama. So what is more embarrassing is that the emotional line is a stable performance of 7 points. The plot line is exciting, but the tone is too helpless. I also give it a 7 point. In summary, I think this work of ftyx can only be said to have no merit (perhaps my expectations are relatively high. Personally, I think the outstanding emotional line is Turing Code, and the outstanding plot is such as Meet Me or Knight of the Stars) From another perspective, since you are writing a novel, you must consider the issue of "look and feel" instead of just being happy. I admit that this is an excellent and wonderful work, but it is not a comfortable novel for readers. If I want to define it, I don't know which category I should put this article into. I think this may be the source of the pain I felt after reading it. The series "Zhutianxingguan" always reminds me of the game of chess played by Mei Changsu. I think I would rather see Mei Changsu die alone and leave Princess Jingwang and others alive than everyone else dying and leaving only him and the princess retreating into the world. I won't mention it here just as an analogy, and there is no meaning of touching porcelain or being gay (holding my head) Although the civet cat exchanged for the prince, the real prince returned in the end. The eagle slave had a lover but did not get married, but at least the second life was successful. The king in troubled times, although he succeeded in the troubled times and retired, he could be regarded as stepping from the bottom to become a prince and prime minister. Although I know that the protagonist of this book has transcended all kinds of worldly desires, but I have not transcended myself. I cannot get out of the worldly evaluation system, so I feel very uncomfortable. Ji himself said in the interview that he hopes that everyone will have new feelings after reading his works every once in a while. I don't know how to define the feelings this book conveys to me, because I am too far away from the realm of the protagonist. I can only read my pain as a layman. Maybe when I said this sentence, I was no longer evaluating this book but looking at myself through the protagonist. If I have the opportunity to review this book in a few years, I hope I will have a different experience. In the end, I will continue to support ftyx no matter what, and I would like to thank Chicken for bringing such a long story~
[Purple Sugar] kswl is here to make a comment. I haven't posted a comment for a year so I don't know what a valid comment is. (I'm really grateful to the teacher for writing examples later, but I am an i person who has never written anything about my feelings except composition and reading. My writing skills are very poor. I was said by my friends to be slow, so I don't know whether what I wrote is a valid comment. I hope the teacher can forgive me and give me a chance to read the complete article.) Because I don't know how to comment at all and I don't want to be spoiled by the comment area. Faced with the point that has been spoiled, I just want to say that there is no good or bad in the world, and my thoughts are still like this. I have no feeling at all when I read the comments of other articles, so I want to write according to my feelings (Teacher, teacher, I really don't write water characters, because I think the teacher said it doesn't have to be a long comment, so I want to say it as smoothly as possible, because I am afraid of saying something wrong or expressing something wrong [cheek]) I want to first talk about my experience when I came to this article (I feel like I shouldn't comment like this, because the comments in the comment area are not written like this, but I think everyone may have their own way of expression, so I apologize if it offends [fist]) Because I have never read the original comics or anime of Blue Lock, I first read a small volleyball article by JJ, and it instantly ignited my blood? (I don't know if I can describe it this way) Then I read a lot of jj's articles about small volleyball (why are there so few fanfics about Blue Lock except Otome? It's so hard to eat [poor]) until I read an article about multiple sports (I don't know if I can mention it like this. If not, I will delete it immediately, because I seem to have seen it before, but I forgot to read the comments. Anyway, I kneeled down and apologized [ Holding fists]) Every character of Blue Lock in it is very lively and interesting. I feel that the style of painting is different from that of Little Volleyball, so I fell in love with it◝︎(⁰▿︎⁰)◜︎Although many people say that they are dark dormitory students or Lei and the like , but I think this is just people with different personalities. The colorful world allows different people to shine with their own light. Every color is unique, but the people who are willing to stay for him are different. The next step is to keep looking for articles because I like to see what different chemical reactions will happen when different people blend in. It's a bit like the butterfly effect? So basically I don't pick the writing style. That's how I found this article by my teacher. Just like what the fellow commentators said, I praise my wife! It was the teacher who allowed us to see such a vivid little star! It is JJ's honor and my honor to meet the teacher in JJ! I didn't finish reading it. I only saw the place where Xiaoxing and Rin got angry for the first time, because the bottom was locked, and it was the appearance of Shido Ryusei, so I was heartbroken. I was jumping up and down and it was very uncomfortable. I thought I would read it first, but I couldn't convince myself at all, so I came to comment (but the teacher didn't have to worry about me being surprised later, the teacher's writing is really exciting. Every detail is so perfect! It's like a real parallel world, and this world has become unique because of the arrival of Xiaoxing. Besides, except for rh, rn, plagiarism, and gold, I have almost no stories about mine. In JJ, Haitang has been reading almost all types of articles for a long time. Nearly 99% of them have no mine, so I am immune to all kinds of poisons.) Then I thought Xiaoxing was very cute created by the teacher! Because I am still young, I can still retain a trace of innocence, but I am also very talented and good at cooking, so I think it is very cute~ It made me very envious of Miffy. When I saw the scene where Miffy went to buy butter, I thought they were such an old couple. Anyway, that sentence is so cute! [Come on], because I didn't look down, I didn't dare to read other people's comments. I also want to thank the teacher for the Chinese translation! ! ! Obviously the teacher mentioned in the author's remarks that my partner can be translated into other meanings, but at that time I was still thinking that the teacher was so rigorous and knowledgeable, and I didn't think about it at all. The result! Ah ah ah, in the Chinese translation of Teacher, I didn't even expect it when I saw Rin cutting her nails in the next chapter. I can only say that Teacher, you are really awesome! ! Rb people's implicitness is really grasped by the teacher! ! Because I really haven't given any comments, I just clicked on favorites, dropped nutrient solutions, etc., So there are a lot of nonsense. I hope the teacher and other friends can forgive me, and I also hope the teacher can give me a chance to read the full text. [Pitiful]
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[Covering face and laughing and crying] It's so painful for the male protagonist not to know the truth, I'm looking forward to the story behind it~
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